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our forever.

i think i'll remember you forever like the sun lights up her sky just to see the earth breathe she never takes anything in return especially on her moon where all her love lies. i think i'll love you forever harder than the rain falls in a storm longer than all the river forms compare it to an ocean and i'll go deeper especially for you, my love, to whom all my adoration lies. and i think i'll miss you forever like the stars miss the morning skies like the trees lose her leaves in autumn like the sun waits to take a peek of how her flowers bloom in summer.
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pleasance
Published
May 28, 2014
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I compared our love to the universe. Maybe because we both loved it so much at the same time. You are my sunshine, my only sunshine.

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