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filter feeder

my mouth hung like an overwhelmed option                                      i swivel at the window facing             and stay out the entire day      in this one gawked position   amazing heat      and an ugg shy of thought                               withdrawn     in a mut of mental paralysis                                by an alcoholic system                                        on a day off the day dunks into the eve before i shift any movement     having sifted the ull                                        i mix a jar of rum and orange juice   in the open fridge door
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neth-jones
Published
Mar 13, 2024
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29/08/23

an age dying filter feeder

unk-ing out of brain

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#short#brevity#alcoholism#addiction#comedown#hungover#hangover#booze#alcohol
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