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he jumped off Golden Gate they never saw him again. cracked his skull on the pavement the boys kept kicking. blood spilled everywhere suicide note too soaked to read. he arrived to the party in a Ford Escort he left it in an ambulance.
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May 12, 2014
May 12, 2014 at 6:06 PM UTC
an iceberg of stories from the city
he jumped off Golden Gate they never saw him again. cracked his skull on the pavement the boys kept kicking. blood spilled everywhere suicide note too soaked to read. he arrived to the party in a Ford Escort he left it in an ambulance.
Four stories all based on Ernest Hermingway's Iceberg Theory (or theory of omission). This poem pieces them all together; they are different but they all have a common theme and a common technique.
simonobirek
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May 12, 2014
May 12, 2014 at 6:06 PM UTC
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