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 May 2010
A
Religion is great
Government is as well
Two rights make a wrong
 May 2010
A
We learned in pre-school
Respect other's opinions
Washington should too
5-19-2010
 May 2010
A
It's almost midnight
I stare at a glowing screen
Homework before sleep
5-18-2010
 Apr 2010
Alexa Sz
Flowers blooming...
Smooth clouds in the sky
strong winds blow them forward
 Apr 2010
DJ Thomas
Ganges drying mud
Armed hungry thirsty tide
Self-Grandiose hang dead
Money-ed bunkered islands
Generations despair, lost


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copyright©DJThomas@inbox.com 2010

Inspired by my poem 'BORN SCREAMING...' which succinctly weaved a complex story around 1950’s baby boom survivors. It’s pace, detail and depth coming from the listing parallel structures, alliteration and then the patterning in the three linked adjectives (e.g. armed-hungry-thirsty) in the last lines of the final two stanzas.
 Apr 2010
DJ Thomas
A differing beat
quickly fading doubled steps
pulling separate



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copyright©DJThomas@inbox.com 2010
 Apr 2010
Marcus Lane
The end was tranquil
Her eyes remained open wide
To mirror my tears
© Marcus Lane 2010
 Apr 2010
Marcus Lane
Status is unchanged
My empty inbox means the
Writing's on the wall
© Marcus Lane 2010
 Apr 2010
Marcus Lane
Altering my words
Just to score a few cheap points.
You're good at that game!
© Marcus Lane 2010
 Apr 2010
Marcus Lane
This door is shut fast
And I am locked behind it.
Never such freedom.

© Marcus Lane 2010
 Apr 2010
Marcus Lane
Stressed to breaking point
Mother Earth strains and crumbles
Swallowing her own


© Marcus Lane 2010
 Mar 2010
epedeped
sensate overload
left  me chasing the feeling
of that first time high....
 Mar 2010
A
Small children crying
Music, TVs, are blaring
These walls are too thin.
Written late 2009
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