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Jun 2017 · 447
a good 'un
andrew levin Jun 2017
because you are insane

the ultra sanity of what i write

attracts you
Jan 2017 · 480
if its mad
andrew levin Jan 2017
if its mad, so be it, i’m mad !
if its not
then
i’m
not
!
Sep 2016 · 949
hydra
andrew levin Sep 2016
i've been posting lately to the insane

they look normal

but to speak to them

is like untangling the gordian knot

a twisted tangled mess roping in their self identity

which can never change

apparently

like a hydra they fling their ropes around

entangling all who come near /they can

mainly themselves actually /as it happens !
Apr 2016 · 405
sewn
andrew levin Apr 2016
you think you
have
it
all
sewn up
and
everything
falls
apart
again  !
yes, i was just thinking as usual !
Nov 2015 · 440
breaking up
andrew levin Nov 2015
the

illusion

is
shattered

and

all
we

do is complain ! ?
Nov 2015 · 458
untitled
andrew levin Nov 2015
breaking up

our life together

m e m o r i e s

set apart

in a crystal snowstorm

flashing when the glass is shaken

no more to change !
Sep 2015 · 366
Untitled
andrew levin Sep 2015
there is nothing to say
or be
or
do
or
not
do
Jul 2015 · 588
dice rolled
andrew levin Jul 2015
before we were born the dice were rolled
perpetual insanity, developmental disorder .  . relative normalcy
w
h
o
k
n
o
w
s
?
the ****** of life or the balm of scented roses
w
h
o
k
n
o
w
s
?
the balm of the scented garden evaporates
the garden roars into flame
consumed beyond belief
all
we  look
for
is a
way
out
of
the pain ! ?
death knocks it's hand on our head
life opens and closes the door
what we glimpsed gives heartache
too bad the bottom has no floor !
Nov 2014 · 1.2k
orange sunset
andrew levin Nov 2014
.

the flaming orange of a sunset

i went

inside

for

a

moment

when

i
was

back
it

was

g

o

n

e

:

o

(
Aug 2014 · 471
endless palaver
andrew levin Aug 2014
scriptures, sculptures, minuets......................

the endless palaver.............................


what


goes


on


goes


on


to


the


G


R


A


V


E
Aug 2014 · 506
splitting light
andrew levin Aug 2014
 

death

its hall

of

splitting

light

a

cover

for

history
hypnagogic, in my mind when I woke up ! :o)
Aug 2013 · 1.6k
taken
andrew levin Aug 2013
another man

will make her

smile and she will look

at him with those eyes

after *** in bed

that's just the way infinity is

i guess

don't get too attached to the human

because it will be taken

from

you
Feb 2013 · 712
.
andrew levin Feb 2013
.
smiles curl
hugs congeal
blood flows
starlight bright
old poem, written a l o n g  time ago
Dec 2012 · 731
white rose petals
andrew levin Dec 2012
white

rose

petals

on

the

lawn,

i

chucked

them

there

   :

     o

         )

      one

   flower

   doesn't

    have

   many

     left
Nov 2012 · 985
rustling
andrew levin Nov 2012
a tree, a city of leaves rustling in the breeze
full version with audio

http://mueller_ranges.tripod.com/andrew/pending_poems74.html#rustling
Oct 2012 · 873
cherry petals
andrew levin Oct 2012
 

petals

blown

from

the

cherry

tree

twirling

like

bu­tterflys

in

the

evening

sun

:

   o

       )
Sep 2012 · 620
if
andrew levin Sep 2012
if
you

****

with

the

*******

you'll

get

******

won't

you



o

)

(
Sep 2012 · 610
college is failure
andrew levin Sep 2012
what no-one ever tells you

is you can learn better on the internet

why

get

in

debt

for

fools

gold?
got the above deleted which was a reply to http://hellopoetry.com/poem/college-what-no-one-ever-tells-you/

retards mortgaging their lives for worthless degrees, really the quality of american education just *****!
Aug 2012 · 1.2k
autistic
andrew levin Aug 2012
being autistic

experience

doesn't

teach

the

advice

of

others

do­esn't

teach

it's

only

the

development

of
a

theory

of

min­d

that

teaches
Aug 2012 · 863
hello poetry
andrew levin Aug 2012
so full


of


the


tender


honeyed


joyful


suicidal


sweet


­flowery


dripping


honey


sentimental


too


puking


bring

­
back


N


A


S


T


Y!
scrape a hello poet and find saccharine !

modern life i guess, not a genuine thought or sentiment anywhere !

not even plagiarism, just some sort of dull "sad sack" universe, not experienced or felt in the slightest part genuinely !

oh

how

they

ignore !
andrew levin Jul 2012
just don't mention

that

a
child

is

vaccine

damaged

the school

system

is

*******

that mobile phones affect the developing fetus

or that obesity is avoidable

or that what you eat affects your health !
oddly the next day after posting this poem, the following study was released "In-utero exposure to magnetic fields associated with increased risk of obesity in childhood"  at http://www.eurekalert.org/pub_releases/2012-07/kp-iet072612.php
there is another study showing that magnetic field exposure in utero is a factor in ADHD
Jul 2012 · 2.2k
talent and health
andrew levin Jul 2012
i


don't


know


why


talent


and


health


crucifixion


go­


together


but


they


do


:


  o


      )


         (
Jul 2012 · 524
parentage
andrew levin Jul 2012
they


never


seem


to


get


they're


not


their


children­

:

o

)

(
Jul 2012 · 762
untitled
andrew levin Jul 2012
i'm not a humanist

my


god


let


the


species


be


wiped


out


i

­
don't


give


a


**** !
andrew levin Jun 2012
ten useless *******, less than more than 10 useless ******* words : o )
well i tried : o )
Apr 2012 · 770
lies
andrew levin Apr 2012
worship

is

lies

fevered

prayers

go

nowhere

except

insanit­y

the

void

weeps

for

what

does

/does

not

reach

it

is

powerless

in

the
face

of

*******
this is a reply to http://hellopoetry.com/poem/*****-all-over-one-liner/?l=profile-activity:571964, just duplicating it because my replys seem to have a 30% deletion rate by the usual  hypocrites who can't handle either truth or contradiction

notions of ***** or being soiled are *******, but of course you have see past the usual human insanity of feelings being real !

this sentiment isnot going to go far on this board is it?
Apr 2012 · 490
frank
andrew levin Apr 2012
frank

you

don't

like

me

because

we

are

so

******

simila­r

we

can't

be

that

similar

and

be

the

same

and

you

fi­nd

it

jarring

and

so

do

i !
he (frank james davis) can't seem to handle my responses, we are not that different, both very autistic, suckers for the female and quite intelligent

he

lacks

skepticism

about

himself

tho

;

o

)

and

i

think

that's

why

i

grind

him !
Apr 2012 · 585
unrequited
andrew levin Apr 2012
life

is

unrequited

passion

so

what

is

new?
lol, not even aging saves us !
Apr 2012 · 1.6k
conceit
andrew levin Apr 2012
central to a poem


is


the


notion


of


conceit


that's


not


some


e­levated


idea


of


oneself


but


an


image


that


implies­


more
Apr 2012 · 672
a young womans poem
andrew levin Apr 2012
a


young


woman's


poem


some


subtlety


of


feeling


not­


well

expressed


no


questioning


of


veracity


or


how
­

it


lies


best !
it always seems to be the expression of some feeling/thought combination with no sense of a larger context or humour !

just grief over some loss and move onto the next thing !

is there anything harder than for a woman to laugh at herself?
Apr 2012 · 643
applause
andrew levin Apr 2012
to


the


second


rate


the


applause


is


more


important­


than


the


poem !
need i say more, those flowery eulogies that would put obituaries to shame : o )

ed. this refers to the turgid back scratching comments on the hello poetry board, but i think it applies generally   : o )
Apr 2012 · 427
what i love
andrew levin Apr 2012
about

hello

poetry

is

the

way

you

can

just

roll

into

a­n

interesting

poem

or

thought

having

no

idea

it

existed
­
before !
sometimes they have existed before ; o )
Apr 2012 · 635
a bit more
andrew levin Apr 2012
i do

expect
a bit

more

from

poetry
you can use it destructively like reinforcing mal adaptive

tendencies by

wallowing

in

comforting

emotion

or

you

can

use

it

to­

steer

you

through

the

rocky

passage

of

life

and

insigh­t !
Apr 2012 · 614
spewy
andrew levin Apr 2012
"you are my favourite!"

"what alovely and gracious reply"

these swine

too spewy to have any sort of functional real life

let

loose

the

effluent

here !
well the net is a haven for these "all feeling, no realism" types and i don't see that hello poetry is any less of a nest for them !

male

egoism

female

egoism

an

endless

blind

to

reality !
Apr 2012 · 1.7k
illusion
andrew levin Apr 2012
young

women

and

girls

writing

about

love

and

love

and

l­ove

what

completion

are

they

seeking

except

an

inroad

to­

hell

or

is

it

the

illusion

that

it's

heaven ?
what i find interesting is the very complete nature of the love but the very partial nature of its occurrence in reality, yet the hope of complete occurrence never tires : o )
Apr 2012 · 844
wordsworth
andrew levin Apr 2012
It is a beauteous Evening, calm and free;
The holy time is quiet as a Nun
Breathless with adoration; the broad sun
Is sinking down in its tranquillity;
The gentleness of heaven broods on the Sea:
Listen! the mighty Being is awake
And doth with his eternal motion make
A sound like thunder−everlastingly.
Dear Child! dear Girl! that walkest with me here,
If thou appear untouched by solemn thought,
Thy nature is not therefore less divine:
Thou liest in Abraham's ***** all the year;
And worshipp'st at the Temple's inner shrine,
God being with thee when we know it not.
“ shortly before he married mary hutchinson, wordsworth returned to france to see his former mistress annette vallon, whom he would likely have married ten years earlier had the war between france and england not separated them.

he returned to visit annette to make arrangements for her and for their child, caroline, who was now a ten-year-old girl. this poem is thought to have originated from a real moment in wordsworth's life, when he walked on the beach with the daughter he had not known for a decade. ”
Mar 2012 · 487
Untitled
andrew levin Mar 2012
evening

a

quiet

sea

looking

at

the

waves

from

behind

sw­eeping
black !


---------------


evening

a

quiet

sea

looking

at

the

w­aves

from

behind

falling

black !
a rather interesting phenomenon have i have noticed at buttons beach at ulverstone where the old stormwater drain goes out near the hydroslide, if you go out on the rocks abit or along the old drain so you can see the waves from behind when the sea is calm and the waves are small, past sunset when the light is right the waves magically become a sort of unreal/neat/mystical black as they break and sweep forward, you have to see it to know what i am talking about !
Mar 2012 · 735
the cross
andrew levin Mar 2012
lol


pilate


had


it


right !




what


is


truth ?




better than the sucky crap jesus spilled !
for those who don't know jesus never existed historically but pilate did !
the new testament is basically a political document designed to inculcate and justify subservience to and the overlordship of whatever church..........

the gospel of thomas is a better way to read jesus !
Mar 2012 · 475
love
andrew levin Mar 2012
love

is

a

reboundarying

of

self

no

wonder

it's

a

fraugh­t

process !
Mar 2012 · 440
when
andrew levin Mar 2012
when i die

i

don't

know

what

i

was

or

where

i

am

going

to !
Mar 2012 · 878
: o /
andrew levin Mar 2012
wanna see a crowd of americans

run

mention

the

words

vaccine

damage !

:

o

)

(
yeah it doesn't occur ! ever been inside a special ed class, the more severe medically injured ones, dante ain't seen nothing !
Mar 2012 · 709
Untitled
andrew levin Mar 2012
good


poetry


comes


from


fundamental


un


happiness


and­


disillusionment


with


life !
depression and hyperconnectionbetween

the emotional and thinking centers of the brain


“ over the last couple of years there has been an emerging new perspective on how depression affects the brain.


this theory has suggested a   hyperconnection  between the areas of the brain involved in emotional processing and mood change and the parts of the brain involved in thinking and concentrating. ”

http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-scotland-north-east-orkney-shetland-17429574

i am not recommending ect btw, it damages too systemically !
Mar 2012 · 579
Untitled
andrew levin Mar 2012
the problem


women


have


is


when


they


are


young


they


­are


locked


into


this


breeding


paradigm


which


doesn'­t


give


them


any


freedom


of


thought

and


when


they­


get


older


the


hormones


go


and


they

are


wrecked !
















the problem


women


have


is


when


they


are


young


they


­are


locked


into


this


breeding


paradigm


even


though
­

they


may


not


breed


and


when


they


get


older


th­e


hormones


go


and


they

are


wrecked !
not misogynist : o ) , men have their issues too like being silly egoists all their life !

what i have written immediately above illustrates quite well the difference between poetic and non poetic writing, technically that should be “lives”, but “life” compounds also the sense of a man having this issue too, that is, the sentence blurrs and combines both the sense of an individual man (perhaps me  ;o ) and men generically !
Mar 2012 · 424
Untitled
andrew levin Mar 2012
there's


always


a


million


things


to


do


i


wish


it­


wasn't


so


literally


true !


:



  o



     )



        (
Mar 2012 · 774
larry eigner - a gone
andrew levin Mar 2012
a gone, the world under the sky clouds all  winter and summer the snow descends and occupies the ground

stars fill air with abstracted wings on crystalline lines and time between the stars a broken hinge

by the garage a flagpole mainstreet 5 cats yokked the world can't hold really too many absolutes but i am shattered and another time lost

while the sea slams the wind or lags an old woman's shoe flapping on the beach

and the awning was still there
can't find it written down on the web so have transcribed it from
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SA1f4E9otRs
andrew levin Mar 2012
i'm into this

random

nature

of
problem

solving

that

is

mucking

aro­und

with

alot

of

random

guesses

before

one

comes

to

a
s­olution

if

one

comes

to
a

solution !
andrew levin Mar 2012
purposeless being here

to make naught of what we cannot make

the dream shifts

under/

over

the

horizon

the

glass

fragments glint

in

a

hundred

directions

but

one

catches

the

rainbo­w !

multi-coloured

tears

are

shed !
Mar 2012 · 753
why is everybody so dead
andrew levin Mar 2012
why is

everybody

so

dead?

blank

eyed

morons

cat

got

their

t­ongue

or

at

least

ran

away

with

it

socially

polite

to
t­he
point

of

complete

and

utter

boredom

minds

like

lavator­y

bowls

clean

and

white

with

****

in

yeah

this

great

a­spiration

of

an

intelligent

being !
"lavatory" is uk, australian and new zealand usage, or at least used to be, for what is also known as toilet
Mar 2012 · 483
these silly young women
andrew levin Mar 2012
broken dolls

how

can

love

turn

out

right

for

them?
who

is

goin­g

to

be

upset

by

the

breaking

china

but

them?
andrew levin Mar 2012
simper, spew roses, eat the toenail of the author

but

NEVER

NEVER

tell

the

truth !

— The End —