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andrew levin Mar 2012
the problem


women


have


is


when


they


are


young


they


­are


locked


into


this


breeding


paradigm


which


doesn'­t


give


them


any


freedom


of


thought

and


when


they­


get


older


the


hormones


go


and


they

are


wrecked !
















the problem


women


have


is


when


they


are


young


they


­are


locked


into


this


breeding


paradigm


even


though
­

they


may


not


breed


and


when


they


get


older


th­e


hormones


go


and


they

are


wrecked !
not misogynist : o ) , men have their issues too like being silly egoists all their life !

what i have written immediately above illustrates quite well the difference between poetic and non poetic writing, technically that should be “lives”, but “life” compounds also the sense of a man having this issue too, that is, the sentence blurrs and combines both the sense of an individual man (perhaps me  ;o ) and men generically !
andrew levin Mar 2012
there's


always


a


million


things


to


do


i


wish


it­


wasn't


so


literally


true !


:



  o



     )



        (
andrew levin Mar 2012
a gone, the world under the sky clouds all  winter and summer the snow descends and occupies the ground

stars fill air with abstracted wings on crystalline lines and time between the stars a broken hinge

by the garage a flagpole mainstreet 5 cats yokked the world can't hold really too many absolutes but i am shattered and another time lost

while the sea slams the wind or lags an old woman's shoe flapping on the beach

and the awning was still there
can't find it written down on the web so have transcribed it from
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SA1f4E9otRs
andrew levin Mar 2012
i'm into this

random

nature

of
problem

solving

that

is

mucking

aro­und

with

alot

of

random

guesses

before

one

comes

to

a
s­olution

if

one

comes

to
a

solution !
andrew levin Mar 2012
purposeless being here

to make naught of what we cannot make

the dream shifts

under/

over

the

horizon

the

glass

fragments glint

in

a

hundred

directions

but

one

catches

the

rainbo­w !

multi-coloured

tears

are

shed !
andrew levin Mar 2012
why is

everybody

so

dead?

blank

eyed

morons

cat

got

their

t­ongue

or

at

least

ran

away

with

it

socially

polite

to
t­he
point

of

complete

and

utter

boredom

minds

like

lavator­y

bowls

clean

and

white

with

****

in

yeah

this

great

a­spiration

of

an

intelligent

being !
"lavatory" is uk, australian and new zealand usage, or at least used to be, for what is also known as toilet
andrew levin Mar 2012
broken dolls

how

can

love

turn

out

right

for

them?
who

is

goin­g

to

be

upset

by

the

breaking

china

but

them?
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