I am drowning,
the oxygen is low...
The pressure is mounting,
I'm going to blow.
Falling into the darkness,
I never knew where I was going.
The clock is always ticking,
but I'm slowing with every tick.
Tick, tock, tick, tock,
t.i.c.k, t.o.c.k!
Time never stops and
we keep changing.
Drip, drip, drip
my pain is a bunch of
broken nerves
and neurons miss firing,
the dripping of my suffering
is a long drawn out space
that seems endless,
pooling at my feet
slowly reaching my head.
I'm drowning,
the oxygen is low...
My time is slowing
but time never slows.
Drip, drip, drip
my pain is a bunch of
broken nerves
and neurons miss firing,
the dripping of my suffering
is a long drawn out space
that seems endless,
pooling at my feet
slowly reaching my head.
Tick, tock, tick, tock,
t.i.c.k, t.o.c.k!
Time never stops and
we keep changing.
The clock is always ticking,
but I'm slowing with every tick.
Falling into the darkness,
I never knew where I was going.
The pressure is mounting,
I'm going to blow.
I am drowning,
the oxygen is low...
©️ 2025 By Amanda Shelton
I made this poem into a repeat because pain never leaves it just takes a vacation and comes back later. But without pain we would not be able to grow and survive. Pain warns us of danger and illnesses so we can get medical assistance and it teaches us when to run or hide. Pain can help us grow stronger and smarter too. It all depends on how you deal with it. I deal with it by writing. This is my expression, my bridge to relief from the struggles I've been through. It's always going to be there but I build bridges for security and for vacation across the bridge where I plot poems. This is my garden, and my poetic forest. Thank you for visiting. ❤️🫶🏼🫂 I truly love you all very much. I hope you are having a good day or evening. If not, I hope you feel better soon and find peace. I am sorry for your suffering. 🥺 I am going through the process too. You are not alone my lovelies. You can find the original here https://wp.me/p5noJd-2zB. I post on my blog a lot and I thought it's time to share it with you.