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Sean Hunt
Poems
Dec 2016
Surreal
Don’t you know when we embrace
We’re holding empty space
That’s just how it is
In this human race
We think it’s something else
Something that it’s not
We think we have a lover
That we haven’t got
The person in our arms
Feels so very real
Then when we try to find them
Things become surreal
There’s no one there to hold
Just some skin and hair
The person that we love
Is as empty as the air
I’ll put you on a pedestal
Bend down on one knee
Though the person I adore
I cannot even see
Like a rainbow and a phantom
You will come and go
Like a dream in the night
Like a shadow in a show
Like a promise that was broken
Like a vow never kept
Like an abandoned plan
Or an unpaid debt
Don’t you know when we embrace
We’re holding empty space
That’s just how it is
In this human race
Written by
Sean Hunt
Windermere, Cumbria
(Windermere, Cumbria)
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