Unexceptable poems on Hello Poetry

Jay Forrest Mar 2013

**** normality
**** society
And **** 'Merica
When did it become unexceptable to be different?
Oh… yeah
If your skins too dark
Or you're too short
Or too fat
You don't belong
If you don't fit the cookie cutter
Then you can sit with us

I've been doing a lot of guided writing. They will not be edited and i will post all of them as is so if they **** or make no sense bear with me it's all part of the process. The part in italics is a line from somewhere else I ripped randomly and built off of. I would love feed back on them. More pieces like this to come!!!

hello sunshine Nov 2018

You aren’t her

You deserve the world,
You have worth.
You are happy,
You are young and naive.
Believe in anyone and anything.
Santa is real.
You can love,
You are loved.
Play with your friends,
Don’t worry about a thing.
You are not her anymore,
Grades will slip,
Friends will leave,
I know it’s unexceptable.
Taking No for an answer,
Is something I never did.
Giving up,
My problems are solved.
No more friends,
***** them.
They were never good to me,
They stole my love.
Do I deserve it?
Never mind that,
The rope is mine.
I can end it.
End all of this right now!
(Now read it backwards)

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