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The water rushes over me heart beatin' like a river Water, water Rush, rush And I'm all out of shame and I've emptied my veins Father, Father Hush, hush Following immersion spiritual incursion restoration of sight brought to mind Water, water Rush, rush Wisdom, understanding knowledge notwithstanding my very thoughts had gone blind Father, Father Hush, hush Expels the enemy- dastardly dealer ensconced, encamped Water, water Rush, rush Comes the Helper- unfathomable healer reborn, revamped Father, Father Hush, hush ©Jason Cole
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May 14, 2016
May 14, 2016 at 6:47 AM UTC
Wonderfall
Here I'm rejected there I'll be condemned I'll not be excepted anyhow--slammed in my face, subjected to every form of malice-- crammed among those suspected of betrayal--- contempt raises its venomous#  head and I'm hated for the views I hold--  hemmed by envious forces-- everywhere hunted I am an innocent victim--damned and left to ideas I've constructed my own pain to consume---stamped TRAITOR* -- my only hope is to be vindicated by future generations which would have my thoughts revamped!
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Sep 13, 2018
Sep 13, 2018 at 10:44 PM UTC
ROUSSEAU'S DIARY--FROM MY EYES
We all take chances some more than others We all want what's bad for us candy, drugs, a lover(s) Why do opposites attract? Why must good always find bad? To help? To stop? To change? Why must we always want what we wish we had? Isn't it easier to take what is within our grasp? Would we stoop so low to get a free pass? Would a little hard work **** us all? We'd all rather just spend time and money at the mall Socializing, sitting on our ***** Why not go online and take a few classes Does it hurt to learn or try a little? I wish the world could be just a tad more civil
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Mar 18, 2013
Mar 18, 2013 at 12:21 PM UTC
I'm still thinking(revamped)
I don't want to seem like a barbecue **** but please won't you turn that meat! If it wasn't bad enough you put it on early that chicken just won't stand the heat Your confounding the issue by loading on bangers for the dripping fat's sure to ignite With those flames getting higher and your steaks all on fire, you know you're not doing it right Black on the outside and pink in the middle, is not how you're supposed to do chicken And even revamped your bathroom's too cramped, for all of your guests to be sick in "It's time" you declare, as you pull up a chair "is anyone ready for grub!?" But with no contemplation, I'll ditch this cremation, I'm ******* off back down the pub!
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Jul 6, 2015
Jul 6, 2015 at 9:56 AM UTC
Barbecue ****
I work at the cathedral day and night at rest times I sit looking at the daily hues from morning to the end of day the shadows in the architecture shine through The gargoyles turn from grey to a warming red and above their sentinel loyal heads the spires shine like diamonds blessed in the morning with a pure blue sky A break or two, three or four different times of the day just to watch the patterns pass in the shadows of this limestone building I worked my guts off on this building sweet Canterbury in my cathedral city revamped it's, I'm listening points and at times of day, when weather permits I do read the shadows in the architecture By Christos Andreas Kourtis aka NeonSolaris
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Sep 2, 2014
Sep 2, 2014 at 6:47 PM UTC
Shadows In Architecture
My stand is portable, affordable and neat Sits on the southwest corner of 42nd Street Can't beat my delicious, nutritious, expandable frank My dogs are divine! Now, take that to the bank! One twenty-five for a dog loaded or bare Mini-meals readied with caution and care Merciful and kind, my dogs nourish the broke Fuels children and seniors and cold 'n drunk folk I've served sages and I've served nuts My clients range from brilliant to putz Usually I keep the screwballs away But now and again I have a ****** no-good day Like the time two thugs took off with my cart They rammed it right into the Super Mart Weenies went flying and relish SPLAT! Stunned I saw my dogs were eaten by cats Two weeks down, my new stand revamped and nice Maybe those thugs wanted red beans and rice But dogs are my passion and my life’s big scheme So buy a hot dog and support someone's dream.
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Jan 4, 2014
Jan 4, 2014 at 5:02 PM UTC
Hot Dog Man
As you cuddle n **** your thumb my heart melts with joy and am glad, as you lay in my arms so helpless and innocent I find you so lovely and irresistible, all about you reminds me of me when I couldn't remember, and now I appreciate the level of love my parent have for me the joy of a child the parent glows with pride for it all children are angles and parents see their reincarnation as he grows a father relives his early days , when he neither had wisdom or memory, every mistake every attempt the dad gets to see how he came to be and his greatest urge "my son to be better than I" in my child's eye I see the innocence of the world let you my child learn, let you acknowledge , you are my strength and my wisdom. I see my future bright in you, i  find my energy revamped in you. my destiny and fate merge brightly in you And new ideas new territories i will conquer in you. my eyes and my strength bring better things in this life
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Dec 20, 2015
Dec 20, 2015 at 11:31 PM UTC
my child
anywhere u go its about what u do who u know what u have take a piece and one for the road take and take is all we do judged like a book every single day in one glance no second thoughts hardcover hollywood special editions and just for dummies rule those text book kings and things of the past replaced by sefl-help gurus with a thirst for power history books burn and dictionaries die bibles and korans wage war for deeds written in oil more precious than blood lawbooks lie with family trees while notebooks fill with pointless lives but my story is written with my sweat and tears filled with pages and pages of love and fears i dont need to be hardcovered reprinted bound up and edited forget the colors and the revamped image no motion pictures just a story on my shelf the last of them all the Paperback Boy.
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Sep 16, 2012
Sep 16, 2012 at 10:47 AM UTC
paperback boy
In a different place and a different time I'd find your smile, that pale soft face The cold hard truth is, I'd follow you down To the ends of this world, to the end of my rope I'm all for serious, I'm funny but this my dear is no joke I'd hold your hand the whole way just to hear you say you need me Where have you gone, where do you go In the nights and hours I need you the most Nobody cares and nobody knows But to me you're nothing more than a ghost I Promise I won't say a thing Just come sit, let me push you on the swing Share a laugh or two once more Stay out late, use the back door We could venture the night, brave our hardships Solve all our problems with a little hard work We can work it all out, there's no doubt about it
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Mar 11, 2013
Mar 11, 2013 at 11:55 AM UTC
Just a litte something in the making(revamped)
We used to paint oceans of sorio lillies, across the sky pouring tears of life. Merging memories of sore pasts and saw paths that revamped lost plants. Without a seed, groomed roses and blossomed fields of dying daisies daily decaying dim. Her kiss embellished wrathful storms,with red feathers of white birds drifting to the shore, of fine sand born from light zones in dark ends. Now she's a ghost, a spirit of a wild mild mind in an abyss of enraged beasts. She's alive and breaths still,but her breath passes by the trees as though another leaf carried by the wind. Is she in a coffin inside a casket buried beneath the garden of joy but only ripping despair, gloriously singing by herself?
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Feb 4, 2016
Feb 4, 2016 at 4:38 PM UTC
Her, A desired lady, a lost friend
By: Cedric McClester It wasn’t made up no it was real Can’t you see ‘em can’t you feel The ghosts of those whose last meal Was fed at Auschwitz no appeal Death by labor or by disease Or the gassed air that they breathed While the whole world was deceived By what they could not believe I hear the echoes of the dead From Auschwitz where people fed Gas ovens whose secrets are said To dot the path of human dread The air was musty the train car cramped That took ‘em to the concentration camp Before the process was revamped They were crudely housed tattooed or stamped And they were sent there both night and day One million plus from what they say Human lives wete thrown away While we all looked the other way God made us all in any case There’s no such thing as a master race That kind of thinking is out of place And must be discouraged when it’s in our face I hear the echoes of the dead From Auschwitz where people fed Gas ovens whose secrets are said To dot the path of human dread Their liberators could not believe The level of the suffering that they relieved To them it was diabolically conceived By a people who were evil or naïve How could a human being do to another The kinds of things that they discovered Then think that it wouldn’t be uncovered Ot that the evidence could be smothered God made us all in any case There’s no such thing as a master race That kind of thinking is out of place And must be discouraged when it’s in our face I hear the echoes of the dead From Auschwitz where people fed Gas ovens whose secrets are said To dot the path of human dread                             (c) Copyright 2015, Cedric McClester. All rights reserved.
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Apr 21, 2015
Apr 21, 2015 at 4:16 PM UTC
AUSCHWITZ
By: Cedric McClester It wasn’t made up no it was real Can’t you see ‘em can’t you feel The ghosts of those whose last meal Was fed at Auschwitz no appeal Death by labor or by disease Or the gassed air that they breathed While the whole world was deceived By what they could not believe I hear the echoes of the dead From Auschwitz where people fed Gas ovens whose secrets are said To dot the path of human dread The air was musty the train car cramped That took ‘em to the concentration camp Before the process was revamped They were crudely housed tattooed or stamped And they were sent there both night and day One million plus from what they say Human lives wete thrown away While we all looked the other way God made us all in any case There’s no such thing as a master race That kind of thinking is out of place And must be discouraged when it’s in our face I hear the echoes of the dead From Auschwitz where people fed Gas ovens whose secrets are said To dot the path of human dread Their liberators could not believe The level of the suffering that they relieved To them it was diabolically conceived By a people who were evil or naïve How could a human being do to another The kinds of things that they discovered Then think that it wouldn’t be uncovered Ot that the evidence could be smothered God made us all in any case There’s no such thing as a master race That kind of thinking is out of place And must be discouraged when it’s in our face I hear the echoes of the dead From Auschwitz where people fed Gas ovens whose secrets are said To dot the path of human dread                             (c) Copyright 2015, Cedric McClester. All rights reserved.
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Alone in this world, yet surrounded by friends All worried about following the latest trends But not me, I want to be free from odds and ends The best styles depend on what the media says They handpick the physically elite to place in a close-up lens All calculated deceit, if you fall behind you’ll end up in the back seat Now anyone can be elegant, employing technology to cheat Revamped appearances are now displayed on our main streets Transforming young girls views to make them feel incomplete Natural beauty is harder to come by, morphing us to an effete society Notoriety is easier to achieve, our adoration alters confidence to anxiety I now question our propriety; forced variety plagues our high society They extort and contort the public’s image to be shown on public transport Deciding who wears it the best will soon become a contact sport I fear for our culture, even the most allure now sells themselves short One day this all may change, but for now the homely get a larger sentence in court
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Feb 2, 2015
Feb 2, 2015 at 4:14 PM UTC
Media Mold
I have ridden to the peaks of emotions and I have fallen head over heels at the height of its summit The jagged edges of the flesh tearing rocks releasing me Time and time again. I bleed to death Then awaken fine to start the process once more Looking forward to the leap plummeting to my core. Jagged and torn. There's nothing like being reborn -Xin- July 12, 2013 at 11:07pm ·
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Aug 11, 2013
Aug 11, 2013 at 1:13 AM UTC
From a Friend (revamped for better flow) original 8-7-2012. pre B. Mack losing her mind.
Whom of which can I speak-- When the days are full of heat? Literary giant old and new, Revamped, and told,"To thine own self be true." Everywhere he had his ways, Found dead, on his own birthday. Upon his left ear a little ring, what did this bring? Father of Tragedy, He spoke, writhing with the lost love... Nobody knows where he goes, But at Two, we're going to The Globe.
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Apr 30, 2012
Apr 30, 2012 at 7:00 AM UTC
William Shakespeare
a brighter sun rise dawns this day and the people did sigh a sigh of relief they'll be of a disposition less gray in the halls of power a better brief the elephants now improving their lot and the people did sigh a sigh of relief those donkeys had surely lost the plot they'd been traveling the wrong path the elephants now improving their lot seems the Senate has had a blood bath so many liberals shown the exit sign they'd been traveling the wrong path Americans wanting a revamped design Washington changing its wardrobe of attire so many liberals shown the exit sign the nation's people stuck in a quagmire Washington changing its wardrobe of attire a brighter sun rise dawns this day they'll be of a disposition less gray
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Nov 5, 2014
Nov 5, 2014 at 11:56 AM UTC
Less Gray (Terzanelle Poem)
Lord of the Rings, pinning Kingpins then Kinging-kings, Mexi-can and some can't you stand a slump chance peripheral vision, no glance B-boy stance, more ***** than lance I'll battle your whole camp, blowing your speakers, Amp'd revamped, and clamp't now i'm stepping over you tramps, those silly rants, got you stamp'd for getting carried away- u can't see my BARS- this ain't Saint Patrick's day. ever since i started rapping this way, ya'll flows start'n to look like paper mache I made so much REAL, paper today, but these Cheeseheads playing keep away, holding this Green Bay Packer at Bay, they ******* up the play, like a rain delay, feeling like putting the refs, to rest, for the rest of the day.Either way, my pocket's Fannie May, and the Lambo feel Cray, so like Sandro, they go pay, top dollar, no topay. I treat BARS and money the same way- up-up and away- so quick, you'd think I'm saving the day. But i'm no HERO, I dont swing that way. Villian on scene, looking for a fight. I Wonder Women- when they see, My D.C. then left Superman all ****** for acting tight. i guess that make me a Cript -tonight.
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Sep 15, 2015
Sep 15, 2015 at 8:09 PM UTC
Freestyle 103
I was never blind to who you were, what you were at the very start. you moved like smoke in the room, the vapor you trailed behind you wasnt hard to see which gave me the first incarnation that you were no good, But the way you smoothly made your way to me, I couldnt resist the vibe you poured out. moments passed by, my vision was blurred by the kisses and the affection, and the "love" that you endlessly flashed in front of my face. my vision was foggy with your scent -- so intoxicating you came to be to me, almost like your scent is what dragged me to you in the first place. my vision was blurred with the lies you told, the deceit you dripped onto my reality making what I thought we had a fantasy. but right before I was going to open up to you, really give you me like a ******* I realized who the **** I am and wiped away my eyes, got my eye drops and saw right through you, my love. the fog clears, and there you are --- Nothing.
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Apr 20, 2016
Apr 20, 2016 at 6:38 PM UTC
blurred vision [REVAMPED]
I want us to go on a long rail trip. Longer than whatever I experienced, On the bridges over the trenches, Victory trip over mountainous terrains, Existing away from the world. My life needs to be revamped, Eerie and dangerous it has become.
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Feb 10, 2017
Feb 10, 2017 at 2:19 AM UTC
Chug Chug
Swoosh, wings glide across my quiet spot water babbles near I imagine wise owls limp along willow’s gray limbs bask among first streaks of sunlight, collect my vibes gather my pains my joys together for me send them to me revamped, wrapped with hope
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Feb 14, 2013
Feb 14, 2013 at 9:13 PM UTC
Winged Hope
For a time I grew up way too fast, I had to slow down to make memories last, Stopped seeing complex and looked to the simple, I possessed the spark I just needed the kindle, To ignite the fire of my desires, Walking thick headed on a super thin wire, Revamped my cause is what it was, Stopped playing around when I needed to pause, These days I lead a life of content, When I realized nothing is written in cement, Skeletons in my closet were found when cleaning, I don't have to find it out I create my own life meaning.
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Jun 15, 2014
Jun 15, 2014 at 11:14 PM UTC
Slowing down
maybe the tight feeling in my chest is a reminder for me to breathe even though it's difficult to do with the words you so emptily used to describe the scars on my wrist in the back of my head i didn't think i'd make it out alive there was just so much blood you had me in your jaws like a snake has a mouse but i somehow managed to slip away from you long enough to do more damage to myself than you ever could it ended up exactly the way i thought it would as beautiful as i thought you were you really were the death of me
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Nov 22, 2014
Nov 22, 2014 at 9:58 PM UTC
revamped
Ya Know It REALLY IS... !!! England’s STILL A ***** !!! Linton’s Words of Scripture... Were Those of Honest Pictures... !!! That Showed What It Is... To... Try To Live... Inna’ English Lands... When You Are BLACK... !!! Well Unlike Him... I Was Born And Raised... In A Place That CLAIMS... To Be The... “ GREAT UK “... Well Britain Or England... But Now The Ships Sinking... Because Heads DIDN'T Listen... !?! To... Linton’s CLEAR Vision... Cos’ It’s STILL A ***** !!! A Country FULL of Tricks... And Working Practises... That Makes The Masses SLAVE... To Earn Themselves A Wage... So That They Can Get A Break... From Working For Low Pay... While MP’s Pave The Way... For... CORRUPTION of The State... !!! So These Words Here Are TRUE... !!! ... England’s STILL A ***** !!! If You’re NOT IN... “ Their Crew “... !!! Bureaucrats Who Sit and Plan... How To Tax and Scam... The... Average Man... !!!! And Let’s Not Forget... About... Immigrants... !!! Like Linton Said In His Poem... They Use You... ABUSE You... Spit You Out And Then ***** You... !!! From Legal Tricks... To... Political Stings... That’s Right Like BREXIT... !?!?! Now Ain’t THAT A ***** !!! Political NONSENSE... Causing Folks PROBLEMS... !!! Because of These Wrongun’s... From BRONSONS' To JOHNSONS'... !!! NOT Linton But BORIS... !!! A Chuck With NO Norris... !!! Whose Talk Can Be HORRID... !!! So YES It’s A ***** !!!!! I’ve Just Revamped The Script... !!! From Windrush' To Brexit'... We STILL DON'T..... Fit In... When You THINK And Have Skin... That’s DARK And Marks Cards... of The... Whitest Of Hearts... !!!! UNLESS You Will FOLD... And Do As You’re Told... Like Those Good Slaves of Old... !!!!! From Being Called Lazy... We’re Still Seen As Shady... Because of Things Lately... Like Street Crime That’s CRAZY... !?! Well I Guess I’m That Baby... Whose Now Become Brainy... Who Sees That The Word... ...... “ STATELY'S “... Connected To Hades... !!!! Which Is Where ******* LIVE... !!!!! So Trust When I Say This... Linton... Made The Trip... And Explained The Sitch' Quick... Through His Truthful Lyrics... That Inspired This Script... That’s An OLD... NEW LIK' ... That I’ve... Changed Up A Bit... !!! Which Reflects On The Fact... That..... ... “ Ingland’s Still A ***** ! “...
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Sep 30, 2021
Sep 30, 2021 at 6:33 PM UTC
'Ya Know It Really Is ! (Ingland’s Still A Bitch)' ... A Poem written by Big Virge 21/7/2019
Ya Know It REALLY IS... !!! England’s STILL A ***** !!! Linton’s Words of Scripture... Were Those of Honest Pictures... !!! That Showed What It Is... To... Try To Live... Inna’ English Lands... When You Are BLACK... !!! Well Unlike Him... I Was Born And Raised... In A Place That CLAIMS... To Be The... “ GREAT UK “... Well Britain Or England... But Now The Ships Sinking... Because Heads DIDN'T Listen... !?! To... Linton’s CLEAR Vision... Cos’ It’s STILL A ***** !!! A Country FULL of Tricks... And Working Practises... That Makes The Masses SLAVE... To Earn Themselves A Wage... So That They Can Get A Break... From Working For Low Pay... While MP’s Pave The Way... For... CORRUPTION of The State... !!! So These Words Here Are TRUE... !!! ... England’s STILL A ***** !!! If You’re NOT IN... “ Their Crew “... !!! Bureaucrats Who Sit and Plan... How To Tax and Scam... The... Average Man... !!!! And Let’s Not Forget... About... Immigrants... !!! Like Linton Said In His Poem... They Use You... ABUSE You... Spit You Out And Then ***** You... !!! From Legal Tricks... To... Political Stings... That’s Right Like BREXIT... !?!?! Now Ain’t THAT A ***** !!! Political NONSENSE... Causing Folks PROBLEMS... !!! Because of These Wrongun’s... From BRONSONS' To JOHNSONS'... !!! NOT Linton But BORIS... !!! A Chuck With NO Norris... !!! Whose Talk Can Be HORRID... !!! So YES It’s A ***** !!!!! I’ve Just Revamped The Script... !!! From Windrush' To Brexit'... We STILL DON'T..... Fit In... When You THINK And Have Skin... That’s DARK And Marks Cards... of The... Whitest Of Hearts... !!!! UNLESS You Will FOLD... And Do As You’re Told... Like Those Good Slaves of Old... !!!!! From Being Called Lazy... We’re Still Seen As Shady... Because of Things Lately... Like Street Crime That’s CRAZY... !?! Well I Guess I’m That Baby... Whose Now Become Brainy... Who Sees That The Word... ...... “ STATELY'S “... Connected To Hades... !!!! Which Is Where ******* LIVE... !!!!! So Trust When I Say This... Linton... Made The Trip... And Explained The Sitch' Quick... Through His Truthful Lyrics... That Inspired This Script... That’s An OLD... NEW LIK' ... That I’ve... Changed Up A Bit... !!! Which Reflects On The Fact... That..... ... “ Ingland’s Still A ***** ! “...
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We all have a purpose Just needs to be found A life long game of hide and seek Some need to look harder than others What is your purpose? If it's too hard some will quit All I can say is stick with it What we enjoy the most could be our niche Can we choose our worth and purpose? Keep looking, but not with your eyes We all have a purpose It's only a matter of time
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Dec 1, 2012
Dec 1, 2012 at 2:00 PM UTC
Purpose(revamped)
Round and round here goes nothing I sent myself on a journey for something They say kick your legs and paddle your arms I thought this would be easier I feel like I've been drowning for years In the vast space that is my mind Thoughts fill my lungs like fluid But why do I keep opening my mouth? Now I pay the price, my thoughts submerge me I reach for help, with a snap, they desert me I think too much, and the flood gates are open But my thoughts remained kept to myself Unable to float, I'm sinking again
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Feb 27, 2013
Feb 27, 2013 at 8:55 PM UTC
I haven't learned how to swim(Revamped)
I guess maybe it's because I've left more scars than I've taken and skidded across the highways of too many broken hearts that I've never thought of myself as scarred but I have to be- I must be, car crashes leave more than just marks and I've danced through this world not-too-lightly- everything I've done has affected me some way, some how, but they don't feel like scars- even though they're mentally there, on my heart, forever; the marks she left there when she saw that green light and didn't go, or when my light was red and I dashed through- destroying everything in my path. I've been on fire millions of times. Each of them tested and refined, some of them destroyed. my engine's been upgraded, revamped, my paintjob's a horrid mess; my insurance won't cover me much longer. There's been so many flames- my oil seems to act of it's own accord- and maybe, just maybe, the scars that have been on my heart are more often burns.
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Mar 9, 2014
Mar 9, 2014 at 11:42 PM UTC
Guess the Topic (hint: scars)