The water rushes over me
heart beatin&#39; like a river

Water, water
Rush, rush

 And I&#39;m all out of shame 
and I&#39;ve emptied my veins

Father, Father
Hush, hush

Following immersion
spiritual incursion
restoration of sight brought to mind

Water, water
Rush, rush

Wisdom, understanding
knowledge notwithstanding
my very thoughts had gone blind

Father, Father
Hush, hush

Expels the enemy- dastardly dealer
ensconced, encamped

Water, water
Rush, rush

Comes the Helper- unfathomable healer
reborn, revamped

Father, Father
Hush, hush

©Jason Cole

VaporSaint

Wonderfall

Jun 4, 2026

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South-by-Southwest

Been Baptized by water , now waiting to be Baptized by the Holy Ghost .

oldpoetMK

Aside from the beautiful metaphor and substance of this poem..
The way you structured and ran the rhythm is really great!!