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"promissing" poems
Dear Death, I'm sorry I could not meet you yesterday, I was busy, things got in the way. It was looking promissing then, well, the heart attack didn't happen then things just sort of went to hell. The neighbours cat got stuck up a tree, I know it sounds like I'm making excuses, but the truth is there was only me. And there were other things, not just that. I would not have been able to ring an ambulance ****** mobile phone, the battery was flat. I stood you up, Death, but I can't be there, at everybodies beck and ****** call, the wife needed me to drive her to the mall. Look Death why don't we try again next year, I'm not going anywhere, I mean I'll still be here. 4th November 2010
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Nov 3, 2010
Nov 3, 2010 at 4:51 AM UTC
Dear Death.
At the inn Really needed salvation She cried out loud Loosing her voice There was nobody to hear her And anyway The violent rain outside Would have made it impossible For the sound to break through Even the odd monk She met today Blessing her with the holy oil Promissing to meet in heaven Cannot save her from herself Here, in the middle of nowhere She says 'welcome' To her dear demons and fears And prepares for the fight
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May 2, 2017
May 2, 2017 at 12:41 AM UTC
The girl
I sat at the workshop Two hours on scanners And milling I've been through The theory before All this new technology Is a touch of someone's genious I felt the brush in my hand And the gentle caress As it touched the surface I felt the craft in my fingers And the joy in my gut The technique... I looked over at her Known her since highschool Another lost cause There's a technician Inside her too So then what happened? We follow the same course She's my best friend My colleague And school friend We did everything Around each other She was a good technician And I, I know I was too A representative included my name In the list of promissing technicians. Then what am I doing? Granted I have nothing to regret My current job will get me closer But why the detour? Then I saw it As I looked over To one of my teachers Who had showed up For the same course If you never build up Your students To believe that they can They can indeed Achieve anything Then you will see How they get lost And hopefully found That's how you lose a talent By telling people That whatever they do It will never be good enough You do not raise fighters Because to fight You need to believe that The cause is just You need to believe That you can win. We were never taught that way. That's how you lose a talent. And maybe the trick is In the balance Of giving balanced critisism To point out the flaw And to say "You'll get the hang of it"
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Mar 17, 2016
Mar 17, 2016 at 5:28 PM UTC
To lose a talent