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Municipal Gum was written by Oodjeroo Noonecaal. Municipal Gum is about the changes in society and the tendency of people to want to control everything. Oodjeroo uses various techniques to convey this idea. At the beginning of the poem Oodjeroo is addressing the tree. This immediately creates empathy for both the tree and her people. By the last line she has emphasised this with the pronoun “us” to show that they suffer a similar fate. This poem expresses how life in Australia has changes especially for Aboriginal people. In the first half of the poem Oodjeroo is talking about how life was for her and others. It explores the changes in society and the displacement of the Aboriginal people from their land. “Whose head hung…Its hopelessness”, the author uses this as further re-iteration of the immorality of the situation and by the use of analogy comparing the tree to her people to further emphasise the shame and lack control of that the Europeans have inflicted upon her and the environment. Oodjeroo uses extended metaphor technique in the very first line of the poem ‘Hard bitumen around your feet’. This means that the gumtree has been placed in the city scape where it is suppressed and not allowed to spread out and be unique in its own way. This is clear and immanently direct link to the pain and suffering endured by the Aborigines post European settlement. Oodjeroo uses vivid language to present these ideas. For example the use of the word castrated is very effective. The connotation of the word is very demeaning. With castration often comes a sense of a loss of pride and power. The word castration is symbolic of how Oodjeroo feels the European have treated Aboriginal people and the environment. Castration also refers to the fact that what is done is done. Nothing can undo what they did and the damaged they have caused. Other symbolism includes the title “Municipal Gum”, municipal meaning community, implies that the gumtree belongs to the community. One of the vast differences between European and Aboriginal law is that Aboriginal people did not believe in the ownership of land or of animals and plants. Municipal Gum is a reference to the Europeans assumptions that everything is theirs to own and control. The rhetorical question, “O fellow citizen, What have they done to us?” is the conclusion of the implications that have been made throughout the poem. Oodjeroo, is advocating for her people and all things wronged by the controlling behaviour of the Europeans. Rhetorical questions are used to provoke thought and to stimulate a pre-determined response. “What have they done to us?” They have “castrated, broken… strapped and buckled” and ultimately changed things to a point that they cannot be fixed. In conclusion, Municipal Gum is a poem about the constrictions and change that the European invaders forced upon the Aboriginal community and the environment she believes that the Europeans have deemed themselves ever powerful and practice their power in a manner that is immoral.
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Sep 11, 2013
Sep 11, 2013 at 7:47 AM UTC
Municipal Gum
Municipal Gum was written by Oodjeroo Noonecaal. Municipal Gum is about the changes in society and the tendency of people to want to control everything. Oodjeroo uses various techniques to convey this idea. At the beginning of the poem Oodjeroo is addressing the tree. This immediately creates empathy for both the tree and her people. By the last line she has emphasised this with the pronoun “us” to show that they suffer a similar fate. This poem expresses how life in Australia has changes especially for Aboriginal people. In the first half of the poem Oodjeroo is talking about how life was for her and others. It explores the changes in society and the displacement of the Aboriginal people from their land. “Whose head hung…Its hopelessness”, the author uses this as further re-iteration of the immorality of the situation and by the use of analogy comparing the tree to her people to further emphasise the shame and lack control of that the Europeans have inflicted upon her and the environment. Oodjeroo uses extended metaphor technique in the very first line of the poem ‘Hard bitumen around your feet’. This means that the gumtree has been placed in the city scape where it is suppressed and not allowed to spread out and be unique in its own way. This is clear and immanently direct link to the pain and suffering endured by the Aborigines post European settlement. Oodjeroo uses vivid language to present these ideas. For example the use of the word castrated is very effective. The connotation of the word is very demeaning. With castration often comes a sense of a loss of pride and power. The word castration is symbolic of how Oodjeroo feels the European have treated Aboriginal people and the environment. Castration also refers to the fact that what is done is done. Nothing can undo what they did and the damaged they have caused. Other symbolism includes the title “Municipal Gum”, municipal meaning community, implies that the gumtree belongs to the community. One of the vast differences between European and Aboriginal law is that Aboriginal people did not believe in the ownership of land or of animals and plants. Municipal Gum is a reference to the Europeans assumptions that everything is theirs to own and control. The rhetorical question, “O fellow citizen, What have they done to us?” is the conclusion of the implications that have been made throughout the poem. Oodjeroo, is advocating for her people and all things wronged by the controlling behaviour of the Europeans. Rhetorical questions are used to provoke thought and to stimulate a pre-determined response. “What have they done to us?” They have “castrated, broken… strapped and buckled” and ultimately changed things to a point that they cannot be fixed. In conclusion, Municipal Gum is a poem about the constrictions and change that the European invaders forced upon the Aboriginal community and the environment she believes that the Europeans have deemed themselves ever powerful and practice their power in a manner that is immoral.
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the history of melancholia includes all of us. me, I writhe in ***** sheets while staring at blue walls and nothing. I have gotten so used to melancholia that I greet it like an old friend. I will now do 15 minutes of grieving for the lost redhead, I tell the gods. I do it and feel quite bad quite sad, then I rise CLEANSED even though nothing is solved. that's what I get for kicking religion in the *** I should have kicked the redhead in the *** where her brains and her bread and butter are at ... but, no, I've felt sad about everything: the lost redhead was just another smash in a lifelong loss ... I listen to drums on the radio now and grin. there is something wrong with me besides melancholia.
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Many times I get asked what anime is. I wear anime t-shirts, I watch it with glee, I fantasize about it and have conversations about it as well. I go to conventions, I discuss it with my friends nitpicking at strong foes, and I even supported toonami coming back. Yet this question of what anime is always makes me pause. What is anime? I always think about it and I am always unsure of it. It's almost like theaters and movies, anime has many genres such as drama, romance, and even tragedy. Yet sometimes people argue that anime is nothing more than a cartoon. I could say that cartoons are only meant for kids but anime includes that as well. I could say anime has different art styles, but the same could be said for cartoons as well. I could say anime is more Japanese oriented but anime has no limitations. People question it however the same could be said of theater. Why do people love tragedy? Why do people wish to see a girl die from cancer? Why do people wish to see a couple being put through a lot? Why do people enjoy death? Anime has many genres like theater, anime has death, tragedy, and yes even **** Do not judge anime by it's differences, do not say it's simply a cartoon. Because to some people it is their theater, their muse, their life, and their dreams and inspirations.
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Dec 21, 2014
Dec 21, 2014 at 12:59 AM UTC
Anime
I will never understand Society’s preference for love. It is made out to be Such a beautiful emotion In songs and movies. So why can’t everyone feel it? Is there no Freedom of emotion? Love is to be shared Between two emotion feeling things Right? So a man and a man can love each other. A woman and a man. A woman and a woman. What is so wrong with that? Social media is filled with same *** couples, Happily together For years upon years. So why shouldn’t they tie the knot? Do you realize that you’re making them feel less human Because they don’t have the same Privileges as straight couples. Bullying is made illegal in multiple states, Bullying includes not allowing people into You’re group. So how about we stop bullying Men that love men And women that love women. We are all equal.
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Jul 17, 2014
Jul 17, 2014 at 5:32 AM UTC
Bullying Equality
I hate everyone and everything. which is understandable of course, because I'm a teenager. and yeah, I'm bound to be positive and loving at times, because life is composed of both ups and downs. but when I go down, I hit bottom. --- and at those times in specific I want everything to disappear, and I want everyone to leave me alone alone alone. and sometimes, that includes you. --- but most times, I just wish you were there to hold my hand and bring me back to reality. because no matter how hurt and upset I am, I always love you you you.
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Sep 13, 2015
Sep 13, 2015 at 12:01 AM UTC
"everything's blurry, but the feelings are real"
: 'Its Holiday season' Here are lists of things you need teach your child at early age. . 1: Warn your girl child never to sit on anyone's laps no matter the situation including uncles. . 2: Avoid getting dressed in front of your child once ***** is 2years old. Learn to excuse yourself. . 3: If you have to hire a house-help, please kindly take them for *** screening to determine their *** status, properly interview them and make up your mind to treat them well. . 4: Never allow any adult refer to your new born as 'my wife' or 'my husband'. . 5: Never tempt your husband with your younger sister. (Else he'd say its her's and the devil's fault) . 6: Whenever your child goes out to play with friends, make sure you look for a way to find out what kind of play they played together because young people now sexually abuse themselves. . 7: Never force your child to visit any adult he or she is not comfortable with and also be observant if your child becomes too fond of a particular adult. . 8: Once a very lively child suddenly becomes withdrawn you might need to patiently ask alot of questions from your child. If you don't teach your children about *** the society will teach them the wrong values. . 9: It is always advisable you go through any new Material like cartoons you just bought for them before they start seeing it, you may Blue Movie themselves. . 10: Teach your 3 year old how to wash their private parts properly and warn them never to allow anyone touch those areas and that includes you (remember, charity begins at home and with you) 11: Once your child complains about a particular person, don't keep quiet about it Take up the case and show them you can defend them always. . Then make sure they embraces God. The bible said 'Train up a child in the way he should go, And when he is old he will not depart from it.
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Dec 8, 2015
Dec 8, 2015 at 7:00 AM UTC
*** EDUCATION FOR YOUR CHILDREN
: 'Its Holiday season' Here are lists of things you need teach your child at early age. . 1: Warn your girl child never to sit on anyone's laps no matter the situation including uncles. . 2: Avoid getting dressed in front of your child once ***** is 2years old. Learn to excuse yourself. . 3: If you have to hire a house-help, please kindly take them for *** screening to determine their *** status, properly interview them and make up your mind to treat them well. . 4: Never allow any adult refer to your new born as 'my wife' or 'my husband'. . 5: Never tempt your husband with your younger sister. (Else he'd say its her's and the devil's fault) . 6: Whenever your child goes out to play with friends, make sure you look for a way to find out what kind of play they played together because young people now sexually abuse themselves. . 7: Never force your child to visit any adult he or she is not comfortable with and also be observant if your child becomes too fond of a particular adult. . 8: Once a very lively child suddenly becomes withdrawn you might need to patiently ask alot of questions from your child. If you don't teach your children about *** the society will teach them the wrong values. . 9: It is always advisable you go through any new Material like cartoons you just bought for them before they start seeing it, you may Blue Movie themselves. . 10: Teach your 3 year old how to wash their private parts properly and warn them never to allow anyone touch those areas and that includes you (remember, charity begins at home and with you) 11: Once your child complains about a particular person, don't keep quiet about it Take up the case and show them you can defend them always. . Then make sure they embraces God. The bible said 'Train up a child in the way he should go, And when he is old he will not depart from it.
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From the BBC today, Excerpt Why does Taylor Swift write so many one-note melodies? "It's easy to get distracted by her celebrity, but Taylor Swift is a once-in-a-generation songwriter. From the very beginning, she's displayed a knack for melody and storytelling that most artists never master. Take, for example, her first US number one, OUR SONG Written for a high school talent show, it's a fairly typical tale of teenage romance until the final lines: "I grabbed a pen / And an old napkin / And I wrote down our song." That's smart, self-assured songwriting for someone who wasn't old enough to vote. Notably, the lyrics insert the musician directly into the narrative - something she developed into a tried and tested trope. But Our Song also establishes another of Taylor's trademarks: The one-note melody. Excerpt Repetitive melodies that centre around a single note are part of that appeal. They emphasise her relatability by mimicking the cadence of speech. "They emphasise her relatability by mimicking the cadence of speech." "They emphasise her relatability by mimicking the cadence of speech." "They emphasise her relatability by mimicking the cadence of speech." Rebuttal Rhyme sells because the people you are selling too can remember your lyrics. They can relate to your song but if they cannot sing it themselves putting themselves in the 'first-person perspective narrative' they cannot feel as-if they have BECOME the artist and are living that moment as they remember it. Taylor Swift sings about teenage love and angst something EVERYONE ON EARTH understands. ALL POETRY BEGAN AS RHYME IN SONG. Cadences are singing statements that confer a discipline and unity. Song acts as a catharsis. The artist shares their pain in a way that is universally understood. If you want to sell a rock, literally a pebble, you will not sell it if it doesn't look like a rock. If it doesn't do what rocks do. If it is not what people remember a rock to be like. Nor will it sell if it is just like every other rock they have ever seen. It cannot convey an emotion unless it elicits emotion. One cannot even begin to feel emotional if one cannot remember easily the past and that includes lyrics one has heard that evoked said emotional state. It is horrifying to see HOW BADLY EVERYONE INSISTS that rhyme be obliterated in exchange for an intellectual or individual perspective NOT SHARED BY THE MAJORITY OF PEOPLE. If you want to sell and make money you better start thinking about the 99% of people who are not geniuses. If your sole goal in life is to attract a genius to give you a great job because of how, "smart," they perceive you to be then fine. You are not an artist. You are an employee. "Rhyme sells because the people you are selling too can remember your lyrics." "Rhyme sells because the people you are selling too can remember your lyrics." "Rhyme sells because the people you are selling too can remember your lyrics." Thrice Times Great. ⁻ᴴᵉʳᵐᵉˢ                                            BECOME                               EVERYONE ON EARTH                ALL POETRY BEGAN AS RHYME IN SONG                       HOW BADLY EVERYONE INSISTS             NOT SHARED BY THE MAJORITY OF PEOPLE                                          HOW BAD                                       artist? or employee?
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Feb 15, 2018
Feb 15, 2018 at 10:29 AM UTC
Article: Taylor Swift and why rhyme sells,
From the BBC today, Excerpt Why does Taylor Swift write so many one-note melodies? "It's easy to get distracted by her celebrity, but Taylor Swift is a once-in-a-generation songwriter. From the very beginning, she's displayed a knack for melody and storytelling that most artists never master. Take, for example, her first US number one, OUR SONG Written for a high school talent show, it's a fairly typical tale of teenage romance until the final lines: "I grabbed a pen / And an old napkin / And I wrote down our song." That's smart, self-assured songwriting for someone who wasn't old enough to vote. Notably, the lyrics insert the musician directly into the narrative - something she developed into a tried and tested trope. But Our Song also establishes another of Taylor's trademarks: The one-note melody. Excerpt Repetitive melodies that centre around a single note are part of that appeal. They emphasise her relatability by mimicking the cadence of speech. "They emphasise her relatability by mimicking the cadence of speech." "They emphasise her relatability by mimicking the cadence of speech." "They emphasise her relatability by mimicking the cadence of speech." Rebuttal Rhyme sells because the people you are selling too can remember your lyrics. They can relate to your song but if they cannot sing it themselves putting themselves in the 'first-person perspective narrative' they cannot feel as-if they have BECOME the artist and are living that moment as they remember it. Taylor Swift sings about teenage love and angst something EVERYONE ON EARTH understands. ALL POETRY BEGAN AS RHYME IN SONG. Cadences are singing statements that confer a discipline and unity. Song acts as a catharsis. The artist shares their pain in a way that is universally understood. If you want to sell a rock, literally a pebble, you will not sell it if it doesn't look like a rock. If it doesn't do what rocks do. If it is not what people remember a rock to be like. Nor will it sell if it is just like every other rock they have ever seen. It cannot convey an emotion unless it elicits emotion. One cannot even begin to feel emotional if one cannot remember easily the past and that includes lyrics one has heard that evoked said emotional state. It is horrifying to see HOW BADLY EVERYONE INSISTS that rhyme be obliterated in exchange for an intellectual or individual perspective NOT SHARED BY THE MAJORITY OF PEOPLE. If you want to sell and make money you better start thinking about the 99% of people who are not geniuses. If your sole goal in life is to attract a genius to give you a great job because of how, "smart," they perceive you to be then fine. You are not an artist. You are an employee. "Rhyme sells because the people you are selling too can remember your lyrics." "Rhyme sells because the people you are selling too can remember your lyrics." "Rhyme sells because the people you are selling too can remember your lyrics." Thrice Times Great. ⁻ᴴᵉʳᵐᵉˢ                                            BECOME                               EVERYONE ON EARTH                ALL POETRY BEGAN AS RHYME IN SONG                       HOW BADLY EVERYONE INSISTS             NOT SHARED BY THE MAJORITY OF PEOPLE                                          HOW BAD                                       artist? or employee?
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*An upscale lounge well known, For its ambiance and specialty cocktail, Which includes live entertainment dancers, On stage, in fine detail. While a  glamorous female stood in front of the bar, With a deep sea blue martini, in her right hand, In an ice cold oversized snifter, dipped in sugar upon the rim, Where she leisurely stands. With a pink orchid, And blue twisted glow stick, placed inside her drink, Taking rhythmical steps, Side by side, in sync. Dressed in a strapless dress, slightly above her knee, Nicely fitted, in shades of purple, green and teal, Displaying a genuine soft look, With such great appeal. When a young man walked in, And gazed into her seductive dark brown eyes, Reaching out his hand, Asking her to dance, as he passed by. She was absolutely stunning, With fair complexion, short black hair, a beautiful silhouette, And a radiant smile, reliving her early days, An unbelievable night, quite difficult to forget. She appeared divine, Upon the dance floor, mainly surrounded by youth, Dancing salsa throughout the night, And mixed melodies, near the DJ booth.*
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May 4, 2014
May 4, 2014 at 3:36 AM UTC
Blue Martini
It is in my blood I can feel its presence When it’s on the verge To emit a surge, every time my heart beats An impulse, Scurrying it’s way through the crevasses of my brain. Tainting the walls of grey matter with a tendency for unpredictability, Out of my reach. I hate it I don’t want it I never asked for this I can’t slow my mind down Thoughts so fast, hit me with whiplash It’s insanity. No. I’m not insane I can’t be I’m rationale I think about how I think about things, Like it’s a cycle that never stops.. Which I guess could be my downfall My vision says it all When thoughts travel my mind In dark tunnels at times My eyes blind to the surroundings Tunnel vision that make you claustrophobic; You feel trapped When all you see at the end of the tunnel, Is the darkness of insanity But.. I’m rationale I acknowledge I have a tendency to be blind to my surroundings, How can I be blind if I can clearly see? Is life objective or subjective? I just want to understand-- You're stupidWhat was that? Felt like a surge, on the attack An impulse That voice That’s it. Unpredictability That lies, In my brain waiting to be brought to the surface With the surge of an impulse. It’s the insanity that taints me, From seeing what really is I’m not stupid, I’m a learner. Granted with the gift of analysis, But darkened by the cruel nature of impulse To taint my minds innocence I'm not scared to think about it anymore I am insane, because it’s what you make of it. Insanity grants me with the gift of perspective, Throwing a million different ones my way Ones that are positive and ones that are new Traveling at hundreds of miles And this even includes All the negative perspectives as well At the times when I don’t want to hear them. Insanity must be embraced and never repressed. Repression tells you no don’t do that, it’s wrong. When insanity isn’t embraced, it is feared. When something that’s inevitable is feared You’re no longer insane, You’ve completely lost it.
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Nov 2, 2014
Nov 2, 2014 at 2:25 AM UTC
Misjudged Insanity
It is in my blood I can feel its presence When it’s on the verge To emit a surge, every time my heart beats An impulse, Scurrying it’s way through the crevasses of my brain. Tainting the walls of grey matter with a tendency for unpredictability, Out of my reach. I hate it I don’t want it I never asked for this I can’t slow my mind down Thoughts so fast, hit me with whiplash It’s insanity. No. I’m not insane I can’t be I’m rationale I think about how I think about things, Like it’s a cycle that never stops.. Which I guess could be my downfall My vision says it all When thoughts travel my mind In dark tunnels at times My eyes blind to the surroundings Tunnel vision that make you claustrophobic; You feel trapped When all you see at the end of the tunnel, Is the darkness of insanity But.. I’m rationale I acknowledge I have a tendency to be blind to my surroundings, How can I be blind if I can clearly see? Is life objective or subjective? I just want to understand-- You're stupidWhat was that? Felt like a surge, on the attack An impulse That voice That’s it. Unpredictability That lies, In my brain waiting to be brought to the surface With the surge of an impulse. It’s the insanity that taints me, From seeing what really is I’m not stupid, I’m a learner. Granted with the gift of analysis, But darkened by the cruel nature of impulse To taint my minds innocence I'm not scared to think about it anymore I am insane, because it’s what you make of it. Insanity grants me with the gift of perspective, Throwing a million different ones my way Ones that are positive and ones that are new Traveling at hundreds of miles And this even includes All the negative perspectives as well At the times when I don’t want to hear them. Insanity must be embraced and never repressed. Repression tells you no don’t do that, it’s wrong. When insanity isn’t embraced, it is feared. When something that’s inevitable is feared You’re no longer insane, You’ve completely lost it.
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As I sit here, at the dining room table and stare over decaf coffee at the screen on my Mac my eyes are drawn, once and awhile, to the picture sitting on the buffet in the butler's pantry. Before we continue you should know that "butler's pantry" in this case means the "third bedroom" that we saw in the listing on Realtor dot com before we bought the house and that, in the usual real estate-ese, is an optimistic label at best. But I was talking about the picture. The picture sits, slightly askew, in a carved wooden bowl given to us by my wife's boss as a housewarming present. It, the bowl I mean, came with salad tongs or forks, depending on what it is that you call them, made of water buffalo horn. They sit in the bowl too and, although she'd never admit it, I know that the thought of serving salad with water buffalo horn salad forks... lets just say..... doesn't appeal to my wife. Right, the picture.... It sits in on the buffet, in the carved wooden bowl, next to another wood bowl. This one full of carved wood fruits and vegetables, which evidently, includes sugar cane. When my wife's dad moved from his house to an assisted living facility the kids, my wife, her brother and sister, took turns going down to help him move. My wife was the last and dad insisted that someone "had" to take the fruit. But, the picture.... It, and the wooden bowls full of fruit and unused salad forks, are surrounded by both faux and real glassware and placemats which all sit perched on the top of the buffet as precariously as refugees and all of their belongings on the deck and roof of an overloaded fishing boat chugging from their homeland to some place that is hopefully better. The picture... It was painted by my father-in-law and, of all the others we have in the house, is one of my favorites. It sits on the buffet, askew in the carved wooden bowl with the horn salad forks, amid polycarbonate and glass drink ware, and placemats, unframed for some reason. All of his other works came framed but this is one he did not... and did I mention that it is one of my favorites? I like his choices of frames on all of the other pictures we have, but this is just canvas, stretched over a frame, sitting in that carved African wooden bowl with those salad forks made from water buffalo horn on the buffet next to the other wood bowl full of wooden fruits and vegetables, and wooden sugar cane, in the butler's pantry.
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Jul 15, 2013
Jul 15, 2013 at 9:51 AM UTC
The Picture
As I sit here, at the dining room table and stare over decaf coffee at the screen on my Mac my eyes are drawn, once and awhile, to the picture sitting on the buffet in the butler's pantry. Before we continue you should know that "butler's pantry" in this case means the "third bedroom" that we saw in the listing on Realtor dot com before we bought the house and that, in the usual real estate-ese, is an optimistic label at best. But I was talking about the picture. The picture sits, slightly askew, in a carved wooden bowl given to us by my wife's boss as a housewarming present. It, the bowl I mean, came with salad tongs or forks, depending on what it is that you call them, made of water buffalo horn. They sit in the bowl too and, although she'd never admit it, I know that the thought of serving salad with water buffalo horn salad forks... lets just say..... doesn't appeal to my wife. Right, the picture.... It sits in on the buffet, in the carved wooden bowl, next to another wood bowl. This one full of carved wood fruits and vegetables, which evidently, includes sugar cane. When my wife's dad moved from his house to an assisted living facility the kids, my wife, her brother and sister, took turns going down to help him move. My wife was the last and dad insisted that someone "had" to take the fruit. But, the picture.... It, and the wooden bowls full of fruit and unused salad forks, are surrounded by both faux and real glassware and placemats which all sit perched on the top of the buffet as precariously as refugees and all of their belongings on the deck and roof of an overloaded fishing boat chugging from their homeland to some place that is hopefully better. The picture... It was painted by my father-in-law and, of all the others we have in the house, is one of my favorites. It sits on the buffet, askew in the carved wooden bowl with the horn salad forks, amid polycarbonate and glass drink ware, and placemats, unframed for some reason. All of his other works came framed but this is one he did not... and did I mention that it is one of my favorites? I like his choices of frames on all of the other pictures we have, but this is just canvas, stretched over a frame, sitting in that carved African wooden bowl with those salad forks made from water buffalo horn on the buffet next to the other wood bowl full of wooden fruits and vegetables, and wooden sugar cane, in the butler's pantry.
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I truly believe that one of the reasons that the US is despised and condemned world wide is because of such views on such characteristics as: honesty, integrity, independence(this includes not thinking in a collective mindset which we do as a culture, everything is apple or windows, pepsi or cola, republican or democrat, people need to think for themselves stop claiming and just be), persistence, determination, morale, empathy, tradition/heritage, learning, chivalry, discernment, and humility. Instead of utilizing and perfecting these people of this nation and similar one's have become: prideful, dependent, drive-less, imprudent/unwise, insulting, ignorant(willfully so), objective, biased, crude, mediocre, and surface oriented. In turn we have neglected the responsibilities we have of ourselves. This has resulted in physical, mental, and spiritual capacity regression on a mass scale. Most people have no idea what they are consuming in their daily dietary intake(I mean really know what all the ingredients are and what they do whether positive or negative). Most citizens have also become, literally and according to the United Nations Education Scientific and Cultural Organization, mentally incapable and completely inane as compared to even 15yrs ago. We have forgotten how to have a community to the point that neighbors don't know each other anymore. We have exchanged the truly important things in life like knowledge and wisdom for wealth and appearance. We have completely forgotten how to survive without the aid of water treatment, electricity, and useless objects. One of the worst of all things we have stopped doing, is being involved with our government; instead, we have put our trust in them without oversight, and this is why we have been losing our liberties. I believe, just like Benjamin Franklin stated, that any individual who sacrifices even one liberty for safety/security... deserves to have all of their liberties eradicated. In conclusion, it is time to return our societies to ourselves. We need to relearn the truly important things in life and start living with ourselves, each other, and nature as we must to thrive. It is on us as a people to repair what generations before us, and our generations are doing; lest, I am afraid, our children and grandchildren will inherit the same ideals and expand upon them until we regress to the point that insolence, ignorance, and imprudence is the common norm... we have already begun to accept these. Open your eyes to the truth, at first it will be painful and difficult, but than you will be set free. WE THE PEOPLE ARE RESPONSIBLE FOR OUR FUTURES AND CHILDREN'S FUTURES.
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Sep 14, 2012
Sep 14, 2012 at 12:18 AM UTC
America's Cultural Regression -- Philosophical Writing
I truly believe that one of the reasons that the US is despised and condemned world wide is because of such views on such characteristics as: honesty, integrity, independence(this includes not thinking in a collective mindset which we do as a culture, everything is apple or windows, pepsi or cola, republican or democrat, people need to think for themselves stop claiming and just be), persistence, determination, morale, empathy, tradition/heritage, learning, chivalry, discernment, and humility. Instead of utilizing and perfecting these people of this nation and similar one's have become: prideful, dependent, drive-less, imprudent/unwise, insulting, ignorant(willfully so), objective, biased, crude, mediocre, and surface oriented. In turn we have neglected the responsibilities we have of ourselves. This has resulted in physical, mental, and spiritual capacity regression on a mass scale. Most people have no idea what they are consuming in their daily dietary intake(I mean really know what all the ingredients are and what they do whether positive or negative). Most citizens have also become, literally and according to the United Nations Education Scientific and Cultural Organization, mentally incapable and completely inane as compared to even 15yrs ago. We have forgotten how to have a community to the point that neighbors don't know each other anymore. We have exchanged the truly important things in life like knowledge and wisdom for wealth and appearance. We have completely forgotten how to survive without the aid of water treatment, electricity, and useless objects. One of the worst of all things we have stopped doing, is being involved with our government; instead, we have put our trust in them without oversight, and this is why we have been losing our liberties. I believe, just like Benjamin Franklin stated, that any individual who sacrifices even one liberty for safety/security... deserves to have all of their liberties eradicated. In conclusion, it is time to return our societies to ourselves. We need to relearn the truly important things in life and start living with ourselves, each other, and nature as we must to thrive. It is on us as a people to repair what generations before us, and our generations are doing; lest, I am afraid, our children and grandchildren will inherit the same ideals and expand upon them until we regress to the point that insolence, ignorance, and imprudence is the common norm... we have already begun to accept these. Open your eyes to the truth, at first it will be painful and difficult, but than you will be set free. WE THE PEOPLE ARE RESPONSIBLE FOR OUR FUTURES AND CHILDREN'S FUTURES.
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complexity bias how you love to criticize my poems as too long and overly complex poor me, I’m no genius, don’t prosper by exploiting unrecognized simplicities, rather deconstruct the intricate complexities that I flatter myself are the me-sinews Writing is a **** temptation - we focus on the 10% that is complex and ignore the easy 90% perhaps this once I will surrender my bare bones put aside the rich, satisfying of cave diving, urban spelunking word caressing tongue verbiage rich tapestry exploring - give you the plane of plain where nestles my destiny: nesting near motionless where the couch is my kingdom and cold cereal is easily digested and there are no consequences I am a member of a discriminated-against minority we have no charismatic leader, no marchers anywhere, and government programs say hey you’re free white and twenty one plus, get the crap out of our faces,  you useless piece of rhymes with **** and includes dirt, though I shower twice a day to keep myself occupied 25 years old, a high school dropout, of course I’m white, my occupation is playing video games and making sure my supply of opioids is adequate in these great United States where I was born there are fewer jobs than none that my application survives a first glance discardation, and now my disability preempts any demand to pretend there is gainful employment in store in my future this reductio ad absurdum is a technique to expose the fallacy, ah what’s that you say no interest in hanging about, on your way out, of course, of course, we are the wrong flavor of downtrodden my life is simple - simplistic in its a chaotic entropic way, order slowly declines into disorder my rituals are a fight against slip sliding down, falling off the the Herzog continuums and the poems are desperate hand holds to prevent my going, gone under so forgive me if I tax you without possessing not the requisite taxing authority you hone in on the obvious disparities and my contradictions resenting my sending you this bill of extravagant length compose with me and a mean will be located and to sleep I go, perhaps to undress my dreams and explicate the wealthy multiples of complexity in the simplicity of a junkies life
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Feb 4, 2018
Feb 4, 2018 at 3:56 PM UTC
complexity bias of a ******
complexity bias how you love to criticize my poems as too long and overly complex poor me, I’m no genius, don’t prosper by exploiting unrecognized simplicities, rather deconstruct the intricate complexities that I flatter myself are the me-sinews Writing is a **** temptation - we focus on the 10% that is complex and ignore the easy 90% perhaps this once I will surrender my bare bones put aside the rich, satisfying of cave diving, urban spelunking word caressing tongue verbiage rich tapestry exploring - give you the plane of plain where nestles my destiny: nesting near motionless where the couch is my kingdom and cold cereal is easily digested and there are no consequences I am a member of a discriminated-against minority we have no charismatic leader, no marchers anywhere, and government programs say hey you’re free white and twenty one plus, get the crap out of our faces,  you useless piece of rhymes with **** and includes dirt, though I shower twice a day to keep myself occupied 25 years old, a high school dropout, of course I’m white, my occupation is playing video games and making sure my supply of opioids is adequate in these great United States where I was born there are fewer jobs than none that my application survives a first glance discardation, and now my disability preempts any demand to pretend there is gainful employment in store in my future this reductio ad absurdum is a technique to expose the fallacy, ah what’s that you say no interest in hanging about, on your way out, of course, of course, we are the wrong flavor of downtrodden my life is simple - simplistic in its a chaotic entropic way, order slowly declines into disorder my rituals are a fight against slip sliding down, falling off the the Herzog continuums and the poems are desperate hand holds to prevent my going, gone under so forgive me if I tax you without possessing not the requisite taxing authority you hone in on the obvious disparities and my contradictions resenting my sending you this bill of extravagant length compose with me and a mean will be located and to sleep I go, perhaps to undress my dreams and explicate the wealthy multiples of complexity in the simplicity of a junkies life
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I wanted someone that wouldn't be afraid of me. I spent twenty-one years doubting that person could ever exist. For humans are far too shallow and our complications are way too deep but I honestly believe we should not have to be alone. I believe in independence. I believe in self-reliance and I believe in self-respect. But I also believe that humans can connect on a far deeper level than just what we see. I believe there is a time and place for everything and that includes the moments we fall in love. You see, there will be days that you fill empty and lonely but you have to be there for yourself. No one is going to give you a handout unless you show them you are going to make it count. No one is going to rely on someone that cannot rely on them self. Co dependence can be beautiful but nevertheless- it is filled with even more grief. You cannot fix somebody else when you are still practicing the craft of self-love. Allow your lows to be reminders that you can lose and smile knowing that you can bounce back, too. There is nothing graceful in struggling but there is something glorious in the overcoming and believe me- you will find a way to live through it all. And then some day somebody, somewhere is going to admire the way you refuse to fall. And you will wonder how you ever let the world make you feel so small. -Andrew Durst.
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Nov 6, 2017
Nov 6, 2017 at 10:32 PM UTC
Coexist (ramblings)
A Response to Thought Catalog Number One. "She won't touch your stuff because she doesn't want to do anything" Which also includes leaving her bed before six pm meeting your friends or seeing the movie you've been begging her to see since the trailer came out last year Number Two "She'll probably forget you borrowed money from her" or to pay the bills, or your birthday or getting groceries Number Three "She's a cheap date" more than likely because she doesn't care where you go but she wants to be back in her bed the minuet she gets into your car because now her insecurities are buzzing in her ears and clawing at her throat Number Four "She probably doesn't want to meet your family" sitting in her room terrified that she's not good enough that she will never be good enough and they won't accept her Number Five "She will probably get drunk and you can have *** with her" Number Six "You can get free drugs!" she knows about her missing pain pills and antidepressants but she won't say a thing because you love her, right? it's selfish of her to think she needs those she has you. right? Number Seven "She has poor memory and a short attention span" Unaware of whether its Monday or Thursday or if she ate this week Number Eight "She won't talk that much" instead she can soak up your words and turn them against herself until they infect her insides with acidic words ugly/fat/ugly/stupid/ugly/useless/ugly/worthless Number Nine "She'll pamper you because she's sensitive" Here's the newest game you wanted I hope it makes up for me not being good enough Here's some money, go out with friends I don't want to bring you down Number Ten "It'll make you look better" She's a charity case a lost cause who lost herself but she's so lucky she found you She's like an accessory that you drag around she'll make you look perfect won't she? It's supposed to be simple. Dating the dead girl walking. besides the fact she'll bawl her eyes out every time you grab your keys or the fact you have to deal with the burden of having to hide your mother's steak knives so you can sleep in peace without worrying whether you will find her lifeless body on your bathroom floor Number ten You can romanticize the pain she goes through everyday while her hourglass hearts last grain of sand falls to the bottom but you will NEVER be able to say you were the hero.
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May 3, 2014
May 3, 2014 at 11:11 PM UTC
10 Reasons to date a Girl with Depression (A Slam Poem)
A Response to Thought Catalog Number One. "She won't touch your stuff because she doesn't want to do anything" Which also includes leaving her bed before six pm meeting your friends or seeing the movie you've been begging her to see since the trailer came out last year Number Two "She'll probably forget you borrowed money from her" or to pay the bills, or your birthday or getting groceries Number Three "She's a cheap date" more than likely because she doesn't care where you go but she wants to be back in her bed the minuet she gets into your car because now her insecurities are buzzing in her ears and clawing at her throat Number Four "She probably doesn't want to meet your family" sitting in her room terrified that she's not good enough that she will never be good enough and they won't accept her Number Five "She will probably get drunk and you can have *** with her" Number Six "You can get free drugs!" she knows about her missing pain pills and antidepressants but she won't say a thing because you love her, right? it's selfish of her to think she needs those she has you. right? Number Seven "She has poor memory and a short attention span" Unaware of whether its Monday or Thursday or if she ate this week Number Eight "She won't talk that much" instead she can soak up your words and turn them against herself until they infect her insides with acidic words ugly/fat/ugly/stupid/ugly/useless/ugly/worthless Number Nine "She'll pamper you because she's sensitive" Here's the newest game you wanted I hope it makes up for me not being good enough Here's some money, go out with friends I don't want to bring you down Number Ten "It'll make you look better" She's a charity case a lost cause who lost herself but she's so lucky she found you She's like an accessory that you drag around she'll make you look perfect won't she? It's supposed to be simple. Dating the dead girl walking. besides the fact she'll bawl her eyes out every time you grab your keys or the fact you have to deal with the burden of having to hide your mother's steak knives so you can sleep in peace without worrying whether you will find her lifeless body on your bathroom floor Number ten You can romanticize the pain she goes through everyday while her hourglass hearts last grain of sand falls to the bottom but you will NEVER be able to say you were the hero.
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Is something you called me once. Is it so bad that I thought it was- Adorable as **** I hope it's not, Because that sure would **** We use to be closer, I wish that we still were. But you and I are in- different, time-zones that is. My self confidence has lowered, Since we've become distanced. It's true Thunder Lord, Do you fear my existence? I wonder if you do. While you're up top, Being Scooby-Dooby-Doo! You know I have no clue. I'm gig- gig- giggling so hard, Right now. Who knew that this, Scrub Lord could be such a clown? I guess I knew, somewhere deep down. I feel pretty silly writing all of this now. After all you've labeld me. Which I've done to you as well. But it sure as hell wasn't easy. I wrote this kind of fast. Using memories from, The past. A past that Includes you in the cast. I hope you don't mind me, Spilling all of this out now. I just didn't know how to say- This stuff, it's kind of sacred. Like a cow is to someone who- Believes in Hinduism. Oh man, I feel like I'm crossing some lines, So I'll finish up, just give me time. But it is true, I do miss you. And I wonder, If you miss me to. I don't care about what's happened. Really, it's in the past now. And I don't go there that often. Just when I need to remember something. So tell me ol' Voli? Am I still your Annie? I am being so cheesey. Just say you'll support me. And I promise I'll carry- You.
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Dec 14, 2014
Dec 14, 2014 at 12:53 AM UTC
You Ginormous Dork
I hate everything, Forever. (Everything, dear, includes you) I want none of it, never. Give me a room without files and a page without numbers. Maybe the computer screen’s glow wouldn’t be so harsh, in the morning haze.
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Jul 1, 2014
Jul 1, 2014 at 1:38 AM UTC
Morning
The power of Averages, it means a lot if you can understand Means, a lot. Assuming a Normal Distribution, A Standard Deviation, or σ defines where about 68% of the data falls; roughly 34% above and below the Mean. Two Standard Deviations defines where a further 28% of data lies; 14% above and below 1σ and -1σ. Positive 1-Sigma is one Standard Deviation above the Mean Negative 1-Sigma is one below; The range from -2σ to 2σ includes  96% of data. The implications are astounding. Within 3 Standard Deviations, one finds 99.7% of the data; Within 4σ, 99.9%, 5σ, 99.999%, the remainder are generally outliers and other improbable results. To illustrate: Suppose we had a group of 100 people, and we wish to determine average height: If our Mean height ends up being, say, 180 cm, with a Standard Deviation of 20cm, We can suppose that of 100 people, on average, with a certain Margin of Error that is inversely proportionate to our Sample Size, or n (for sake of argument, the Probable Error, or γ, is 13.49cm) 4 are taller than 220cm 14 are between 200cm and 220cm 68 are between 160cm and 200cm 14 are from 140cm to 160cm 4 are shorter than 140cm -- Statistics is the parent of Probability; Statistics is the Art and Science of Forecast, Statistics paves the way for modern Science Statistics is a powerful weapon in the fight against Ignorance Statistics, however, are generally and intentionally misrepresented and thus misunderstood. For increasingly accurate figures, one must have a larger Sample Size and a Sample group that is a representative subgroup of the Whole *This is intentionally abused by most of the News you read or see each day on Paper and Screens alike.* If a "Statistical analysis" does not include at least Margin of Error or Probable Error, Mean (Average), Standard Deviation, and Sample Size do not take it as accurate. Depending on the source, it could even be deliberately malicious. Arm yourself with Knowledge.
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May 7, 2013
May 7, 2013 at 6:14 PM UTC
The Art and Science of Statistics
The power of Averages, it means a lot if you can understand Means, a lot. Assuming a Normal Distribution, A Standard Deviation, or σ defines where about 68% of the data falls; roughly 34% above and below the Mean. Two Standard Deviations defines where a further 28% of data lies; 14% above and below 1σ and -1σ. Positive 1-Sigma is one Standard Deviation above the Mean Negative 1-Sigma is one below; The range from -2σ to 2σ includes  96% of data. The implications are astounding. Within 3 Standard Deviations, one finds 99.7% of the data; Within 4σ, 99.9%, 5σ, 99.999%, the remainder are generally outliers and other improbable results. To illustrate: Suppose we had a group of 100 people, and we wish to determine average height: If our Mean height ends up being, say, 180 cm, with a Standard Deviation of 20cm, We can suppose that of 100 people, on average, with a certain Margin of Error that is inversely proportionate to our Sample Size, or n (for sake of argument, the Probable Error, or γ, is 13.49cm) 4 are taller than 220cm 14 are between 200cm and 220cm 68 are between 160cm and 200cm 14 are from 140cm to 160cm 4 are shorter than 140cm -- Statistics is the parent of Probability; Statistics is the Art and Science of Forecast, Statistics paves the way for modern Science Statistics is a powerful weapon in the fight against Ignorance Statistics, however, are generally and intentionally misrepresented and thus misunderstood. For increasingly accurate figures, one must have a larger Sample Size and a Sample group that is a representative subgroup of the Whole *This is intentionally abused by most of the News you read or see each day on Paper and Screens alike.* If a "Statistical analysis" does not include at least Margin of Error or Probable Error, Mean (Average), Standard Deviation, and Sample Size do not take it as accurate. Depending on the source, it could even be deliberately malicious. Arm yourself with Knowledge.
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Look, and it can't be seen. Listen, and it can't be heard. Reach, and it can't be grasped. Above, it isn't bright. Below, it isn't dark. Seamless, unnamable, it returns to the realm of nothing. Form that includes all forms, image without an image, subtle, beyond all conception. Approach it and there is no beginning; follow it and there is no end. You can't know it, but you can be it, at ease in your own life. Just realize where you come from: this is the essence of wisdom. ___ "Lao Tzu is believed to have been a Chinese philosopher (a person who seeks to answer questions about humans and their place in the universe) and the accepted author of the Tao Te Ching, the main text of Taoist thought. He is considered the father of Chinese Taoism (a philosophy that advocates living a simple life). Read more: Lao Tzu Biography - life, name, death, school, book, old, information, born, time http://www.notablebiographies.com/Ki-Lo/Lao-Tzu.html
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Nov 5, 2010
Nov 5, 2010 at 11:53 AM UTC
The Tao 14 - Look, and it can't be seen.
Roommate Wanted; Dorm includes: Kitchen,       With complete set of       appliances and a table       meant for two. Living Room,        with a coffee table , tv        and the sofa we used to        watch movies and cry on. A Bathroom,       with hot water and       lonely showers. A bedroom,       with a half empty       king sized bed And closet space      which used to house the shoes      you walked away from me in. For inquiries please call this number:
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Mar 12, 2014
Mar 12, 2014 at 2:26 AM UTC
Roommate Wanted
Hey you. Yeah, you. The one looking in the mirror and hating yourself. The one muttering your flaws to yourself. STOP bullying yourself. It is not okay to bully anyone. That includes you.
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Nov 19, 2014
Nov 19, 2014 at 4:33 PM UTC
Bullying
To Struga Festival Golden Wreath Laureates & International Bards 1986 Stand up against governments, against God. Stay irresponsible. Say only what we know & imagine. Absolutes are coercion. Change is absolute. Ordinary mind includes eternal perceptions. Observe what's vivid. Notice what you notice. Catch yourself thinking. Vividness is self-selecting. If we don't show anyone, we're free to write anything. Remember the future. Advise only yourself. Don't drink yourself to death. Two molecules clanking against each other requires an observer to become scientific data. The measuring instrument determines the appearance of the phenomenal world after Einstein. The universe is subjective. Walt Whitman celebrated Person. We Are an observer, measuring instrument, eye, subject, Person. Universe is person. Inside skull vast as outside skull. Mind is outer space. "Each on his bed spoke to himself alone, making no sound." First thought, best thought. Mind is shapely, Art is shapely. Maximum information, minimum number of syllables. Syntax condensed, sound is solid. Intense fragments of spoken idiom, best. Consonants around vowels make sense. Savor vowels, appreciate consonants. Subject is known by what she sees. Others can measure their vision by what we see. Candor ends paranoia. Kral Majales June 25, 1986 Boulder, Colorado
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Cosmopolitan Greetings
I'm always hungry even though I just ate a while ago If I go without food for 2 hours my brain works kinda slow I eat all the time, even when I'm driving I wonder how it'll be to eat when I'm sky diving But there's a particular food that I always crave And if I don't get it, I tend to misbehave It's amazing and delicious, my favorite cake I'd go to any lengths for it, no matter what the stake I'd eat it for breakfast, lunch, and dinner I'd marry a pâtissier even if he was a sinner When it comes to cake I show an utmost devotion My bucket list includes having cake by the ocean But something happened this summer, which makes me tremble in fear And now when someone says "Cake" I tend not to go near I was in Spain, and I was looking for some cake I was whining and crying; my friend ignorantly sipped her milkshake So I walked on ahead and finally found a baker I paused my music; I was listening to Chet Faker I walked over to him and shouted "I WANT CAKE" He looked at his buddies and said, "This is the one we take" The baker and Co. suddenly picked me up; I was too scared to shout I just wanted my cake and I had no idea what this was about I tried to escape but it proved to be rather hard My friend had no idea I was missing; she was looking for an SD card I didn't wanna think about what might happen, I just wanted to go home The men had brought me to an outhouse that had a ceiling shaped like a dome Then they placed me down gently, and were almost too polite I turned around once I could finally stand and couldn't believe the sight A crowd was waiting at the back, just waiting to yell "Surprise!" A man shouted: "You fools! You brought the wrong girl, she isn't even the same size" They apologized profusely, but honestly I couldn't care less I just wanted to have my cake and get away from this mess I walked back past the bakers shop and heard something that gave me déjà vu "I want cake" said a tall girl; she smiled at me, she didn't have a clue
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Jul 6, 2018
Jul 6, 2018 at 6:58 AM UTC
I Want Cake
I'm always hungry even though I just ate a while ago If I go without food for 2 hours my brain works kinda slow I eat all the time, even when I'm driving I wonder how it'll be to eat when I'm sky diving But there's a particular food that I always crave And if I don't get it, I tend to misbehave It's amazing and delicious, my favorite cake I'd go to any lengths for it, no matter what the stake I'd eat it for breakfast, lunch, and dinner I'd marry a pâtissier even if he was a sinner When it comes to cake I show an utmost devotion My bucket list includes having cake by the ocean But something happened this summer, which makes me tremble in fear And now when someone says "Cake" I tend not to go near I was in Spain, and I was looking for some cake I was whining and crying; my friend ignorantly sipped her milkshake So I walked on ahead and finally found a baker I paused my music; I was listening to Chet Faker I walked over to him and shouted "I WANT CAKE" He looked at his buddies and said, "This is the one we take" The baker and Co. suddenly picked me up; I was too scared to shout I just wanted my cake and I had no idea what this was about I tried to escape but it proved to be rather hard My friend had no idea I was missing; she was looking for an SD card I didn't wanna think about what might happen, I just wanted to go home The men had brought me to an outhouse that had a ceiling shaped like a dome Then they placed me down gently, and were almost too polite I turned around once I could finally stand and couldn't believe the sight A crowd was waiting at the back, just waiting to yell "Surprise!" A man shouted: "You fools! You brought the wrong girl, she isn't even the same size" They apologized profusely, but honestly I couldn't care less I just wanted to have my cake and get away from this mess I walked back past the bakers shop and heard something that gave me déjà vu "I want cake" said a tall girl; she smiled at me, she didn't have a clue
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We know the word. It's applied to many things. We disagree to it use. Simply, we acting the nature of being a human being. Just because siblings doesn't get along. It doesn't mean they are dysfunctional. This just the so call experts speaking. We all know doctors doesn't agree. So, how can they apply this tag dysfunctional to anyone? We could say it were a purpose of God. To see, how we adjust to our conflicts concerning love. We saw Cain and Abel have disagreement. And know how that conclusion ended. Even family that pretends to get along. Usually exposes they were fronting all along. We see this constantly in the news. Where politicians not even kin to one another? Seems to act like sisters, mothers, fathers, and brothers. And this includes aunts and uncles too. So, are they dysfunctional too? Because they see things in a different light. Experts, say it is. We common sense people just say, it's life. We not suppose to agree on everything in life. Once, a word makes it into our vocabulary. Then people starts using it. As a every day saying You dysfunctional. I'm dysfunctional. When in truth. We just being us. We know the way to love. We just refuse to show it.
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Jan 27, 2013
Jan 27, 2013 at 8:23 AM UTC
Who's Dysfunctional?