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"hyperboles" poems
Most likely to joke Most likely to balk Most likely to start a bar-fight. Most likely to laugh Most likely to pass Most likely to hold you high. Most likely to croon Most likely to croak Most likely to hear your heart. Most likely to hinder Most likely to leave Most likely to run too far.
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Jan 25, 2013
Jan 25, 2013 at 8:58 PM UTC
Superlatives for the Hyperboles I Know
The days have blended into a poetic haze of mismatched syllables, hanging participles accented with a hint of discourage. My purpose use to be therapeutic. Each rhyme I wrote was a comma in my run-on sentences. And for awhile, I could breathe. Each breath became less wheezy, uneven and strained. After I gathered enough air, I dared to speak. Me? How could I even have the audacity to think!? To my disbelief, my words didn't fall on deaf ears. The anxiety, shame, depression and fear woven into every poem made me familiar in the minds of strangers. These strangers made me feel human. With quickness that's comparable to the slickness of a parable I was ****** from a catapult into the essence of prose. However, the latency between the beginning of my literary journey and the discovery of my gift for poetry was afflicting my sensibility. I succumbed to the bullying from hyperboles and the taunting of iambic pentameter. At times I was afraid to talk to neighbors for fear of narrative structure overhearing.   Now, I am wandering in a fog though the hills of unpublished work, echoed only by the crunch of "not good enough" beneath my feet. This was therapeutic.  Now I use it to influence my movements.
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Dec 18, 2013
Dec 18, 2013 at 6:52 PM UTC
Back to the drawing board
I must write a poem symphony of synonyms hurricane of hyperboles mobocracy of metaphors floodgates in my fingers obstruct my insanity. No monsoon of carefully selected adjectives, nouns, verbs storming blank parchment running ink stores dry. Instead I simply gawk at the word-worthy world. Write poems on the seams of my skin and under my eyelids. Engrave the secrets of my crux in the stem of my brain. Cut out my own tongue. Useless in formation of my phrases, they are inconceivable to modern man. You'll never see my madness untill you examine my insides cut me open, unravel the mystery in my cold blood, Find me dead and read my lips. they will be stuck in a morbid smile
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Feb 25, 2013
Feb 25, 2013 at 11:58 PM UTC
Cut Out My Tongue
snap goes the bones and the self esteem watch it's disintegrating soul the lies and truth it holds and the physicality unfolds snap the bruises remain bold whether you can see em or not black and blue- the color purple is my camouflage snap snap goes the crackle and pop it's got the veins running on adrenaline pretending it lacks what I can do is save other people in the struggle or change the planet but I can't even help myself god ****** snap snap goes the heart **** the insults **** the compliments i just want some common sense I tried to stay strong but I wanted it all I guess just watch these London bridges f a l l snap snap goes your fingers to rhythm and flow slap goes your palms to something other than countertops at bar spots not so fast- it isn't the Beat Generation I'm convinced you live in the past snap I'll be ****** if this is forever because I have a head full of poetry yeah. **** me. I can't stop these similes and hyperboles literary insomniac snap and I'm going to open a map to snap back into reality where fear and pain reside here but one day they won't find my tracks relax and forget because Im never coming back snap.
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Jan 29, 2016
Jan 29, 2016 at 7:39 PM UTC
Snap Out of It
Let me write you a poem Between blue lines and red crosses and silly hairstyles A poem that will eloquently tell How you shone like dim stars on a pitch black beach Figuratively Full of HYPERBOLES! and synecdoches About your misaligned teeth and your roaring, cackling laugh It will drown you in allusions, In perfectly crafted hybrid adjectives That will tell How you got caught in revolving doors And how I laughed. I hope you have seen the Spolarium Because the poem will use it to denote How I knew you were fine But I never knew you'd be so huge If you haven't, We can see it together The poem will trump Poe and O'Hara and Bukowski and Neruda They will call it God's gift to Poetry Studied and deconstructed For the next few centuries It was found taped under a desk they will say And they will scour the world to find That lovely mysterious beautiful person in the poem Let me write you that poem So that when they find you Only the greatest people on this planet Will read it to you.
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May 15, 2013
May 15, 2013 at 5:30 AM UTC
The [Greatest] Poem
Verbosity A patchwork quilt that I roll roll up in Stitched with syllables Like a little phonetic sausage So deep inside you can't hear me go Dur dur dur. (insert self-deprecating quip about being a wiener) laughing track But it's cozy and neat. And if you do I'll rubix cube your dearest mind Til I'm tucked deep inside once again. And I'll softly pontificate about the genetic code and how it made your irises not quite hazel But still able to illuminate spontaneously teal, laurel, cyan, the sea And if you'll pardon my hyperboles They draw me strong as an Atlantic tide This ocean that ***** me the deepest inside Aesthetically, the contrast is startling to your skin An artist would capture the portrait therein But really, all you need to know Is they're the prettiest prettiest ******* eyes I've ever seen. And I'm sorry That when I get nervous My heart is a little effervescent My words become too efflorescent (I seek not to strangle you with King's English Shrubberies!) As you stand before me, incandescent My dread is that you're Evanescent. ... But that thing about your eyes. All you need to know. That thing about your eyes, Not to mince words But I think I'll feel that way always.
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Jan 5, 2012
Jan 5, 2012 at 8:27 PM UTC
King's English Shrubberies
To be at the highest pinnacle, mount on the pyramids of desolation, seek for sunlight until it burns you, reach for clouds, until the storm comes. To be the royalty of your universe, embrace death like a ghostly friend, provide a funeral for your own end, put six feet under, the afterlife of your qualms. To break away from dishonor, cage the angels within your borderlands, free the demon inside your core, let them out, let them die.
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Jan 15, 2014
Jan 15, 2014 at 2:14 AM UTC
A Bowl of Hyperboles (didactic poem)
I am sick of poetry— its useless, meaningless strings of words elegantly dressed in profound tailored suits of gaudy fabric.                                       Who is this who speaks against the soul—                                       ignorant and foolish, deriding the gem                                       of thoughts vibrantly propounded into motley lines of literary art? Ha! Literary art? Similes are like a bad joke, alliterations are agitating, personification ***** and, hyperboles are more horrid than death                                       Poems are not simply stanzas of well-contrived writing                                       Of fanciful sentences stretching the mind.                                       Each letter spells purpose,                                       Then in the right lighting                                       Reads entirely different                                       Yet still masterfully designed It is simplicity secreted beneath heaps of perplexity and effortless rhyme, bombastic diction contorting the most puerile of deliberations into virtuosity— two-dimensional make-up of verbiage— flinging arbitrary words and lines left              and                     right Christmas The entire concept is ludicrous.                                                              A                                                          rhyme                                                     goes deeper                                                   than its sound,                                                            and                                                    a single word                                             normally goes deeper                                          than its context suggests.                                                      A random                                               notion may not be                                       as arbitrary an idea as one                                                      primarily                                                       assumes                                                        it to be.                                       Nothing is simple about it. Roses are red Violets are blue Just like I said It’s easy to do.                                                         ******                                                         Hypocrite                                                         Misled                                                         Piece of ****                                                         Ignorant                                                         Foolish fiend                                                         Virulent                                                         Philistine                                                         Infantile                                                         Aberrant                                                         Juvenile                                                         Miscreant! True poetry at last! Stripped down to pure emotion A lovely middle finger manicured just right The quintessence of feeling etched with furious care Thought and emotion woven together to make an unlikely masterpiece And so it is discovered: the marriage of two conflicting entities can and will engender beauty.
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Dec 3, 2011
Dec 3, 2011 at 2:40 AM UTC
The Debate
I am sick of poetry— its useless, meaningless strings of words elegantly dressed in profound tailored suits of gaudy fabric.                                       Who is this who speaks against the soul—                                       ignorant and foolish, deriding the gem                                       of thoughts vibrantly propounded into motley lines of literary art? Ha! Literary art? Similes are like a bad joke, alliterations are agitating, personification ***** and, hyperboles are more horrid than death                                       Poems are not simply stanzas of well-contrived writing                                       Of fanciful sentences stretching the mind.                                       Each letter spells purpose,                                       Then in the right lighting                                       Reads entirely different                                       Yet still masterfully designed It is simplicity secreted beneath heaps of perplexity and effortless rhyme, bombastic diction contorting the most puerile of deliberations into virtuosity— two-dimensional make-up of verbiage— flinging arbitrary words and lines left              and                     right Christmas The entire concept is ludicrous.                                                              A                                                          rhyme                                                     goes deeper                                                   than its sound,                                                            and                                                    a single word                                             normally goes deeper                                          than its context suggests.                                                      A random                                               notion may not be                                       as arbitrary an idea as one                                                      primarily                                                       assumes                                                        it to be.                                       Nothing is simple about it. Roses are red Violets are blue Just like I said It’s easy to do.                                                         ******                                                         Hypocrite                                                         Misled                                                         Piece of ****                                                         Ignorant                                                         Foolish fiend                                                         Virulent                                                         Philistine                                                         Infantile                                                         Aberrant                                                         Juvenile                                                         Miscreant! True poetry at last! Stripped down to pure emotion A lovely middle finger manicured just right The quintessence of feeling etched with furious care Thought and emotion woven together to make an unlikely masterpiece And so it is discovered: the marriage of two conflicting entities can and will engender beauty.
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Belligerent- at war, designating or of a state recognized under international law as being engaged in a war. Decadence- A process, condition, or period of decline, as in morals, art, literature; deterioration, decay. Belligerent decadence, may I reproach your horrible agenda? Fore-score wasn't a play on words. These years have passed as unwillingly as we've accepted your rule. Hyperboles creating a sense of dissidence, because judging anomalies is a task better left to the proficient. Maybe now their decadent dissidence may materialize. Belligerent decadence, is it for you that sympathy now grows sour? Sour enough to please a pigs trough. A malignant canopy erected for weary heads, yet finding relief means resolution is what's being fed to hungry bureaucratic slave hands obsessing on getting more for nothing. Obsolete, ritualism has become more copied than read. Is one agonizing grin of disgruntled workers creating the back drop, for proud men raising a trophy, the emblem of monetary perplexity. Not enough make enough. So belief can die it's painful reminder, "Faith cast as dice, when no one believes there's a chance." Belligerent decadence, remind me to remind them, the people you so rally to scourge; that interpretation is not better left for your eyes, but theirs. Remind me to speak in rag tag metaphor so as to dispel the wrench clogging their system. Remind me to encourage them to explore further; beyond their machinations, so they again can see this machines engine. Maybe the clog is yours, but like every circulatory system may fall victim to stroke like conditions so shall yours. Belligerent decadence rise up fallen brethren, falling faster than the history of Columbus. How long till we see the incredible hyperbole being played out so deliberately? How long till we seethe for proof, the products of ignorant disease. How long till we find life's anathema like genius executed upon every casted ballot? The forsaken taking heed making up the norm for the moment. Empty rants, mind slowing products infect our once proud carriers with poverty, and disease. Creative incentive tossed upon the coals of cold furnaces, define all eyes and see all ears believe. Then again if you haven't given interpretive thought a chance, belligerent decadence will never vanish, but upon this battlefield, your soul will be brandished. "Belligerent Decadence!"
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Oct 27, 2018
Oct 27, 2018 at 8:44 AM UTC
Belligerent Decadence
Belligerent- at war, designating or of a state recognized under international law as being engaged in a war. Decadence- A process, condition, or period of decline, as in morals, art, literature; deterioration, decay. Belligerent decadence, may I reproach your horrible agenda? Fore-score wasn't a play on words. These years have passed as unwillingly as we've accepted your rule. Hyperboles creating a sense of dissidence, because judging anomalies is a task better left to the proficient. Maybe now their decadent dissidence may materialize. Belligerent decadence, is it for you that sympathy now grows sour? Sour enough to please a pigs trough. A malignant canopy erected for weary heads, yet finding relief means resolution is what's being fed to hungry bureaucratic slave hands obsessing on getting more for nothing. Obsolete, ritualism has become more copied than read. Is one agonizing grin of disgruntled workers creating the back drop, for proud men raising a trophy, the emblem of monetary perplexity. Not enough make enough. So belief can die it's painful reminder, "Faith cast as dice, when no one believes there's a chance." Belligerent decadence, remind me to remind them, the people you so rally to scourge; that interpretation is not better left for your eyes, but theirs. Remind me to speak in rag tag metaphor so as to dispel the wrench clogging their system. Remind me to encourage them to explore further; beyond their machinations, so they again can see this machines engine. Maybe the clog is yours, but like every circulatory system may fall victim to stroke like conditions so shall yours. Belligerent decadence rise up fallen brethren, falling faster than the history of Columbus. How long till we see the incredible hyperbole being played out so deliberately? How long till we seethe for proof, the products of ignorant disease. How long till we find life's anathema like genius executed upon every casted ballot? The forsaken taking heed making up the norm for the moment. Empty rants, mind slowing products infect our once proud carriers with poverty, and disease. Creative incentive tossed upon the coals of cold furnaces, define all eyes and see all ears believe. Then again if you haven't given interpretive thought a chance, belligerent decadence will never vanish, but upon this battlefield, your soul will be brandished. "Belligerent Decadence!"
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An unintelligible verse, Is worse than a curse. A badly worded rhyme, is a literary crime. Instead of rhyming ‘bird', With a word like curd, Some people are plain absurd, And will use lacquered. Poetry is emotion, Expressed through lines, Not word commotion, Going off like mines. The rules of grammar, Have to be in place. So please don't anger, The grammarian populace, By confusing their and there, And misusing you're and your, And using any word anywhere, And thinking your poetry is pure. Big words make not a poet, Hyperboles won't add to the meaning, So when you poeticise please know it, Short stanzas are more appealing.
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Jun 17, 2014
Jun 17, 2014 at 5:18 AM UTC
A poem on how to write a poem
a concept: you in a tux and me in a red dress that reaches my toes. we sit on the hood of your 50’s beat up chevy, drinking cheap wine straight from the bottle, speaking in metaphors and hyperboles. we kiss ‘til our senses burn and no sooner would it be one of those nights we try to stuff in the back of our heads even when we both know better than keeping cool in our own state of denial; “for without blinking an eye the moon has seen it all.”
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Jun 20, 2021
Jun 20, 2021 at 3:02 AM UTC
a concept (1)
there is an i and a you in this story and both are quite scared. this makes for an interesting plot line as the directors have been saying// just listen to them ******* rave. and the audience the !!audience!! can't wait to see what'll happen next. they have a stake in it. too. >,/,/../ the i (being me of course) is more nervous than she has ever been (the silly girl) because for the first time (in as long as she can remember) she is being treated with respect and the way she deserves to be treated. on the other side of things is the you (and of course that is the other protagonist of this lovely story the king, my frightening ****** my scary sweet my terrifying tease~ you who is stable in your beliefs yet so unsure at the same time and that worries the i in this relationship to no end. -trust- my darling is the last thing i thought i could feel for someone again (yes i understand that this might be hard to believe since the whole process of me handing over my trust to you has seemed completely flawless-- but i assure you, my sweet, that i make things look much easier than they are yet here i am trusting you …….?????!!? carefully and willingly cutting open my chest, pushing my hand through the imperfect incision, and pulling out my bruised and beaten beating heart. would you like a side of fries with that i don't deserve a sticker anymore. my tears flow too freely. they know no discipline. they need to be trained. hold back. hold back. hold back ************* -restraint- hasn't that been the key word in our discussions hasn't it been the key the k e y sassy ************ i just don't understand i'm not like that i can't do it i don't understand trick question help me understand i want a ************* sticker you're irreplaceable i got emotional …………. --i miss you a lot-- she says this and the i shuts up stares tears start flowing goodbye to the ************* sticker will the i tell me what's really going on in her ************* head >>?>> or will she continue trading her eyes in for metaphors and her mouth for hyperboles.
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Jul 12, 2013
Jul 12, 2013 at 3:06 AM UTC
from a difficult evening
there is an i and a you in this story and both are quite scared. this makes for an interesting plot line as the directors have been saying// just listen to them ******* rave. and the audience the !!audience!! can't wait to see what'll happen next. they have a stake in it. too. >,/,/../ the i (being me of course) is more nervous than she has ever been (the silly girl) because for the first time (in as long as she can remember) she is being treated with respect and the way she deserves to be treated. on the other side of things is the you (and of course that is the other protagonist of this lovely story the king, my frightening ****** my scary sweet my terrifying tease~ you who is stable in your beliefs yet so unsure at the same time and that worries the i in this relationship to no end. -trust- my darling is the last thing i thought i could feel for someone again (yes i understand that this might be hard to believe since the whole process of me handing over my trust to you has seemed completely flawless-- but i assure you, my sweet, that i make things look much easier than they are yet here i am trusting you …….?????!!? carefully and willingly cutting open my chest, pushing my hand through the imperfect incision, and pulling out my bruised and beaten beating heart. would you like a side of fries with that i don't deserve a sticker anymore. my tears flow too freely. they know no discipline. they need to be trained. hold back. hold back. hold back ************* -restraint- hasn't that been the key word in our discussions hasn't it been the key the k e y sassy ************ i just don't understand i'm not like that i can't do it i don't understand trick question help me understand i want a ************* sticker you're irreplaceable i got emotional …………. --i miss you a lot-- she says this and the i shuts up stares tears start flowing goodbye to the ************* sticker will the i tell me what's really going on in her ************* head >>?>> or will she continue trading her eyes in for metaphors and her mouth for hyperboles.
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Some people live in fantasies, Feed others non-issues and hyperboles, Like politicians in government, Phony fear campaigns, not what's meant, Target disenfranchised, that's the way, Who writes this drivel in our days? Why worry about such hyperboles? We all get ****** into fantasies....
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Apr 6, 2017
Apr 6, 2017 at 4:59 AM UTC
HYPERBOLE!
11/13/12 I don't know what I would do if I lost her I think I would start by retracing the steps she took to find herself Get to revisit all the places that she's visited to build her character Find myself in each place she found her calling Calling back memories to the rims of her eyes I want to see all the places she's seen And try to outline them with my corneas And dilate her thoughts with my pupils Try to recollect every tear that was fallen and for what reason In her palms, I want to find my self in the things she found in her palms What psalms she grazed with her fingertips Find out what fire sparked sparks in between her snapping fingertips That tipped her closer to insanity Find out who she found herself in hands held, but hearts closer than her fingertips That tipped her closer to be sane All to the first hand she ever held Her mother’s. If I ever lost her, I would find her mother. And thank her for also giving me a life Ask her what it feels like to have a daughter that’s the barren of Laughter, sanctuary, and comfort. Ask her what it feels like to have a daughter Whose made so many connections That brings strangers together with just her smile Thank her mother for building a home for me too, *** I never asked her too. “I found myself in you.” If I ever lost her… I would lastly lose myself in her poetry. Bury myself six feet deep in her journals And cover myself with her words Decipher her metaphors line by line Be engulfed in her personifications Allude myself to her smiles Become caved in her hyperboles And pump my veins with the ink she used to flood pages I want to lose myself in her notebooks and become stranded in her Poetry. Her poetry is something to remember To be retraced to find again and again. If I ever lost her, I would find her again and again In her poetry
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Dec 31, 2012
Dec 31, 2012 at 7:15 PM UTC
if I ever lost her
11/13/12 I don't know what I would do if I lost her I think I would start by retracing the steps she took to find herself Get to revisit all the places that she's visited to build her character Find myself in each place she found her calling Calling back memories to the rims of her eyes I want to see all the places she's seen And try to outline them with my corneas And dilate her thoughts with my pupils Try to recollect every tear that was fallen and for what reason In her palms, I want to find my self in the things she found in her palms What psalms she grazed with her fingertips Find out what fire sparked sparks in between her snapping fingertips That tipped her closer to insanity Find out who she found herself in hands held, but hearts closer than her fingertips That tipped her closer to be sane All to the first hand she ever held Her mother’s. If I ever lost her, I would find her mother. And thank her for also giving me a life Ask her what it feels like to have a daughter that’s the barren of Laughter, sanctuary, and comfort. Ask her what it feels like to have a daughter Whose made so many connections That brings strangers together with just her smile Thank her mother for building a home for me too, *** I never asked her too. “I found myself in you.” If I ever lost her… I would lastly lose myself in her poetry. Bury myself six feet deep in her journals And cover myself with her words Decipher her metaphors line by line Be engulfed in her personifications Allude myself to her smiles Become caved in her hyperboles And pump my veins with the ink she used to flood pages I want to lose myself in her notebooks and become stranded in her Poetry. Her poetry is something to remember To be retraced to find again and again. If I ever lost her, I would find her again and again In her poetry
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I’m locking away all my metaphors Packing up all these stupid similes. My rhymes and I are        Out. No doubt can bail me out From this decision. Blinded by illusions Of sincerity Happy hyperboles of fidelity Reality Rips my pages To shreds. My personifications are Dead. Like my underfed heart. Part of me will remain As lifeless as this page. Don’t let my pentameters Hold you back. Let my lyrics liberate you. Revel in this                                 drop Our rhyme was only ever an end stop. Here is your conclusion. Your last allusion True Because No matter what you do,                                              No girl will ever again write poems for you.
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Nov 24, 2011
Nov 24, 2011 at 12:33 PM UTC
The Last Poem
Yet with no other doubt You look further Till you are down and out But to see the same order. Time will resemble History and future, The same preamble The same feature. Time with his hyperboles, His everlasting soon His walls and holes, His appetite to tune. Time takes a long time A novel to understand, A story to rhythm and to rhyme A poem to contend. Time is the now Time will last And if you ask how You will be passed.
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Nov 19, 2012
Nov 19, 2012 at 12:34 AM UTC
A Novel Of Poems.
tell me something about you, but don't talk in metaphors. don't tell me how your eyes shine in similes, don't use hyperboles to describe the depth of your words. talk to me like a ******* ******* person. tell me you love me and hug me so tight till I beg you to stop. just be with me, please
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Oct 20, 2014
Oct 20, 2014 at 8:20 PM UTC
sorry for wondering
Colour now with an extra “oh!” as if it needs more exclamation Does it rain more, here? Do I just notice because my umbrella broke? All I brought from home was the blanket from my bed, and it doesn’t match.
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Apr 9, 2016
Apr 9, 2016 at 11:59 AM UTC
England: Three Haikus, Which Are Also Three Hyperboles
Moth ***** and rag dolls and nothing left to talk about except for how much time we spent idly and carelessly Hyperboles of how we never knew what was coming Never pondered the road ahead Just slept instead Never took the time to think Just let the facts sink right through our souls But I remember when we actually lived The memories, how they last and I remember when You held my hand and said You'd carry me through any storm Broken shards and rusty darts and nothing left to think about except for how much cash we spent idly and carelessly No remedies exist for feeling empty and alone Raised our glasses to someone we didn't care about Never took the time to hope But never thought this road would end here
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May 17, 2015
May 17, 2015 at 5:32 PM UTC
Mothballs and Rag Dolls
I didn’t know that I could feel this much. Sugar rush, I start to blush, my mouth is stuck in smile. My hands are shaking and if I’m not mistaken you’re feeling it too. Tried and true, through and through cliché upon cliché none of them will do. Love is love and I’m in love with you. Hyperboles are not beyond me, but reality is just as good. Sure I would walk a thousand miles for you and set you free, but what’s the point in saying things that will never be. Forget the would's and listen to the will's: I will love you forever and with all I have. I will do everything in my power to keep us together and make the good outweigh the bad. I will hold you when you’re hurt and take care of you the best I can. I will always be proud of you. I will hold your hand. I will never regret a single moment we are together. And in my mind your name will remain synonymous with forever.
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Oct 16, 2011
Oct 16, 2011 at 6:46 AM UTC
My Mouth is Stuck in Smile
I never did fit very well; Don't ask me why, it's hard to tell. Actually, that was a lie. I could explain the reasons why... But the story's very long And I tend to go on and on, Over explaining everything, The cause and effect each aspect brings. And so long will my tale get That you'd probably miss the point of it. But at the end of the day, all said and done I wasn't liked by anyone. Okay, I have a tendency To speak in hyperboles: Perhaps a few didn't mind My presence from time to time. But overall, in the grand scheme, I wasn't a favorite amongst the team. A little strange. A little odd. Introversion my great flaw. Or at least I believed That the problem laid in me. But only now that I have gone Have I thought that, maybe, everyone was wrong.
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Mar 1, 2016
Mar 1, 2016 at 6:06 PM UTC
Meeting Myself
Seventh Grade. I wrote about a kid.. A troubled kid with memories, memories he did dread.. Of which he seen he grandmother in her deathbed.. He didn't kno he could write, but he did because it was his only Defense in the fight.. Eighth Grade. My English teacher tried to “Harness” my talent, in the raw.. Said in me she seen no flaws.. Never forget that competition I lost to Chris, but this teacher Pushed me into competitions Of which I had no interest... Freshman Year.. I got accused of plagiarism. They Didn't believe these were my writings.. After all, What could I possibly know About the world's tragedies, poverty, or how the stars were symbolic to my thoughts and tears... after jus a mere 14 years I've spent living here? I was told to “stick to something a 14-year-old could write" because a young man my age knows nothing about how world hunger just isn't right... Sophomore Year I wrote about the young girl that had my heart... That is, until she completely ripped it apart.. So I began to change it, grew cold, wrote bout "these hoes" because love was sumthin I just didn't want no mo! Junior year I began to mature, so I wrote about life, love things of that nature... Listened in class & found new ways to write, new things like using hyperboles, or changing it up & adding Analogies.. Senior year I had no fear, at least that's wat they seen. I was focused and my eye was keen..started to learn I didn't have to cry, so I wrote about stages In my life, I learned to say goodbye, bye to the things tht made me cry, held my head high & looked to the skies.. I didn't have to run, I learned I could be Fighter.. I learned by looking bak at the Evolutions of a young writer...
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Aug 8, 2014
Aug 8, 2014 at 5:05 AM UTC
Evolution of a young Writer
Seventh Grade. I wrote about a kid.. A troubled kid with memories, memories he did dread.. Of which he seen he grandmother in her deathbed.. He didn't kno he could write, but he did because it was his only Defense in the fight.. Eighth Grade. My English teacher tried to “Harness” my talent, in the raw.. Said in me she seen no flaws.. Never forget that competition I lost to Chris, but this teacher Pushed me into competitions Of which I had no interest... Freshman Year.. I got accused of plagiarism. They Didn't believe these were my writings.. After all, What could I possibly know About the world's tragedies, poverty, or how the stars were symbolic to my thoughts and tears... after jus a mere 14 years I've spent living here? I was told to “stick to something a 14-year-old could write" because a young man my age knows nothing about how world hunger just isn't right... Sophomore Year I wrote about the young girl that had my heart... That is, until she completely ripped it apart.. So I began to change it, grew cold, wrote bout "these hoes" because love was sumthin I just didn't want no mo! Junior year I began to mature, so I wrote about life, love things of that nature... Listened in class & found new ways to write, new things like using hyperboles, or changing it up & adding Analogies.. Senior year I had no fear, at least that's wat they seen. I was focused and my eye was keen..started to learn I didn't have to cry, so I wrote about stages In my life, I learned to say goodbye, bye to the things tht made me cry, held my head high & looked to the skies.. I didn't have to run, I learned I could be Fighter.. I learned by looking bak at the Evolutions of a young writer...
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I fell asleep whispering your name and woke doing the same Have you choked on the sun? I am sketching needy hearts into my hands and rescuing dreams with tea leaves Hopeful, wanting, hoping, wantful Mountains converge and our lips are so far apart Perhaps, this time, they are real wounds disguised as fleshy hyperboles Written about restlessly, melted candles with congealed memory resting on the desk The spinning cups on the table; that is us, dear, that is us -c.j.
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May 4, 2015
May 4, 2015 at 2:33 PM UTC
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It's funny. The way I feel when I see fresh line paper. Untouched and calling to me. I love it. So many possiblilities. So many beautiful things to be written. What's funnier is that when I get a new notebook, it sits there for weeks. And so it stays untouched. The funniest thing is I love to write and get things out so I can look at them in proof that these words exist. In some way. Some form. I don't know why it's so difficult. I know enough metaphors and hyperboles. All the contents to make my writing swell. Readable. But I honestly think what throws me off is that no one is reading. No one is connecting with my writings like I do to Chibosky and O'Hara. No one is waiting to love my next chapter because they haven't even seen the first. I am uninspired with endless suroundings of inspiration. And no one falls in love with a bore.
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Jul 13, 2017
Jul 13, 2017 at 5:57 PM UTC
Journal Entry : The Unrelatable Bore