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joshua-quinones
joshua-quinones
American I am a nineteen-year-old from Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. You and I are so alike. It's spooky.
I am sick of poetry— its useless, meaningless strings of words elegantly dressed in profound tailored suits of gaudy fabric.                                       Who is this who speaks against the soul—                                       ignorant and foolish, deriding the gem                                       of thoughts vibrantly propounded into motley lines of literary art? Ha! Literary art? Similes are like a bad joke, alliterations are agitating, personification ***** and, hyperboles are more horrid than death                                       Poems are not simply stanzas of well-contrived writing                                       Of fanciful sentences stretching the mind.                                       Each letter spells purpose,                                       Then in the right lighting                                       Reads entirely different                                       Yet still masterfully designed It is simplicity secreted beneath heaps of perplexity and effortless rhyme, bombastic diction contorting the most puerile of deliberations into virtuosity— two-dimensional make-up of verbiage— flinging arbitrary words and lines left              and                     right Christmas The entire concept is ludicrous.                                                              A                                                          rhyme                                                     goes deeper                                                   than its sound,                                                            and                                                    a single word                                             normally goes deeper                                          than its context suggests.                                                      A random                                               notion may not be                                       as arbitrary an idea as one                                                      primarily                                                       assumes                                                        it to be.                                       Nothing is simple about it. Roses are red Violets are blue Just like I said It’s easy to do.                                                         ******                                                         Hypocrite                                                         Misled                                                         Piece of ****                                                         Ignorant                                                         Foolish fiend                                                         Virulent                                                         Philistine                                                         Infantile                                                         Aberrant                                                         Juvenile                                                         Miscreant! True poetry at last! Stripped down to pure emotion A lovely middle finger manicured just right The quintessence of feeling etched with furious care Thought and emotion woven together to make an unlikely masterpiece And so it is discovered: the marriage of two conflicting entities can and will engender beauty.
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Dec 3, 2011
Dec 3, 2011 at 2:40 AM UTC
The Debate
I am sick of poetry— its useless, meaningless strings of words elegantly dressed in profound tailored suits of gaudy fabric.                                       Who is this who speaks against the soul—                                       ignorant and foolish, deriding the gem                                       of thoughts vibrantly propounded into motley lines of literary art? Ha! Literary art? Similes are like a bad joke, alliterations are agitating, personification ***** and, hyperboles are more horrid than death                                       Poems are not simply stanzas of well-contrived writing                                       Of fanciful sentences stretching the mind.                                       Each letter spells purpose,                                       Then in the right lighting                                       Reads entirely different                                       Yet still masterfully designed It is simplicity secreted beneath heaps of perplexity and effortless rhyme, bombastic diction contorting the most puerile of deliberations into virtuosity— two-dimensional make-up of verbiage— flinging arbitrary words and lines left              and                     right Christmas The entire concept is ludicrous.                                                              A                                                          rhyme                                                     goes deeper                                                   than its sound,                                                            and                                                    a single word                                             normally goes deeper                                          than its context suggests.                                                      A random                                               notion may not be                                       as arbitrary an idea as one                                                      primarily                                                       assumes                                                        it to be.                                       Nothing is simple about it. Roses are red Violets are blue Just like I said It’s easy to do.                                                         ******                                                         Hypocrite                                                         Misled                                                         Piece of ****                                                         Ignorant                                                         Foolish fiend                                                         Virulent                                                         Philistine                                                         Infantile                                                         Aberrant                                                         Juvenile                                                         Miscreant! True poetry at last! Stripped down to pure emotion A lovely middle finger manicured just right The quintessence of feeling etched with furious care Thought and emotion woven together to make an unlikely masterpiece And so it is discovered: the marriage of two conflicting entities can and will engender beauty.
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I like the^ way the "Q" looks in my name. It's beautiful because it's here And nowhere else will ever be-- Isolated in a corner of this twenty-first century universe, As are we.
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Nov 29, 2011
Nov 29, 2011 at 6:54 PM UTC
Because of Stumbleupon
Three back and second from the left: my home for period six, a desk more scuffed and scratched than its parallel, footprint littered tiles. Here, three quarters of an hour is a day for every minute, where the name of the month is Algebra II, and the year: 2009 multiplied by the square root of x minus pi. I have a front row seat to a bird’s eye view of Josh’s back. It is a russet landscape of rolling creases, the ever changing dunes of the Sahara. Tomorrow is Saint Patrick’s Day (God bless the Irish, drowning it all in liquid ignorance), and I hope to muffle the jaded sighs; the irritating pinches; the variables with a lush and verdant mountain range subsiding to grassy plains as Josh hunches—listening intently to his eraser—closer to his desk (two back and second from the left) to write the value of y.
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Nov 29, 2011
Nov 29, 2011 at 6:43 PM UTC
Discounting
H e is fused and used by lust and longing, A nointed with insensate stains of scarlet sin— M aking nations—, boring bleeding pits belonging M ore to demons than progressive nails that dwell in E very aspiration of the affluence loving kings and R ulers, who in due course find that they’d been S tripped of scruples as he led their hands.
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Nov 29, 2011
Nov 29, 2011 at 6:19 AM UTC
Hammers
It rained a lot that June, and July, and August, but mostly June; probably no more than any other start of summer, or middle, or end. But this time I was there to feel it; to hear it; to smell it, and to watch it from a splintery chestnut bench beneath the sheltering arms of Blueberry. It was an eyelid-drooping-day (that day we arrived), and I remember well the syrupy spread of hazy heat o’er that frog polluted lake (or pond) and the perspiration, all but dripping from every spruce (or hemlock). “And this,” David said, “is the Barn.” Cracked and shaky it stood like a dusty, weathered book, unwanted, tossed into the woods. “Here stay the pigs and the horses.” “And this,” Daniel said, “is the animal pen.” Where goats and sheep of black and white roved their cells with passive acceptance, and puppies pawed and nipped at each other’s ears, and ducks awaited the arrival of a hungry fox (that blasted, blasted fox) And then the Taj Mahal like a jewel protruding from the forest’s earthy ***** sporting its sparkling bathroom stretching on as a football field, complete with stadium seats of the finest porcelain. Through the burning day we rambled, every inhale, a different experience— for me: aromas of the new to someday fashion potent memories, for them: a blissful return. Like coming home (as in fact it was). And though it had a night, that day could run forever on a thin white track picked freshly off the stack, but it won’t for it was but the first domino and maybe even the one that is blank on both sides. Lazily we fell as if onto the moon through mornings of sluggish scrubbing, afternoons of anything, anything at all, and bare-chest-bonfire nights. And that rubber ball loving no one like it did Philip. With solid swings; fantastic flourishes his hand was as God’s— directing the perilous orbit with ease and the care of a diamond cutter. And so it was us, the four: I, the brothers, and the ruler of the tethered pole conquering seven foot ping pong tables and seven acre deer fences and mountains. So passed weeks, and we were diminished to a trio for David had stepped off of the continent to the land of the “highest” religion, but we didn’t miss a beat and plowed through month’s end, ridding our bodies of water through nothing but sweat. And we held every moment for ransom forcing the next to give us better so by sunset we were rich as kings, and then Robin Hood would slip out of the woods and rob us blind ‘til we awoke and stole it all back. So came July, trotting in with bloated pride upon his mighty steed of white and red and blue, and us: riding cheerfully behind. It was a splendid night on moon-streaked shores where once again we fell to one less than three, and Daniel with his ancient mandolin, and I with hearty laughter played the night a song more lovely even than those steady, falling waves under bottle rocket stars. Then celebration folded as peace made way for mighty conqueror’s return, and we paraded through the streets (gravel strewn, and dusty clouded), four flags raised high on their posts once again. Our arrival was rejoiced and met with days of games and feasting, and we embraced our loyal subjects and friends and family and bathed in bliss until our skin wrinkled. The festivities were a glorious potpourri of doctor ball and bombardment, frisbee goal and son of prisoner’s base, but one kicked dust in all of there faces and was known to only us. The most dangerous game, in expansive fields of ferns and fiery thorns and rivers of knotted rhododendrons was played, and we were darting swallows, prancing fawns, and stealthy owls hunters and hunted wielding broken hockey sticks. Our war wounds burned when merged with the salty grime of humidity and blood and ravenous gnats. Gritting our teeth, we brandished our staves, Hacking through brush, towards survival. Each quivering breath— an alarm -to prey or predator- ‘til we discovered it was just our own, and then a snapping twig would bulge our eyes and wretch our heads to put us right back on our guard. And when the chase was on it was a race against the beating of our hearts (whose footsteps may have ran a mile in a minute). With flailing arms, wildly we sprinted grateful to the wind for tending to our wounds. And it always came down to three: two to make the wolf against one to make the timid hare, and our brilliant, clashing swordplay out-rang the tick of the clock until our arms were merely crutches held firm against our quavering knees. Hungry, weary, we returned to eat our fill and drink nearly twenty glasses of water, and Nate: his nine cups of tea, and Sarah: her mug, larger than the coffee *** itself, and Rhodan: the entire pond for his sweat-rag had ****** him bone dry. We sat impatiently conversing through our grinning teeth who yearned to navigate the textures of the awaited food. And then it arrived, shoved out onto ebony countertops, accompanied by salt and pepper. We downed every morsel in a single, hour-long gulp, then cursed our gluttonous guts for expanding far beyond their boundaries and sat for walking was as thin a hope as eating dessert. Rhodan then reached his charcoal hand and swiped the salt from where it had static stood: beneath the feet of its dark companion. I watched in wonder as the dropped container swayed and swayed— a drunkard with his shoes nailed firmly to the ground—, then righted itself with a final shake. We all declared it simple and stacked the salt atop the dusky survivor. Swipe after swipe, we beat that pepper ****** and left the pale mineral to gravity’s mercy, rebuilding and razing again and again our cookies n’ cream totem pole, but not a soul prevailed. Finally, Rhodan interrupted our failures, and between squeaking giggles voiced, “Well, you can’t do it that way!” and gently helped the milky shaker to its feet and retrieved the other battered building block. “You see,” he said while delicately setting his stage “the pepper must always be on top.” With a blink he swept his hand across the table rendering the black bottle dizzy but securely parked in its place. “It’s the only one that can land on its feet.” Amazed, we tried again, of course and succeeded for the most part, both perplexed and delighted— a combination that is a magician’s best friend. Although, Rhodan was no magician, just a giddy boy who understood simple physics and lived for moments where he could explain his confused and jumbled symbolism (the kind that you know you could discover if you searched for half of a Summer). Then August Where time, not at all anxious to win, slowed tremendously on the homestretch. Every day that passed was a cloud who emptied all of its contents before waving goodbye. The water slowed our falling bodies even more (as water tends to do), and David with his quiet disposition sung the loudest, danced the wildest at waning firesides, and soon we all began to wish that we would never land. And as the ground rushed ever nearer we made our final mark on brim of mighty mountain whose shadow had generously cooled us from the sun all Summer. And the skies leased a stronger storm than any we had ever beheld, and gazing from that towering peak into the face of midday’s cloud, we thanked God for not dropping us as hard as he did that rain. And now, thinking back, I would say it rained more in August than in June for that single afternoon of thunder shattered skies must have drowned the earth a thousand times over and then some. And when we made our dripping descent, I heard the echo of a gleeful voice revealing the secret, and I knew then that we were pepper, that we would land feet first so as to leap straight up again. That we would soar from the chalky flats of that pallid moon to discover planets of lower gravity and more rain and greener forests and higher towers.
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Nov 29, 2011
Nov 29, 2011 at 6:15 AM UTC
Salt and Pepper Towers
It rained a lot that June, and July, and August, but mostly June; probably no more than any other start of summer, or middle, or end. But this time I was there to feel it; to hear it; to smell it, and to watch it from a splintery chestnut bench beneath the sheltering arms of Blueberry. It was an eyelid-drooping-day (that day we arrived), and I remember well the syrupy spread of hazy heat o’er that frog polluted lake (or pond) and the perspiration, all but dripping from every spruce (or hemlock). “And this,” David said, “is the Barn.” Cracked and shaky it stood like a dusty, weathered book, unwanted, tossed into the woods. “Here stay the pigs and the horses.” “And this,” Daniel said, “is the animal pen.” Where goats and sheep of black and white roved their cells with passive acceptance, and puppies pawed and nipped at each other’s ears, and ducks awaited the arrival of a hungry fox (that blasted, blasted fox) And then the Taj Mahal like a jewel protruding from the forest’s earthy ***** sporting its sparkling bathroom stretching on as a football field, complete with stadium seats of the finest porcelain. Through the burning day we rambled, every inhale, a different experience— for me: aromas of the new to someday fashion potent memories, for them: a blissful return. Like coming home (as in fact it was). And though it had a night, that day could run forever on a thin white track picked freshly off the stack, but it won’t for it was but the first domino and maybe even the one that is blank on both sides. Lazily we fell as if onto the moon through mornings of sluggish scrubbing, afternoons of anything, anything at all, and bare-chest-bonfire nights. And that rubber ball loving no one like it did Philip. With solid swings; fantastic flourishes his hand was as God’s— directing the perilous orbit with ease and the care of a diamond cutter. And so it was us, the four: I, the brothers, and the ruler of the tethered pole conquering seven foot ping pong tables and seven acre deer fences and mountains. So passed weeks, and we were diminished to a trio for David had stepped off of the continent to the land of the “highest” religion, but we didn’t miss a beat and plowed through month’s end, ridding our bodies of water through nothing but sweat. And we held every moment for ransom forcing the next to give us better so by sunset we were rich as kings, and then Robin Hood would slip out of the woods and rob us blind ‘til we awoke and stole it all back. So came July, trotting in with bloated pride upon his mighty steed of white and red and blue, and us: riding cheerfully behind. It was a splendid night on moon-streaked shores where once again we fell to one less than three, and Daniel with his ancient mandolin, and I with hearty laughter played the night a song more lovely even than those steady, falling waves under bottle rocket stars. Then celebration folded as peace made way for mighty conqueror’s return, and we paraded through the streets (gravel strewn, and dusty clouded), four flags raised high on their posts once again. Our arrival was rejoiced and met with days of games and feasting, and we embraced our loyal subjects and friends and family and bathed in bliss until our skin wrinkled. The festivities were a glorious potpourri of doctor ball and bombardment, frisbee goal and son of prisoner’s base, but one kicked dust in all of there faces and was known to only us. The most dangerous game, in expansive fields of ferns and fiery thorns and rivers of knotted rhododendrons was played, and we were darting swallows, prancing fawns, and stealthy owls hunters and hunted wielding broken hockey sticks. Our war wounds burned when merged with the salty grime of humidity and blood and ravenous gnats. Gritting our teeth, we brandished our staves, Hacking through brush, towards survival. Each quivering breath— an alarm -to prey or predator- ‘til we discovered it was just our own, and then a snapping twig would bulge our eyes and wretch our heads to put us right back on our guard. And when the chase was on it was a race against the beating of our hearts (whose footsteps may have ran a mile in a minute). With flailing arms, wildly we sprinted grateful to the wind for tending to our wounds. And it always came down to three: two to make the wolf against one to make the timid hare, and our brilliant, clashing swordplay out-rang the tick of the clock until our arms were merely crutches held firm against our quavering knees. Hungry, weary, we returned to eat our fill and drink nearly twenty glasses of water, and Nate: his nine cups of tea, and Sarah: her mug, larger than the coffee *** itself, and Rhodan: the entire pond for his sweat-rag had ****** him bone dry. We sat impatiently conversing through our grinning teeth who yearned to navigate the textures of the awaited food. And then it arrived, shoved out onto ebony countertops, accompanied by salt and pepper. We downed every morsel in a single, hour-long gulp, then cursed our gluttonous guts for expanding far beyond their boundaries and sat for walking was as thin a hope as eating dessert. Rhodan then reached his charcoal hand and swiped the salt from where it had static stood: beneath the feet of its dark companion. I watched in wonder as the dropped container swayed and swayed— a drunkard with his shoes nailed firmly to the ground—, then righted itself with a final shake. We all declared it simple and stacked the salt atop the dusky survivor. Swipe after swipe, we beat that pepper ****** and left the pale mineral to gravity’s mercy, rebuilding and razing again and again our cookies n’ cream totem pole, but not a soul prevailed. Finally, Rhodan interrupted our failures, and between squeaking giggles voiced, “Well, you can’t do it that way!” and gently helped the milky shaker to its feet and retrieved the other battered building block. “You see,” he said while delicately setting his stage “the pepper must always be on top.” With a blink he swept his hand across the table rendering the black bottle dizzy but securely parked in its place. “It’s the only one that can land on its feet.” Amazed, we tried again, of course and succeeded for the most part, both perplexed and delighted— a combination that is a magician’s best friend. Although, Rhodan was no magician, just a giddy boy who understood simple physics and lived for moments where he could explain his confused and jumbled symbolism (the kind that you know you could discover if you searched for half of a Summer). Then August Where time, not at all anxious to win, slowed tremendously on the homestretch. Every day that passed was a cloud who emptied all of its contents before waving goodbye. The water slowed our falling bodies even more (as water tends to do), and David with his quiet disposition sung the loudest, danced the wildest at waning firesides, and soon we all began to wish that we would never land. And as the ground rushed ever nearer we made our final mark on brim of mighty mountain whose shadow had generously cooled us from the sun all Summer. And the skies leased a stronger storm than any we had ever beheld, and gazing from that towering peak into the face of midday’s cloud, we thanked God for not dropping us as hard as he did that rain. And now, thinking back, I would say it rained more in August than in June for that single afternoon of thunder shattered skies must have drowned the earth a thousand times over and then some. And when we made our dripping descent, I heard the echo of a gleeful voice revealing the secret, and I knew then that we were pepper, that we would land feet first so as to leap straight up again. That we would soar from the chalky flats of that pallid moon to discover planets of lower gravity and more rain and greener forests and higher towers.
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Impartial to the frigid air, We pallid cherry blossoms bear A dreary warmth on dismal days And Romeo on passing by Will pause to comb his matted frays Of toil under lidded sky And smile as our sleeping sways Become his absent lover’s hair. And Juliet with windswept eyes, While taking linens in to dry Will hesitate to swallow deep The tonic of restoring will That raining wraiths for hours steep With spices of a lonesome chill, But we who taint the brew shall keep Her pines of He in vast supply. But Year by Time is seasoned strong And autumn mutes the swallow’s song And winter chokes the poignant flow Of beauty from our cotton breast And when the dawn forgets to glow— In cambium we sleep repressed— Depart the fickle Romeo Who fails to tote his heart along.
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Nov 29, 2011
Nov 29, 2011 at 6:11 AM UTC
The Fleeting Gift of Cherry Trees
We took a bus to Wilmington And skipped a dream or two In order to be cognizant— When the “Are we there yet’s” Rebounded void of “yet.” We parked the bus adjacent to The paint-peeling facade Of lonely temple Wilmington— Threatening no demon of the sky With a keenly polished death spike. It had no spendthrift window of Christ Jesus with the sick And poor, neglected derelicts— Who glow with jubilee and gold chloride For His altruistic charities. Across its door was fastened tight A rusted iron chain Which barred the shallow, blinkered souls— Who loitered at the barrier’s feet Waiting on God to warrant entry. But we who were of cogent view Detached deterring catch And entered with our chins ***** A light-bulb-vacant sanctuary Where taciturn shadows took a seat in every pew. And down a velvet aisle stood A lonely, weeping priest Inhaling in unblemished palms— That not a single pious doubter Would dare inspect. “Welcome to my church,” he said With breathless, choking sobs, “I am the congregation here— The pastor, choir, usher, and Sunday school teacher Of Wilmington Church of Reason.” Inquired we what hidden woe Enlaced with torment cast Those salt discharged convulsions— Quaking the sanctity of exultation In the House of Apollo. And with concise, unleavened words He justified his tears And whispered to our weary troop—, “Alone, alone am I, Isolated within this box of omitted truth. “O, give me soothing slumber deep And strip these sentient eyes From ghastly sheaths of consciousness— Repair this mended paradigm, Or tell me that I am mistaken. “Imaginary friends and foes Make wretched hearts a wreath Of roses red and mistletoe— And bird of paradise to keep Hope alive, alive and awake and well, hope alive…” So each of us, a brimming cup Of empathy, remained To keep old pastor Wilmington— Old usher, choir, teacher, congregation Wilmington Alive and awake and well.
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Nov 29, 2011
Nov 29, 2011 at 6:09 AM UTC
The Congregation at Wilmington Church of Reason
We took a bus to Wilmington And skipped a dream or two In order to be cognizant— When the “Are we there yet’s” Rebounded void of “yet.” We parked the bus adjacent to The paint-peeling facade Of lonely temple Wilmington— Threatening no demon of the sky With a keenly polished death spike. It had no spendthrift window of Christ Jesus with the sick And poor, neglected derelicts— Who glow with jubilee and gold chloride For His altruistic charities. Across its door was fastened tight A rusted iron chain Which barred the shallow, blinkered souls— Who loitered at the barrier’s feet Waiting on God to warrant entry. But we who were of cogent view Detached deterring catch And entered with our chins ***** A light-bulb-vacant sanctuary Where taciturn shadows took a seat in every pew. And down a velvet aisle stood A lonely, weeping priest Inhaling in unblemished palms— That not a single pious doubter Would dare inspect. “Welcome to my church,” he said With breathless, choking sobs, “I am the congregation here— The pastor, choir, usher, and Sunday school teacher Of Wilmington Church of Reason.” Inquired we what hidden woe Enlaced with torment cast Those salt discharged convulsions— Quaking the sanctity of exultation In the House of Apollo. And with concise, unleavened words He justified his tears And whispered to our weary troop—, “Alone, alone am I, Isolated within this box of omitted truth. “O, give me soothing slumber deep And strip these sentient eyes From ghastly sheaths of consciousness— Repair this mended paradigm, Or tell me that I am mistaken. “Imaginary friends and foes Make wretched hearts a wreath Of roses red and mistletoe— And bird of paradise to keep Hope alive, alive and awake and well, hope alive…” So each of us, a brimming cup Of empathy, remained To keep old pastor Wilmington— Old usher, choir, teacher, congregation Wilmington Alive and awake and well.
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If I could ride the wind of your sigh like an albatross on the salted thermals of Poseidon’s breath, I would strip my soul of flesh and bone to lightly drift for just a night in the arms of such sweet perfume. I would your laughter strike me deaf if that first enchanting note were to be mine for but a heartbeat. I would your beauty strike me blind if it were to hang a portrait first, dangling high on a gilded wall of memory. “I love you!” called a thousand times would whisper weak in the vast cavern of its worth. Feeling. Nothing more than endless feeling claws at the inner lining of my being, stretching me wide, like your name to my lips. And now I see you. Finally. Your eyes—a lovely constellation alight with passions buried deep within a faultless heart. Could such a jewel as you have love for any when not a soul beneath the sky can match a fiber of your beauty? A stillness in your gaze moves me ‘til movements still below my burning skin seep like minted steam from dinted kettle, out of every pore, tattooing the air—our air; quenching zealous lungs—our lungs. Our—blessed word of shared possession; Another and I—you—possessing me With dogged wraiths of adoration. Say you love me now, and buried breathing I will smile.
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Nov 29, 2011
Nov 29, 2011 at 6:03 AM UTC
Untitled