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"effete" poems
if words are food for the mind, then here is a glimpse of mine if words are drugs for the brain, then here is why i'm so pained. abandoned, abhorrent abnormal, absent abstract, abuse addicted, anxious betray, bitterly blank, blasphemy bloodless, breakdown breathless, brutal captive, casually catastrophe, cautiously change, cigarettes crucial, clueless damaged, dangerous deadly, disastrous disheartened, disconcerting dramatic, dreading eager, eccentric ecstasy, eerie effete, effortless embittered, excess faded, failure faintly, fallacy faltering, fatally fearfully, finally garbage, gawky gibberish, gloomy gone, goodbye graphic, gratify hallucinate, harshly hazy, heartless hectic, helpless hesitant, hit-and-miss idiotic, idly ignorant, intimacy illogical, imaginative infatuated, intoxicated jealousy, jittery journey, journal joylessly, judicial junk, juvenile keen, killing knavish, knocking knockout, knotty knowingly, knowledge laborious, lacking lame, languishing lifeless, literature lovelorn, lugubrious madness, maintenance make-believe, malaise mean, melancholic mellow, melodramatic naff, naivety nameless, naturally nauseous, nebulous neglected, nervous oasis, objectionable obliged, obliterate oblivion, obscurity obsolete, one-and-only pacifist, pained pale, panicky paradise, paralyze passionately, passively raging, ranting rationalize, raving realistic, reasonable rebellious, reckless saboteur, sadness sake, sameness sanity, satisfactory scar, steady taint, tangled tasteless, tearful telling, temperamental terror, theoretical unaffected, uncanny uncommon, unconsciously undesirable, uneasy unfortunate, untidy vaguely, vanish vanity, vanquish versatile, vicious violence, voracious waiting, waking walkout, wanting wasteful, weary withering, wrecking if words are food for the mind, then you've seen a glimpse of mine if words are drugs for the brain, then no wonder i'm so pained. -djs
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Aug 5, 2013
Aug 5, 2013 at 11:21 PM UTC
a glimpse of my mind
if words are food for the mind, then here is a glimpse of mine if words are drugs for the brain, then here is why i'm so pained. abandoned, abhorrent abnormal, absent abstract, abuse addicted, anxious betray, bitterly blank, blasphemy bloodless, breakdown breathless, brutal captive, casually catastrophe, cautiously change, cigarettes crucial, clueless damaged, dangerous deadly, disastrous disheartened, disconcerting dramatic, dreading eager, eccentric ecstasy, eerie effete, effortless embittered, excess faded, failure faintly, fallacy faltering, fatally fearfully, finally garbage, gawky gibberish, gloomy gone, goodbye graphic, gratify hallucinate, harshly hazy, heartless hectic, helpless hesitant, hit-and-miss idiotic, idly ignorant, intimacy illogical, imaginative infatuated, intoxicated jealousy, jittery journey, journal joylessly, judicial junk, juvenile keen, killing knavish, knocking knockout, knotty knowingly, knowledge laborious, lacking lame, languishing lifeless, literature lovelorn, lugubrious madness, maintenance make-believe, malaise mean, melancholic mellow, melodramatic naff, naivety nameless, naturally nauseous, nebulous neglected, nervous oasis, objectionable obliged, obliterate oblivion, obscurity obsolete, one-and-only pacifist, pained pale, panicky paradise, paralyze passionately, passively raging, ranting rationalize, raving realistic, reasonable rebellious, reckless saboteur, sadness sake, sameness sanity, satisfactory scar, steady taint, tangled tasteless, tearful telling, temperamental terror, theoretical unaffected, uncanny uncommon, unconsciously undesirable, uneasy unfortunate, untidy vaguely, vanish vanity, vanquish versatile, vicious violence, voracious waiting, waking walkout, wanting wasteful, weary withering, wrecking if words are food for the mind, then you've seen a glimpse of mine if words are drugs for the brain, then no wonder i'm so pained. -djs
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how many butterflies would it take to hide your smile ? my love is boundless and yet i cannot say. it's genius, effete and ill suited to the task. all the while, my doves pigeon home with valentines tethered to sky thin shins and talons. more smoke and words than spoken atoms. and nothing else matters.
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May 1, 2014
May 1, 2014 at 12:11 PM UTC
how many butterflies would it take to hide your smile ?
What foes or friends do we perceive when we connect by chance conceived? Would you care to explain how this is my fault? Pray tell tis Joseph come to his census. Come nigh so late to what truth evinces. Four heed own Lay won knot thin kit sis... Prays got a buff! Fine uh Lee… Coarse sit duhs pour ten dove baa doe mens. Naughty ville purse say! Oar eve in dud ark Om end... Shell Ira Bjorn ease? Orb headers till yore effete? Ike ant aft tub Abe eave oar yew yen owe... Wall oh win knit. Gore Ida head. Yuck use amoeba *** is hint umm eye fall tis zit? Yuck cues amoeba ditz nada tall mite urn toot ache tub lame. Bub I... Hope Joe Ill step pup two wit all Irie lay trill lee dew
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Aug 13, 2014
Aug 13, 2014 at 1:02 PM UTC
Aisle Of Lane Quit Jah
For every leaf in Autumn’s fall A child is lost without recall, For every song that’s sung for love A child is whipped by callous glove. For every latte shared in joy There’s *** abuse to some small boy, Each million dollar haul of art Starvation stills a child’s young heart. When tears of joy cascade in breeze A thousand homeless children freeze, For every morning sunbeam clear The cloud descends on some child’s fear. For every excess we consume Mass underprivelaged children loom, Blond beauties all attired in red Unwanted babies left for dead. Massive plenty for the few Dispossessed small children ******* Privelaged cold concience clear Little feet bequeathed the fear. Global sympathy won’t change ‘Till effete thinking rearranged, Sanity shall not transform ‘Till WOMAN leaders are the norm. Marshalg For the lost legions in our midst. 20 July 2011
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Jul 19, 2011
Jul 19, 2011 at 4:41 PM UTC
Infanticide by Proxy
Thank you. Thank you for carrying me, against the wind, the jagged rocks and tainted floorboards. Thank you for enduring, the pain, the burden, and heat.   In sadness and in grief, I torture you, standing, waiting, depleting you of your vitality. In happiness, I dance, prance, shake, and run, I oversee your longevity, as you harden to sustain my happiness. All that's left, is an impression, an imprint in the sand that trails behind. Effete and tired, I thank you, my feet, for carrying me through it all.
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Mar 19, 2021
Mar 19, 2021 at 2:51 PM UTC
Thank you, feet
there is this certain house call it the beach house once a well-worn respite, it's quaint disrepair no longer charms sands that once barely dared   brush against the steps victory dance over the porch and through the warped, unclosed door as it hangs nearly unhinged passersby notice much as hazy eyed prostitutes stare thru effete johns from that absent mind place where it wouldn't occur to look inside
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Dec 18, 2011
Dec 18, 2011 at 3:20 PM UTC
the beach house
What is it with the Americans-? With their endless cups of “Joe” Starbucks on every corner At least it seems that’s so. Those who overdose on coffee Are always on the “go” With palpitating heart beats And hands that shake like so. Billions of cups consumed yearly, The landfills awash with debris If only my Dad had a Styrofoam mine Imagine how rich we would be. Chocolate is much more civilized; antioxidant rich and sweet. They say it’s a mild aphrodisiac and a laxative for the effete. Those people addicted to coffee Wake up “Grumpy and groaning” While those folks addicted to chocolate can be sure they’ll be coming and going..
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Dec 29, 2011
Dec 29, 2011 at 8:32 AM UTC
Coffee versus Chocolate
Deceit and conceit are concrete. Raven’s feet patter  over the gutters, the sewers beneath the street secrete a pungent odor similar to raw meat. Families strolling past shutter and mutter, feeling elite plagued by their own effete. -AM
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Jan 16, 2016
Jan 16, 2016 at 12:06 AM UTC
Night in an Alley
Ibykos Fragment 286, circa 564 BCE loose translation/interpretation by Michael R. Burch Come spring, the grand apple trees stand watered by a gushing river where the maidens’ uncut flowers shiver and the blossoming grape vine swells in the gathering shadows. Unfortunately for me Eros never rests but like a Thracian tempest ablaze with lightning emanates from Aphrodite; the results are frightening— black, bleak, astonishing, violently jolting me from my soles to my soul. Preposterous Eros by Michael R. Burch “Preposterous Eros” – Patricia Falanga Preposterous Eros shot me in the buttocks, with a Devilish grin, spent all my money in a rush then left my heart effete pink mush. Keywords/Tags: Ibykos, fragment, translation, Eros, Aphrodite, Thracian, tempest, lightning, jolt, soul, spring, apple, trees, river, flowers, grape, vine, shadows
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Apr 7, 2020
Apr 7, 2020 at 6:02 AM UTC
Ibykos Fragment 286 (translation)
Beetles creep & earthworms writhe In soil and leafage mould Where men, in towers' ivory Broach loud and souls are sold. Honesty and purity Enflower places plain But pompousness and leather hearts Merely promulgate distain. Distancing the words, effete, Conjure portals cold Whilst wallowing in self esteem Seldom glints of gold. Instead the psalms of simple chime The bells of true release, Where meek and mild and unposessed sweat blood and bleed for peace. Where the stroke of brush, unfettered, Lets the masterpiece unfold, And children sit enthralled, only, When tales of truth are told. M.
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Jun 9, 2019
Jun 9, 2019 at 5:36 PM UTC
The Psalms of Simple
A barren home, but not of things, where silence wanders curiously down the empty halls. "Who's there?" She stands to peek through door ajar at the dust  ::BOOM:: on the floor.  ::BOOM:: Nothing's stirred and all's in place and all is still but subject’s face: fieldstone hues and wrinkles too. A desol't eve in fickle blue, she’s marching dusk with throated heart. Purpled cirri and pinholes white high above her stalwart ceiling. Shunted thought. Listless thunder. Turn on heel to pinioned sleep; a reeling sanct, an effete lover.
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Oct 27, 2013
Oct 27, 2013 at 10:11 AM UTC
BOOM
1. I’m climbing hills today in one, effete poet’s way they could be metaphors for all sorts of ‘big life things’ but in another, my belly is about to give my knees some trouble 2. The sepia on this one’s different there was sometimes bitterness in steps made here as the lure of the theme park rides sat so near but the years have done a lot to replace the roller coaster thrill with the heart weight of hills, dales and rivers with tales to tell 3. You remember I mentioned the metaphor? And the belly troubling the knees? Well these things came to pass as I hauled my carcass up the hill turning the air blue The metaphor? Decisions that once were natural, easy like breathing now can feel laboured, burdened when a step is placed how can I be sure the ground will hold? Even at the peak, where I once could exhale at the majesty of a job well done I’m now fraught with the thought of the journey down 4. This river is different at home the stream accompanies me on local walks, showing me the known and keeping my chin up Here, the bold broadness of the river hides secrets and speaks in a deeper tongue coarse fish, familiar to me are replaced by those that anglers prize I am both lost and a little more alive 5. Looking into the faces of teenagers dressed for town centres, either striding ahead or shambling behind parents intent on extolling the virtues of fresh air and nature while feeling strangely out of breath at the climb closer in, the adolescent eyes show a plethora of emotion contempt, depression, longing utter conviction that life is happening somewhere, anywhere else but if I may offer some advice: relent as in a few blurred years you’ll succumb to the same fossilisation and will need some routes to remember
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Aug 25, 2021
Aug 25, 2021 at 1:50 PM UTC
Another day trip: Up!
1. I’m climbing hills today in one, effete poet’s way they could be metaphors for all sorts of ‘big life things’ but in another, my belly is about to give my knees some trouble 2. The sepia on this one’s different there was sometimes bitterness in steps made here as the lure of the theme park rides sat so near but the years have done a lot to replace the roller coaster thrill with the heart weight of hills, dales and rivers with tales to tell 3. You remember I mentioned the metaphor? And the belly troubling the knees? Well these things came to pass as I hauled my carcass up the hill turning the air blue The metaphor? Decisions that once were natural, easy like breathing now can feel laboured, burdened when a step is placed how can I be sure the ground will hold? Even at the peak, where I once could exhale at the majesty of a job well done I’m now fraught with the thought of the journey down 4. This river is different at home the stream accompanies me on local walks, showing me the known and keeping my chin up Here, the bold broadness of the river hides secrets and speaks in a deeper tongue coarse fish, familiar to me are replaced by those that anglers prize I am both lost and a little more alive 5. Looking into the faces of teenagers dressed for town centres, either striding ahead or shambling behind parents intent on extolling the virtues of fresh air and nature while feeling strangely out of breath at the climb closer in, the adolescent eyes show a plethora of emotion contempt, depression, longing utter conviction that life is happening somewhere, anywhere else but if I may offer some advice: relent as in a few blurred years you’ll succumb to the same fossilisation and will need some routes to remember
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we are clockwork creatures with phantasmagoric features precisely ground and divinely wound, we measured movements, prosaic and sublime our cogged kingdom, cherished chunks of time our ticking, a marching machination our faces, a reflection of the lost a prediction of the found we now make simpering sounds on our path to rust made obsolete by the silicon effete, the cyber elite, that-which-who never succumb to rust, or join us in our reverent return to dust
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Dec 17, 2012
Dec 17, 2012 at 5:42 PM UTC
ticking
Why do we strive to be effete If the sum of all is fear? Fear that they shall rob us blind Of all kept near and dear. Why then do we strut and preen When fortune smiles our way? For the dire sum of equals scream That envy rules the day. What seeks the strata here But to keep the fools contained? For the eventual sum is the end of a gun And a simmering hate, retained. Human nature comes and goes But one rule reigns supreme That rich is right and poor is wrong With nada in between. God may intervene here The good Disciples say But internecine battle Determines Faith has seen its’ day. So what’s around the corner In mankind’s vicious romp But visceral disenchantment Singing vengeance for the mob? Or  a mass incarceration With holocaust entombed??? With either joust…. Just futile For humanity is doomed. M. 29 November 2018
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Nov 28, 2018
Nov 28, 2018 at 11:10 PM UTC
Putting the Cards on the Table
To my mate Stevo....with love ‘Tis perilous, Sir, to write our thoughts to paper, To commit our living words to those unknown, For regardless of the flair expressed in writing all with care The interpretation’s different to each clone. What may be black and white and clear as crystal, To others may diffuse as shades of grey And the message, though succinct, may be read as challenge brink-ed To confuse and collapse in disarray. Oh the agony and the ecstasy of we writers Is best captured in the rolling of the dice For to script all saccharin sweet may be interpreted as… effete? But a dour approach won’t be observed as nice! Yet to lay about with broadsword is defeatist And collapsing belly up implies a lie, So perhaps the best refrain is to abstain from all the pain And leave the ****** prose to fools who don’t care… why? Marshalg In absentia….again! 18 October 2013
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Oct 18, 2013
Oct 18, 2013 at 2:38 AM UTC
Perilous Prose
Ibykos Fragment 286, circa 564 BCE loose translation/interpretation by Michael R. Burch Come spring, the grand apple trees stand watered by a gushing river where the maidens’ uncut flowers shiver and the blossoming grape vine swells in the gathering shadows. Unfortunately for me Eros never rests but like a Thracian tempest ablaze with lightning emanates from Aphrodite; the results are frightening— black, bleak, astonishing, violently jolting me from my soles to my soul. Keywords/Tags: Ibykos, fragment, translation, Eros, Aphrodite, Thracian, tempest, lightning, jolt, soul, spring, apple, trees, river, flowers, grape, vine, shadows Preposterous Eros by Michael R. Burch “Preposterous Eros” – Patricia Falanga Preposterous Eros shot me in the buttocks, with a Devilish grin, spent all my money in a rush then left my heart effete pink mush.
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Apr 5, 2020
Apr 5, 2020 at 3:39 AM UTC
Ibykos Fragment 286 (translation)
A crushed Shah Jahan said: When you behold the memorial, a sight so masterly, yet sorrowful; you will inevitably admit an aching little bisecting wish that adorns your yearning lips.... parched, barren, effete...... And from the world's lid, the luminaries too would sob and drip. # He could well have been talking about my beloved's words ; ......so utterly breathtaking that a sigh poignantly quivers in my dithering being. Her words meander. It is no wonder: for all of us saunter in thought and speech one time or the other. At times her words are poised and easy....., wonderfully jolly, sensationally starry: They shimmer like the four minarets (1) on the full moon night; ....brilliant......resplendent. Then they taper from the dome and stop halfway between the tomb and the solemn reflecting pool: They are calmer, sober, and you know, a little factual; ...what they call discriminating intellectual, rational...... Soon the words leave charbagh (2) and hit the red sandstone walls (3) crenellated with flawless wisdom; spotlessly beautiful like the lifeless marble that proudly commemorates Mr. Shah Jahan's love in grim, cold blooded grace. We talk about riders and scruples, kith and kin, restraints and constraints, fidelity and modesty....... ....and I can not help but to sadly agree to the placid logic in our impeccable scripts. # Logic is a wonderful remedy for the radical and foolhardy but for every cure, there is a spin-off. Deep somewhere, a delicate, two-cent sentiment collapses into atrophy and.......silently another part of me becomes a meek monument of disposable history. ---------- (1) The four minarets of the Taj Mahal (2) The garden that starts from the end of the main gateway and ends near the squared base of the mausoleum is an integral part of the Taj Mahal structure. (3) The building material used is brick-in-lime mortar veneered with red sandstone and marble and inlay work of precious/semi precious stones. The mosque and the guest house in the Taj Mahal complex are built of red sandstone in contrast to the marble tomb in the center.
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Nov 11, 2019
Nov 11, 2019 at 10:27 PM UTC
The 'N'th Monument
A crushed Shah Jahan said: When you behold the memorial, a sight so masterly, yet sorrowful; you will inevitably admit an aching little bisecting wish that adorns your yearning lips.... parched, barren, effete...... And from the world's lid, the luminaries too would sob and drip. # He could well have been talking about my beloved's words ; ......so utterly breathtaking that a sigh poignantly quivers in my dithering being. Her words meander. It is no wonder: for all of us saunter in thought and speech one time or the other. At times her words are poised and easy....., wonderfully jolly, sensationally starry: They shimmer like the four minarets (1) on the full moon night; ....brilliant......resplendent. Then they taper from the dome and stop halfway between the tomb and the solemn reflecting pool: They are calmer, sober, and you know, a little factual; ...what they call discriminating intellectual, rational...... Soon the words leave charbagh (2) and hit the red sandstone walls (3) crenellated with flawless wisdom; spotlessly beautiful like the lifeless marble that proudly commemorates Mr. Shah Jahan's love in grim, cold blooded grace. We talk about riders and scruples, kith and kin, restraints and constraints, fidelity and modesty....... ....and I can not help but to sadly agree to the placid logic in our impeccable scripts. # Logic is a wonderful remedy for the radical and foolhardy but for every cure, there is a spin-off. Deep somewhere, a delicate, two-cent sentiment collapses into atrophy and.......silently another part of me becomes a meek monument of disposable history. ---------- (1) The four minarets of the Taj Mahal (2) The garden that starts from the end of the main gateway and ends near the squared base of the mausoleum is an integral part of the Taj Mahal structure. (3) The building material used is brick-in-lime mortar veneered with red sandstone and marble and inlay work of precious/semi precious stones. The mosque and the guest house in the Taj Mahal complex are built of red sandstone in contrast to the marble tomb in the center.
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I cower before the ordinary the extraordinary, the effete. and the gorgeous. Cowering is matter of fact heart and tact. I cower before the mighty the Almighty the mammal and the animal cowerinng is a way of life full of rife. We all cower. I cower in front of the altar walk the ways of the Tartar cowering is a way of life. full of rife, full of rife.
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Oct 20, 2015
Oct 20, 2015 at 1:27 PM UTC
I Cower...
Watching Homer struggle to explain how a god wounded by a mortal cannot die but may hereafter live with minor pain and the humor when that god complains to Jove that His supervision of His daughter is inadequate and His Love too unconditional while Diomed (or Tydides) wreaks havoc on the Trojans and Hector gives it back (in kind) anatomically correct descriptions of spears piercing jawbones (and groins) sons without fathers hunting and fishing thereafter alone. Written amazingly presciently! as a metaphor for Vietnam (our war) forgotten consensually as this generation slips lazily away to Hades (or kayaks to the huckleberries) where the lights are always blue, gentian actually, supper's served at 4 and former adversaries pass the heavy hanging time playing pinochle (and pool). We're selling the house to pay the taxes. Pallas Athena wars among the men from the axle of her chariot and Venus is injured by Diomed, standing in the field of battle where she never should have been, in her adorable hand. What has this to do with Solomon in jail. Not the Jewish king, a black American male, same thing. Your children can be failed at school and marched to war. You can be taxed and sent to gaol for the honor of it. anyone lived in a pretty how town. We have no obligation to perform the Iliad or read poems and even Homer considers Achilles effete (compared to Hector) and Odysseus is wrong even when he's right. Therefore, modern man explores the mathematics of circles in coordinate planes and their tangents when (sooner or later) the secret of warp speed is discovered expansion of the species will be limitless and permanent.
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Aug 11, 2015
Aug 11, 2015 at 5:09 PM UTC
Watching Homer Struggle
Watching Homer struggle to explain how a god wounded by a mortal cannot die but may hereafter live with minor pain and the humor when that god complains to Jove that His supervision of His daughter is inadequate and His Love too unconditional while Diomed (or Tydides) wreaks havoc on the Trojans and Hector gives it back (in kind) anatomically correct descriptions of spears piercing jawbones (and groins) sons without fathers hunting and fishing thereafter alone. Written amazingly presciently! as a metaphor for Vietnam (our war) forgotten consensually as this generation slips lazily away to Hades (or kayaks to the huckleberries) where the lights are always blue, gentian actually, supper's served at 4 and former adversaries pass the heavy hanging time playing pinochle (and pool). We're selling the house to pay the taxes. Pallas Athena wars among the men from the axle of her chariot and Venus is injured by Diomed, standing in the field of battle where she never should have been, in her adorable hand. What has this to do with Solomon in jail. Not the Jewish king, a black American male, same thing. Your children can be failed at school and marched to war. You can be taxed and sent to gaol for the honor of it. anyone lived in a pretty how town. We have no obligation to perform the Iliad or read poems and even Homer considers Achilles effete (compared to Hector) and Odysseus is wrong even when he's right. Therefore, modern man explores the mathematics of circles in coordinate planes and their tangents when (sooner or later) the secret of warp speed is discovered expansion of the species will be limitless and permanent.
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Snatched in betwixt' The Shifting and Switching All midst the alters.. and moods.. The hasty cyclone.. The Rapid cycling.. The Stumbling.. The hurling.. One after other All these emotions' transposing- From exhilaration. grandiosity. The loquacious episodes.. To Exasperation. Despondency. Despise. Remorse. The floating. dripping.salty..rampage. And amid all frantic.. all the chaos.. There.. this effete voidness.. Gleaning selves up' unhanding 'em again Gleaning. Unhanding. Gleaning And unhanding . Over and over Again
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Jun 2, 2017
Jun 2, 2017 at 8:46 AM UTC
Enervation
Alone in this world, yet surrounded by friends All worried about following the latest trends But not me, I want to be free from odds and ends The best styles depend on what the media says They handpick the physically elite to place in a close-up lens All calculated deceit, if you fall behind you’ll end up in the back seat Now anyone can be elegant, employing technology to cheat Revamped appearances are now displayed on our main streets Transforming young girls views to make them feel incomplete Natural beauty is harder to come by, morphing us to an effete society Notoriety is easier to achieve, our adoration alters confidence to anxiety I now question our propriety; forced variety plagues our high society They extort and contort the public’s image to be shown on public transport Deciding who wears it the best will soon become a contact sport I fear for our culture, even the most allure now sells themselves short One day this all may change, but for now the homely get a larger sentence in court
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Feb 2, 2015
Feb 2, 2015 at 4:14 PM UTC
Media Mold
Everyday I wake with a pain, Forever in my chest, it will rein The feeling so cold, it freezes my soul A payment I must give, a living toll I have never felt so alone In those few seconds that are known So many before me have lived this lie That life is some mysterious high But for the rest, each day is a test To see who will overcome being suppressed Living a life of lies and deceit Trying to be accepted, but becoming effete Some people that have lost all hope become weak Giving in to the decision to perish, they die in defeat Those critical seconds of choice One of the few moments when some have a voice They could decide to just give up and die Or to choose to continue prospering and fly Or curl in a ball of loneliness and sorrow Questioning their life and hating tomorrow I wish I were saved from this life changing decision So I know there is some sort of provision Stopping me from losing hope and ending it all I want to die when the time is right, a willing fall.
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Aug 8, 2015
Aug 8, 2015 at 10:54 AM UTC
Poem no. 5
If I were Newland Archer What would I now do with my love? Would I torment  her, ask impossible things, Surrender to her irrational command And let the others make my future plans? Oh no! My beloved Ellen was wrong! To think that I could stay the course, That marriage could end like a closing door, And leave the future in May’s serpentine hands. This time, if such a chance were given me, What would I do to make safe our love? I would give up all I had thought so dear, My frivolous books, effete pursuits, so she could be near. I was unworthy, the first time, I know. I consented to her feeling that I must go. But now I would re-arrange my life, dare any disdain Just to kiss her wrist in unfounded faith. Would I again leave my Love if told to choose? No! I was weak before, thinking that I had no chance. Yes, oh, yes! How could I ever bear to lose My Ellen and our enchanted dance? I know I have wronged those who trusted me, But don’t blame the unwitting authoress of my woe! For it was my own frailty that blinded me, My disregard for those things that Any man with a heart should know. I see now that if to May’s wish I did not bend, She would see my surrender was great to me but small to her, She would find another, as resolute women do under duress. And instead of a false life, Ellen, I could be alive with you!                                     ------------------------- Written if Newland Archer (of the novel "Age of Innocence") had listened to no one and abandoned not only the wife who shanghaied him into domestic servitude, but his own priggish insistence on doing the “right” thing for the wrong reasons. Semi-finished, June 19, 2011 Sharon Talbot
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Mar 28, 2019
Mar 28, 2019 at 11:35 AM UTC
If I were Newland Archer
If I were Newland Archer What would I now do with my love? Would I torment  her, ask impossible things, Surrender to her irrational command And let the others make my future plans? Oh no! My beloved Ellen was wrong! To think that I could stay the course, That marriage could end like a closing door, And leave the future in May’s serpentine hands. This time, if such a chance were given me, What would I do to make safe our love? I would give up all I had thought so dear, My frivolous books, effete pursuits, so she could be near. I was unworthy, the first time, I know. I consented to her feeling that I must go. But now I would re-arrange my life, dare any disdain Just to kiss her wrist in unfounded faith. Would I again leave my Love if told to choose? No! I was weak before, thinking that I had no chance. Yes, oh, yes! How could I ever bear to lose My Ellen and our enchanted dance? I know I have wronged those who trusted me, But don’t blame the unwitting authoress of my woe! For it was my own frailty that blinded me, My disregard for those things that Any man with a heart should know. I see now that if to May’s wish I did not bend, She would see my surrender was great to me but small to her, She would find another, as resolute women do under duress. And instead of a false life, Ellen, I could be alive with you!                                     ------------------------- Written if Newland Archer (of the novel "Age of Innocence") had listened to no one and abandoned not only the wife who shanghaied him into domestic servitude, but his own priggish insistence on doing the “right” thing for the wrong reasons. Semi-finished, June 19, 2011 Sharon Talbot
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A deep and sprawling swell Crept its fingers deep and well Around my stomach as it fell, And rose. Each breath a tell, She's alive. She is well. Despite a heart that ceased to beat, Molded to tawny and rusted to effete, That despite all attention and treat Leaked a pussing and steady gleat That could not help but secrete. Though I wrapped wrapped my wounds with my hair Where once hands grasped my neck, wet and bare, Cocooning deep in skin without care while I, unaware, Opened lips and gasped in ecstasy. Or despair As he shut my mouth, shut my eyes. Made me convert, communed and baptized. In making me what he wants, made me what he despised. Leaves me, but one kiss and leaves, and my heart dies. ****** from the start for what I not knew, Now I'm ****** for what I do. A knowledge i never sought to accrue, Wasted. Through. ****** by me for being ****** by you.
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May 29, 2013
May 29, 2013 at 6:36 PM UTC
Shoulder Strap, Slightly Askew