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"comrads" poems
On a filthy street corner in a town on the outskirts of the City we congregated I was the only white & was dressed in my usual tattered finery, ripped jeans & a silk shirt halfway undone I imagined myself a sea rover of the Spainish Main silver 38. tucked in my back waistband I glanced at my 3 comrads, gangsters of the lower class sagging jeans dreadlocks reeking of **** I imagined myself a rover but in truth we were nothing but societys corrosion words were exchanged by my comrad & another rover from down the way louder & angrier until shots rang out & shattered the evenings trance snapping into action fire was returned we held ground until music from the keepers of law sang down the street we scattered I sailed to the train tracks but was pursued I turned & raised my silver 38. but the lawman's bullets took me down hard the last thing I remember was the sky beautiful and orange with the coming of dusk the most beautiful evening I had ever seen
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Jul 16, 2012
Jul 16, 2012 at 9:00 PM UTC
The Most Beautiful Evening
if i ever came close to belonging, this must be the spot. the place where failures and friends collect like the white cloudy residue on the bank of a river, stuck, wanting to escape, giving anything to flow again down life's fast and unforgiving current, being endlessly turned and turned in one spot, moving but stuck. accumulating next to your white filmy comrads who also got caught in the whirlpool trap going nowhere. going home.
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Mar 23, 2013
Mar 23, 2013 at 8:18 PM UTC
Going Home