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Free for a while in the jail,
in life's prison,
between walls and laws.
And life passes us by,
the days go by,
among the days.
Breathing,
the air of life.
That air that frees us,
the air of the freedom to live.
It doesn't matter, free thoughts,
those secrets we carry with us,
far from fear, we make ourselves free.
Without fears, without fear of living, we will be free,
we will let our life fly on its paths,
paths that we choose every day, on life's trail.



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ANOTHER VIEW

From far away, from down below, from here,
from the paths that cross our own,
in this life that is so different.
I look and sometimes I see nothing,
just blurry dots.
In the world,
maybe on Mars,
maybe from the Moon,
sometimes I get close and I observe.
I discover you as distant dots,
and sometimes the dots come closer and say hello.
Those dots that are other lives,
lives like dots that pass,
lives that come and go,
crossed lives.
In the crusade of life,
from an extravagant place,
it fascinates me to think about other lives.
What will they have, what will they hide, pains and joys.
Sometimes I come down from my own world,
and I step in the mud of life,
without fear of getting *****.
In those lights,
where there are dots,
dots that are lives,
people of flesh and pain.
Sometimes I see luminous dots,
smiles, joys, successes,
and I happily toast.
On my moon,
in my world,
sometimes I descend,
and I feel you on my skin.
Sometimes I become,
I become human,
and I am one more of you,
and I stop living among the stars.
Sometimes I get off my pedestal,
I come down and I become one of so many,
in the earthly world we breathe.
Another view, one view among so many.
And I feel, so much yours like a dot.
Someone who passes like a dot through life,
that dot, among many dots, that go through the world.

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Like a point, someone,
with a beginning, one more.
A marking of life,
like a sculpture,
that is being made,
carving that journey.
Taking my form.
Between points, life,
that passes us by, days,
days, to the final point.
Among so many, there,
now also,
in the moment
There I am, that's how it is,
in that point,
melancholic
decadent,
And resigned,
between points,
that pass,
through my life.
Moments,
more points.
Waiting,
for that point,
of arriving,
at the end,
at that final,
let's call it
final point.
Meanwhile,
connecting
in the living,
those points,
some points,
like poems.
Between distances,
on that walk,
of our life.
Very slowly,
in me, a delicate
final passing.

Connecting points,
until that point,
called
final point.
In the beauty,
of being a point,
among so many,
other points.
In time
of existing.
A point,
of life,
meditating,
on life,
and the end.
Nostalgic
for the past,
for points
of my yesterday.
Connecting
points,
on that
path,
of living
of today,
tomorrow
without knowing
if, the point arrives,
of completion,
that terminal point.
In the end,
those

Life is a line that connects points until death...
Rain

Rain in my poems,
salty water of tears,
songs of water rain down.
Rainwater that comes to me.
It rains inside me, without stopping,
everything burns, bad times.
Everything burns down for us,
the rain burns, desolation.
There's no hope left,
everything's going wrong,
from bad to worse.
Rain that burns,
the soul is on fire, and it won't stop.
Hopes are leaving,
and when there's nothing left,
what's the point of pretending.
I will drown, and it doesn't matter,
the world will go on and who cares,
other drops will reach another heart.


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BROKEN WISHES

Better to have no wishes,
better not to be disappointed,
better not to seek the best.
Better to curl up,
into myself,
far from myself.
In nothingness,
a shipwreck,
in the real.
This world,
is not my world,
reality is coming,
dreams drowned.
I was disappearing,
I went to a corner,
fleeing from life,
that cruel life.
Slowly,
very slowly,
I am moving away,
from the painful reality.
When hope fled,
the slap of real life came,
without barely noticing, I created my world.
A world where there is no future,
my world no longer exists,
it is the past.
Treasuring,
memories.
Memories,
everything is leaving me,
days without a tomorrow.
Precious memories
that fade away,
while I slowly leave.
My world fits in a corner,
where there is only room for the past,
where the future brings nothing good in the end.

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HOT NIGHT

My skin burns /
it's time to dance /
time to flutter /
time to be happy /
time to fall into your arms /
time to kiss you, unknown lover /
My body is thirsty for you /
just pass over my body /
I have the burning desire
/ today and tomorrow I will make it easy for you /
come into my world, and let's discover /
that we have everything we need /
come and have a good time, travel my skin /
and I will travel your body, on the night of love
Digression

In those strange moments,
set apart from your own life,
diverted from the paths.
Wandering a bit more,
a parenthesis, a stop,
a little bit of dreams.
A slow pause,
to get out of oneself,
moments to flee.
A change of direction,
instants to change,
courses to disconnect.
Slow silences, a halt,
pauses on the road,
to continue,
with strength,
anew.

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