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6d · 5
Assent
I wished to be a priest smoking in a garden,
gazing at faded photographs of ancestors,
They’re breath like the dry sound of reeds
hollow in the wind.
Empty as raincoats hung up to dry
under a dark a private weather.
Roses leeched by rain
circling the lake like a reoccurring dream.
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              September 12 2024
I’m beginning to wonder if it’s payola to have a poem tread. I think is low class to do such things.
I have almost fifty poems published. I didn’t come to this site to have my poem’s blown off Elliot, that’s why I left in the first place in 2021.
I’ve reached a certain skill level that shouldn’t be dismissed. A few more poems never read and I’m gone. This is a poetry site… I thought.
Buying “suns” to get a second look. How low is that!!!!!!
Sep 20 · 26
Crepuscular
Tj Struska Sep 20
I heard the neighbor’s screen door
part with the faint blue of dawn.
The black cat strode in like a whisper.
His silken body curling her leg
as he took the first lick
with his rough, red tongue.
The cold milk glowing
in a golden saucer.
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                January 05 2024
For those who are wondering- Crepuscular is another name for late twilight or faint dawn. I wrote this at 3 am that night it has that peaceful night feel
Sep 20 · 34
20th Century Ghosts
Tj Struska Sep 20
He is on an all-night train
Reading from the book of his life
From time to time raising his head
To glimpse something of the landscape
Rushing past, beyond the darkened window,
Only to catch his pale reflection in the glass.

Whispering secrets under their breath,
The flutter of pages like birds,
Dark and motioning the moonless night.
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                           June 28 2023
Sep 20 · 26
Memo To Bixby
Tj Struska Sep 20
Memo: 22:13 Hours. Roman Numeral 17
Wanted for questioning related to home invasion on Milwaukee Avenue.
Seen fleeing with female.
Last spotted in Busia’s Old Time Tavern on Kostner,
Losing pool game to undercover narcotics.
Said individual practiced in the art of
none-linear prose
Proceed with caution.
Rumored to have washed hands in Pilate’s bowl after passing judgment.
Report unconfirmed.
Memo to Bixby: Roman Coliseum desecrated.
Cut the ties binding.
Roman Numeral seen in vicinity.
Apocryphal papers flown to Helsinki.
Eradicate with Extreme Prejudice.
Yours: Turner.
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      January 05 2024-September 14 2024
As you can see, I have been working on this uniquely strange poem for close to 20 years. This is like a hallucinogenic police report. In my years of reading, I’ve never come across anything like this. It’s one of my all time favs
Sep 19 · 175
Blue Mesa
Tj Struska Sep 19
The room ticks like a cooling engine
In a blue motel on the edge of Apache.
A tranquil night of drunks and televisions.
Poly-neon signs and road closures.
Up the road apiece, just north of nowhere,
Past the graves of Grandma and Grandpop,
There’s a place that has no business being there,
A place of cisterns and honeycombs.
A wheel in the desert, the moon on some swings.
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            September 02 2024
I grew up in Arizona as a child, a beautiful place of deep mystery and beauty
Tj Struska Sep 19
I once was young,
Now I’m an old man,
Whose time is memory,
Whose future is past.

I sit here with knuckles that ache from this pen.
There’s a light scrim of snow in December’s dusk.
A lone horse and a farmer’s spark light
Dominate my field of vision.
In between this motel and that warm farmhouse
Lay a half-mile of afternoon run away with light.
The barren howl of an idiot wind
Mumbles near words like a ghost.
The fence and slate of white sky given over to winter.
There seems no beginning or conclusion;
Just the warm, pallid air of the heating system.
A gun and a sheaf of poems probably no one will read-
Except maybe the police.
Outside, the horse’s mane is fluid to the wind,
The snow peeking through the window,
Hovers for a moment,
Then falls on past.
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                    April 10 2024
I believe this is among my best work. Trying to write in a simple, straightforward language with bits of poetic flourish is the hardest style to write.
Like Hemingway or Bob Dylan
Sep 19 · 23
Bloody Epic
Tj Struska Sep 19
I was a captive on a ghost ship,
Its sails ripping in a gale.
The sea and all its monsters could not contain me.
I wore glasses with a spider crack in the lens.
I told the librarian I was a medieval philosopher
Lost in a long and lonesome theory.
She asked for my library card
Then escorted me to the door.

I fled to the local theatre.
I remembered I had a small, none-speaking part in a ****** epic.
I was one of the bombed and fleeing minion.
In the distance, Our Great Leader
Crowed like a rooster from the balcony.
“That’s me!” I said to the balding man
To my left-
“Between the man with the blown-out eye
And the old woman with her mouth open like she’s showing us her tooth.”

Later, I saw the man to sitting to my left.
I asked him for the time.
He gave me a frightened look
And stepped out in to rain.
This is from 2023, I’ve been gone from this site for quite some time. My piety has grown. If you read my poetry you’ll see a wide variety of styles. I’ve been writing for 24 years, I take this gift seriously

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