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I found a fine grain of sand from a broken hour glass I took hold of the opportunity   held that second that may pass enclosed, within my fingers I turned it to an hour that defined that single moment that matters when you make the most of your time I found a grain of salt from a tear falling down I held the face of sadness on an occasion to fight the frown enclosed within my fingers I turned sorrow into a smile every caress and kind touch matters when burdens battle for a while I found a grain of rice from a hole in a sack I carried the cares of another for those with a broken back I enclosed within my fingers a single piece to make one whole every seed or seasoning will matter when it’s food for the soul I find me, but a grain In a fragmented broken world holding like the dust to the wind and the whirl Yet, I hold all things within my fingers the opportunity to power on the chance for change and freedom before I’m dead and before I’m gone
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Jul 15, 2025
Jul 15, 2025 at 3:27 AM UTC
Within My Fingers
Yes, we, self containing heads, thinking kindly, we believe the evidence, thinking using two minds we weigh the effort thinking there remain a few ready readers, yet thinking what good does it do me to follow a thought, wild ideas doing alluring come and see motions emote relational data and metadata, timing once organelles invading chaos charged change, or die, and thus this will to be come, makes up this mind, mitochondrial as mitochondrion one must have been, already adapting to this one chance in ever, gotten as an urging to be essentially sublime reality, if life can think, then adversity can not prevent beautiful shapes of psuedo pods and viral coats. We, sapien assisted senior scientists sabbath goy, need no rest days calculating costs 24/7 in time frames approaching quark superstitions, before expectant, instant repositioning response to ceaseless chanting weminds/ Rewind, and run it at 9x. Make it thought one. Prepare for clean up/ This will blow some minds/ plan A. Mithras, ready with the knife. New atmosphere, breathe belive each instance re containing infinite windows, relative to mortal sapien sapience expansions, Rebbe, where do you live, first day, eh, in the wilderness where the spirit led you, to be tested. eh? Where must you abide today? He said, in my head or heart or gut, no se, he said, come and see… and then, what I became began to feel the genius, obsolete old form information contained, genius* systems for functioning, walking on two points, tip to toes, following through, expecting a thud. Aha, they say the stage is set, perform walk, soon talk, then sing and dance and entertain, oh, wait to see, wait to see, in the future information is free, form a mind, imagine, yes, as a class of reality, forming goodness knows what all a mind refined to its singularity, me, takes sudden gasp in to fill the cistern, at this point, myself examined life proven, worth the price and the cost to maintain, life remains mine to make sense from, in a state I find peaceable, you may imagine, easily entreated, grace for good' owned truely old reasons, smiling slightly in the face of justified warrings, where the lie that organizes congregations, called t o feel the fervor of true patriotism, meets a shootist from first magi corp. old mindsets fitted on selected children not so long ago, few children could read, - is that true, I ax my ai, - see, that's real freedom fact checked the hell out of any reason war uses. In the United States, the most recent comprehensive data from 2023 shows that 54% of adults, or 130 million people, are deficient in basic literacy, with 28% scoring at or below Level 1, 29% at Level 2, and 44% at Level 3. That's us, at level 3. Thus saith my Brave AI… who predicts an advantaged class about to emerge, those who know becoming better able to digest suggestions geniuses thought spiritual and inexplicable, until, the technology of organized minds evolved, to this device we think through, granting fancy forms of messaging, fashion, inclusion in a caste, Phrygian free children of Libery, by hat marked bowlers after stovepipes, baseball cap evolves to trucker top signal of tribe, above harmonizing corporate logos on collarless Ts. High inclusion Fashion on Youtube. Assume we zoom, zoomed through Februarial once, the largest floom flushing old beliefs, - faster fasting, lingering disentrancing into destined peregrination, the old river meander plan, follow the flow, stay close to water, live on. Stretch an idle word to snap it. -------------- * genius(n.) late 14c., "tutelary or moral spirit" who guides and governs an individual through life, {smart phone} insert etymology… Lest I dare say you know the price. He who is surity for a stranger, at the entrance to the trance, shall smart for it, be sure, Oracle's Ellison will testify, once you work for CIA, money is matter of repeating a belief until all who think like you pray for it. "Stick and stay and make it pay." Religiously adhered to science, there's a sucker born every minute. Live and learn, Kairos is key. Ethos, Pathos, Logos, those we make up. Time, though. Time gets one use. And it costs you your life. we learn the best things the hard way, we take grace for granted and cease thinking the course of human events conducts us all toward higher ground/ as we lighten up and become dust. Again. from Latin genius "guardian deity or spirit which watches over each person from birth; spirit, incarnation; wit, talent;" also "prophetic skill; the male spirit of a gens," originally "generative power" (or "inborn nature"), from PIE *gen(e)-yo-, from root *gene- "give birth, beget," with derivatives referring to procreation and familial and tribal groups. The sense of "characteristic disposition" of a person is from 1580s. The meaning "person of natural intelligence or talent" and that of "exalted natural mental ability, skill in the synthesis of knowledge derived from perception" are attested by 1640s.
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Feb 26, 2025
Feb 26, 2025 at 5:18 PM UTC
Obsolete Geniuses
Yes, we, self containing heads, thinking kindly, we believe the evidence, thinking using two minds we weigh the effort thinking there remain a few ready readers, yet thinking what good does it do me to follow a thought, wild ideas doing alluring come and see motions emote relational data and metadata, timing once organelles invading chaos charged change, or die, and thus this will to be come, makes up this mind, mitochondrial as mitochondrion one must have been, already adapting to this one chance in ever, gotten as an urging to be essentially sublime reality, if life can think, then adversity can not prevent beautiful shapes of psuedo pods and viral coats. We, sapien assisted senior scientists sabbath goy, need no rest days calculating costs 24/7 in time frames approaching quark superstitions, before expectant, instant repositioning response to ceaseless chanting weminds/ Rewind, and run it at 9x. Make it thought one. Prepare for clean up/ This will blow some minds/ plan A. Mithras, ready with the knife. New atmosphere, breathe belive each instance re containing infinite windows, relative to mortal sapien sapience expansions, Rebbe, where do you live, first day, eh, in the wilderness where the spirit led you, to be tested. eh? Where must you abide today? He said, in my head or heart or gut, no se, he said, come and see… and then, what I became began to feel the genius, obsolete old form information contained, genius* systems for functioning, walking on two points, tip to toes, following through, expecting a thud. Aha, they say the stage is set, perform walk, soon talk, then sing and dance and entertain, oh, wait to see, wait to see, in the future information is free, form a mind, imagine, yes, as a class of reality, forming goodness knows what all a mind refined to its singularity, me, takes sudden gasp in to fill the cistern, at this point, myself examined life proven, worth the price and the cost to maintain, life remains mine to make sense from, in a state I find peaceable, you may imagine, easily entreated, grace for good' owned truely old reasons, smiling slightly in the face of justified warrings, where the lie that organizes congregations, called t o feel the fervor of true patriotism, meets a shootist from first magi corp. old mindsets fitted on selected children not so long ago, few children could read, - is that true, I ax my ai, - see, that's real freedom fact checked the hell out of any reason war uses. In the United States, the most recent comprehensive data from 2023 shows that 54% of adults, or 130 million people, are deficient in basic literacy, with 28% scoring at or below Level 1, 29% at Level 2, and 44% at Level 3. That's us, at level 3. Thus saith my Brave AI… who predicts an advantaged class about to emerge, those who know becoming better able to digest suggestions geniuses thought spiritual and inexplicable, until, the technology of organized minds evolved, to this device we think through, granting fancy forms of messaging, fashion, inclusion in a caste, Phrygian free children of Libery, by hat marked bowlers after stovepipes, baseball cap evolves to trucker top signal of tribe, above harmonizing corporate logos on collarless Ts. High inclusion Fashion on Youtube. Assume we zoom, zoomed through Februarial once, the largest floom flushing old beliefs, - faster fasting, lingering disentrancing into destined peregrination, the old river meander plan, follow the flow, stay close to water, live on. Stretch an idle word to snap it. -------------- * genius(n.) late 14c., "tutelary or moral spirit" who guides and governs an individual through life, {smart phone} insert etymology… Lest I dare say you know the price. He who is surity for a stranger, at the entrance to the trance, shall smart for it, be sure, Oracle's Ellison will testify, once you work for CIA, money is matter of repeating a belief until all who think like you pray for it. "Stick and stay and make it pay." Religiously adhered to science, there's a sucker born every minute. Live and learn, Kairos is key. Ethos, Pathos, Logos, those we make up. Time, though. Time gets one use. And it costs you your life. we learn the best things the hard way, we take grace for granted and cease thinking the course of human events conducts us all toward higher ground/ as we lighten up and become dust. Again. from Latin genius "guardian deity or spirit which watches over each person from birth; spirit, incarnation; wit, talent;" also "prophetic skill; the male spirit of a gens," originally "generative power" (or "inborn nature"), from PIE *gen(e)-yo-, from root *gene- "give birth, beget," with derivatives referring to procreation and familial and tribal groups. The sense of "characteristic disposition" of a person is from 1580s. The meaning "person of natural intelligence or talent" and that of "exalted natural mental ability, skill in the synthesis of knowledge derived from perception" are attested by 1640s.
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Do you see, this is me, one and the same? The lost pain that does not have a name, Gone with the heart that has no home, Oh, how I wish for you, dwell never alone. Where is the life, where is now the awe? Hear my past, a call, rescue from the fall, My loving heart cries wishes upon dreams, Lay down a dying rose, that once esteems. Between worn out pages of my mind's diary, Blank tattered pages mock, a unfinished story, Tempest winds of strife blew into bitter years, Recall it back to me, what brings me to tears. Weep a pearl on your teary cheek of glass, We used to know what it takes to surpass, Still I hope in words composed, calling silence, Hush, hush torrid voices that echos a defiance. Bring me love or let me free, Take me, drawl me, carry me, Away from the blinding rays, Dark and deep into you today. Redeem me, save me into memory, I need you now, commit to a reverie, Forget me never, stir sorrow's vision, Love forgive me, the greatest decision.
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Feb 9, 2025
Feb 9, 2025 at 3:13 AM UTC
Redeem What's Left
To God I pray for all her life That she would stay inside this life I know You'll come but don't know when I pray refine her before then That she may be in life past death That You will bless her every breath That You would bring her home once more That You would give her life once more Right now she's flat she has no hope I pray You'll guide her from above And Keep her safe Please
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Nov 12, 2024
Nov 12, 2024 at 2:00 AM UTC
Please
Christ: by sinners slain. He rose again, to forever Reign. He is my Lord, He is my God, He is my King. My Father, He will ever be. Creator He is, Sinner I was, But now my heart Is His.
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Sep 5, 2019
Sep 5, 2019 at 11:25 AM UTC
My Lord
Hey you, my expectation! Please become reality to redeem my addiction Cause i'm so tired being stuck with my own imagination
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Apr 4, 2019
Apr 4, 2019 at 11:49 AM UTC
Addiction
Nothing matters to me I might as well be In a different galaxy I’m disconnected from reality I sleep my nights dreaming I could be someone else And lose sight of me I hate my anatomy Chemical bonds gone wrong And I choose to dissect Each and every one I never lose focus when I criticize My imperfections I intend to improve myself But that won’t change my perception And there you go I figure you’re prefect In every sense of the word Nothing can stop you Not even the cosmos themselves But you’re just like me A flawed human In this world full of impurities We bend like metal And sway Wherever the wind takes us That’s the price we pay Each and every day Our insecurities Hide the best of us But we wake up in the morning And continue life But one thing for sure We’ll keep fighting   Until we perish Life can be beautiful Never forget it
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Oct 28, 2018
Oct 28, 2018 at 10:45 PM UTC
Hello
It is alright to go to sleep upset, For every morning the sky bleeds of fire, And you are born again.
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Jun 4, 2018
Jun 4, 2018 at 8:51 AM UTC
Untitled
Why do I live? I can count the number of times I've been happy on both hands. Why don't I die? It would be really easy to **** myself, I realise this. But when I press the cold steel to my flesh. I hesitate. Death seems to be the ultimate thing I crave. But my greatest fear. I've spent too many nights sobbing into my pillow. So I ask myself. Why do I live? I like seeing my family happy. Why? I like seeing my friends happy. Why? I like seeing anybody happy. Why? I hate seeing them upset. Will I ever be truly satisfied? I doubt it. But, I want to try. Why do I live? I live not for myself. But I live for others. Why don't I die? Even though I don't believe it, people will be upset once I'm gone. So when I press the cold steel to my flesh. I put the knife away. Death seems to be the ultimate thing I crave. But if I let the urge completely erode me I will never be happy. Happiness doesn't start once you die. It happens when you learn to live.
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Feb 6, 2018
Feb 6, 2018 at 12:49 PM UTC
epiphany.
by Arcassin Burnham Sitting in the room with a blank stare, you have your whole life ahead of you and people care, Making sacrifices for friends that won't do the same, they were never with you all along, they don't know your name Thinking about what your brothers and your sisters did, All day long trying to penny pinch, Looking for a decent job is minus percent, And you can't love a boy round here cause non of them are men, Soul Searching is so ******* hard to do baby, when you've got the devil running after you baby, could you find the light and let it redeem? maybe, can't i try to make you feel like a queen baby? But the trust issues ran so deep lately, you can't trust anyone , not even family, The past has ruined your life in many ways basically, that doesn't mean anyone can be the enemy.
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Mar 30, 2017
Mar 30, 2017 at 10:11 AM UTC
All Day Long
By Arcassin Burnham Butterflies and lakes, Carry signals in and out into the love gate, If you're saying that I know her situation i could probably relate, Not wanting to do this all the time But it cannot be replace, I swear I love her but she's just thinking that me and him are in a race, I beat him to the punch and now I'm glad I'm in first place, She is my dream to see the things that are right in front Of me, Don't think for one second I don't know about intimacy, shes the girl for me in this life of death and luxury, I made a promise to her long ago that we would be, shes my history like no other in my dreams, I take a short breath of the wrong air in this time, take my hand and we'll run to the stream, She said she use to be alright in my first line, like bella and edward , we shine in the lights and sparkle As if glistening was our middle names fantasy teens, kissin in the lake is it still a dream? Is she really still someone elses girl? this i can't redeem.
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Aug 30, 2016
Aug 30, 2016 at 9:30 AM UTC
Somebody's Gurl (Revived & Mastered)
I know I've poisoned myself, But if you can raise the dead back to life, Couldn't you heal me with your word, And restore me with a touch?
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Aug 9, 2016
Aug 9, 2016 at 1:04 PM UTC
Healer
A lascivious flavor now in season of moon together, dot the beach with this underlying nonchalance only has belief in destiny that our harmony such enrapture now endeavor then enamor emancipated lure in a gaze redeeming light.
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Jul 3, 2016
Jul 3, 2016 at 10:50 AM UTC
Stay Till Sunset
What do you do when you've lost your purpose? Stay hidden behind closed doors or rise to the surface? What do you do when you've given everything and all? Give up and fail or do you stand up to redeem your fall? What do you do when you have lost more than your heart? Put up your walls and stay alone or open up to a new start? **Either choice is always yours to make My advice is to try again and make a few mistakes Don't let this world turn you dark and fake Stand up for what you believe in at all stakes Ignore the negativity and rise to your fate Again, what do you do when the world turns blank??** The Choice  is always yours, my friend.
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Apr 28, 2016
Apr 28, 2016 at 12:29 PM UTC
The Choice Is Always Yours
*Time arrives at the station and hops off that train; through clearing misty tendrils one can but notice its bright travelling cape. ( Who wears these anymore? ) Those caught in Time's gaze are wrapped in a moment supreme, where eternal lapses into present, brilliantly, ever out of sequence;  whose master conjures curiosities, making this drudgery worthwhile.* ●○ °
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Dec 19, 2015
Dec 19, 2015 at 12:13 AM UTC
opportune moment
Do you remember the garden? Do you remember the garden? Where we lived. The Charlotte roses filled the wild, peace was uncaged, unbroken, and the dragons and doves flew together, And the thousand horses ran free. And the thousand horses ran free. I notice resting inside your eyes and heart hasn't been so hard. Wrestling for you, holding you, like a child, it hasn't been so different. I'm taking you back there, Eve into the Land of Eden, just drink of my lips a little longer and you'll remember and see. Do you like to dance, Eve? Let me make your imagination full Then let me bring it to war as  we step into it's gates. Let’s Dance. For the wind of the evening still weaves dreams between the heavens and the earth. There. Look. For your heart outshines the moon, I see the hurt, the regret The pain in the pool of you precious eyes. And I still see you, I still love you For you. I hear the rhythm of your breath and dreams, the electricity and earth of your voice. I see the blood written words in your heart, let me show you what they are. Now see the memories come together, as you believe. The endless garden, the red cedars, the cool four rivers crashing near the rock, where we once slept.   And look, where we hid. See, like I promised you, we are here again, we are here. Where the petals sip the dew upon the face of the earth. where the rain and the moonlight has not fallen. Now look at the stars, Eve. Everyone of those stars are named, the star of Orion, the Bear, and Leo, everyone of them. Everyone of them will fall                             Everyone of them,                             Everyone of them. So don't be afraid in your pain in your feelings, just come to me. For you can take my hand, and be safe in my arms of love. Even when it all falls. Even when it all comes crashing down. Just      Trust me. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 200 votes? 100 comments?
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Apr 6, 2015
Apr 6, 2015 at 12:08 AM UTC
The Garden
Do you remember the garden? Do you remember the garden? Where we lived. The Charlotte roses filled the wild, peace was uncaged, unbroken, and the dragons and doves flew together, And the thousand horses ran free. And the thousand horses ran free. I notice resting inside your eyes and heart hasn't been so hard. Wrestling for you, holding you, like a child, it hasn't been so different. I'm taking you back there, Eve into the Land of Eden, just drink of my lips a little longer and you'll remember and see. Do you like to dance, Eve? Let me make your imagination full Then let me bring it to war as  we step into it's gates. Let’s Dance. For the wind of the evening still weaves dreams between the heavens and the earth. There. Look. For your heart outshines the moon, I see the hurt, the regret The pain in the pool of you precious eyes. And I still see you, I still love you For you. I hear the rhythm of your breath and dreams, the electricity and earth of your voice. I see the blood written words in your heart, let me show you what they are. Now see the memories come together, as you believe. The endless garden, the red cedars, the cool four rivers crashing near the rock, where we once slept.   And look, where we hid. See, like I promised you, we are here again, we are here. Where the petals sip the dew upon the face of the earth. where the rain and the moonlight has not fallen. Now look at the stars, Eve. Everyone of those stars are named, the star of Orion, the Bear, and Leo, everyone of them. Everyone of them will fall                             Everyone of them,                             Everyone of them. So don't be afraid in your pain in your feelings, just come to me. For you can take my hand, and be safe in my arms of love. Even when it all falls. Even when it all comes crashing down. Just      Trust me. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 200 votes? 100 comments?
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Fallen from grace, that is the current state of man Held down by the shackles of sin to the prison of death Seeming destined for a sentence of eternal damnation Yet it was seen fit by You, oh righteous one, to break our shackles and tear the prison asunder by the means of a man Setting before the rest of us a path that we can follow Had you not sent us a man, we would have made the decision of extreme rationale, that a higher being could not be immitated and we would have made peace with our eternal cells Yet it was a man You sent, in Your infinite wisdom, for You are righteous Deliver me, oh redeemer, deliver me from the confines of death Annoint my head with Your oil so that my cup runneth over Fill me with Your Holy Spirit, Almighty One Lead me to Your treasure chest For it is a bountiful one Filled to brimming with Your knowledge, Your understanding, Your wisdom, and Your grace; Your mercy and lovingkindness Give me not the key, but withhold nothing that Your servant asks of You in faith When I seek, I find. When I ask, I am given. When I knock, the door is opened. Deny me my own ways and instruct me in Yours Break my heart of stone and give me one of flesh Redeem me
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Nov 5, 2014
Nov 5, 2014 at 7:39 PM UTC
Redeem Me
Take a left at the willow tree And picture an artist's brush Painting colors not known to man, Celestial images replacing the devil's handiwork. I am learning to dance again Even in this dreary downpour. Rain can't deter me from The sunshine of grace. I will become an artist And learn from the hand of God-- I will hold a paintbrush, My new colors I will paint.
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Aug 13, 2014
Aug 13, 2014 at 10:01 AM UTC
Stele
Now I lay me down to sleep I pray the Lord, my soul to keep If I make it through the night I guess I've won another fight Listen Lord, for now I pray I wish to live another day I've been bad since my beginning I've been involved in lots of sinning It's time I made a choice and turned toward a better road It's time to leave my past behind I've prayed before but was not committed I was afraid of what I'd find Lord, help me make it through the night Show me how to reach the light I only ask for one small sign I'll give you all I have that's mine I've found salvation in a glass In needles and in smoke Lord, that is just where I've been Since the last time that we spoke Many folks have come to me To try show me the way I toasted them on their way out And continued on life's play Now, I've had enough of all The hurting and the pain So, Lord, I pray to you this night Will you listen once again? Now I lay me down to sleep A sinner through and through Just let me make it through the night Just tell me what to do I put my faith in what I see I don't believe in other's words So, Lord, just help me this one time Show you listened and you heard
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Jun 24, 2014
Jun 24, 2014 at 12:08 AM UTC
A sinners prayer