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#overachiever
Come now, come and see; she's the one you've been looking for! She feels it all: the fear, the weight, the love, the pressure. She radiates beyond that of, any one person can take hold. The resentment, the tears, the gut wrenching. They BEG to see more. Unfiltered, de-masked, but she must stay in her box! Feel less. Why don't you have anything left to give? Are you not satisfied with this attention? Selfish. Can't you breathe with your wings folded tight? Look at her- Look! Isn't it marvelous when contained? Let me lean on her. She shines so bright in the most absurd of circumstances. You MUST perform for the masses! See! Don't you see? Incredible- to see how it pours out of it's everything for you. Can't you love her yet? Is she still not enough?
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May 5
May 5, 2026 at 8:06 AM UTC
A rusty crate, tired
I'm not perfect I have never been perfect I will never be perfect But knowing that won't stop me from trying
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Jan 31
Jan 31, 2026 at 10:21 PM UTC
Head Prefect
why do i still try to win in public speaking contests when i know i'll never be good enough to do so? why do i still try to have the "best presentation" in class when i know i'll never be as good as the rest? why do i still try to run for treasurer in school council when i know i'll always lose? why do i still aim for gold when i know i'll never be smart enough to reach that? why do i still try?
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Jan 3
Jan 3, 2026 at 9:52 AM UTC
untitled poem 1.3.2026
I always cry too hard, Strive too far, Reach too high. I always work too hard, Love too much, Cry myself to sleep. I’ve always gone above and beyond, That is the life of an overachiever, After all,
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May 26, 2025
May 26, 2025 at 1:31 PM UTC
overachieving
I have always been the gifted child overachiever and overworking myself desperate for approval if I get good grades, maybe my parents will love me get straight A's get on the honor roll be the top of my class a B is the same as an F you drilled that into me my worth was dependent on my grades if I wasn't the best, I was worthless I hold these messages to this day no matter how detrimental they are to me now staying a the top and the best grades is a struggle I can't be the perfect child anymore
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Mar 13, 2025
Mar 13, 2025 at 8:39 AM UTC
gifted child
Tried so hard it surpassed my limits I'm a drained over achiever and a dreaming believer Really my work is a reward if you could tell by my eyebags Education system won't let me take a breather Determination is my pill and I won't stop until I'm burnt out.
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Feb 26, 2025
Feb 26, 2025 at 12:38 AM UTC
5 lines to speak my mind
I'm so tired of being tired. Just let me go to sleep, please. I've been working working working My whole ******* life, And for what? For some stupid praise? A degree - the same as everyone else that didn't **** themselves over this and instead lived out their lives? Don't you know, I don't envision myself as anything in the future. I get a little sad when I hear people talk about theirs, because I see that they're practically already there. In their mind, their heart. They've got that something, keeping me going. What do I have? Nothing. I am nothing. I don't dream, Because I don't sleep. And because I don't sleep, I am tired. I am tired. I am so ******* tired. And I'm too old to get tucked in by my mom with a bedtime story, So here I am, writing bedtime poetry and biology notes. (It all really doesn't matter in the end.)
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Jan 13, 2025
Jan 13, 2025 at 9:21 PM UTC
So ******* tired
Why don't I feel good about this? I've been practically killing myself for 3 years and... I got what I wanted. "Wanted". Did I really want this? Was all that for just this? I should be grateful, I know I should, but I still find myself asking why. Why? They didn't do **** I did. They told me and all I said was "oh, wow". I can't say I didn't expect it, but, I don't know. I don't know. I'm not mad that I got it, of course, but not really happy either. I don't really feel anything about it. I tell people, and I don't feel any pride, just nothing. Nothing... nothing nothing nothing nothing.
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Dec 2, 2024
Dec 2, 2024 at 9:42 PM UTC
6/23/2024
You don't give a glass of water To a drowning man And you don't throw a thirsty man Into the deep blue sea Yet I drank deep of that glass Though my lungs were full of water And thanked you for the refreshing swim As I gulped the briny down.
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Aug 9, 2017
Aug 9, 2017 at 1:45 PM UTC
When You Don't Know What Else to Do
I'm over this pain I'm over this ban I'm over this plan I'm over this fan I'm over this gain I'm over this I'm done I'm over disk
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Jan 27, 2020
Jan 27, 2020 at 10:17 PM UTC
Over this
Hang me with a pretty red scarf, Gag me with my ambitions, let me suffocate. My chaos is my own doing, Leave me to die on my own ******* sword.
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Apr 29, 2019
Apr 29, 2019 at 1:04 PM UTC
Pressured
is it okay to want so much & work so hard yet have so little?
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Apr 15, 2019
Apr 15, 2019 at 1:50 PM UTC
little floral journal thoughts 08
Some think that a well thought out compliment Is the best gift to give me. What they don't know is that it stifles me, Buries me under yet another layer of self doubt, Wondering yet again, “What if I fail them?” What if I'm just a fake, a fraud? What if suddenly I wasn't so amazing, so perfect? I love to be treasured, But what happens when everyone Finds out I'm just fool's gold?
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Aug 16, 2018
Aug 16, 2018 at 9:57 AM UTC
An Overachiever's Thoughts
Future. One word, That sends thousands to their knees. The ultimate fear, Whether acknowledged or denied. The ultimate seduction, Overlooked and overstated. It looms unendingly, A second shadow to mock your efforts. A silent lure, Tempting and drunk on its own velocity. Constant yet uncertain... Striking fear and lust, Like a taboo so sweet, Into the hearts of the fearful and the ambitious. I walk happily into the darkness, And embrace the dark temptation. Self-destruction in a heady promise Of a tremulous future.
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Nov 21, 2013
Nov 21, 2013 at 1:40 PM UTC
A Thing of Cowards and Over-Achievers