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The bonfire is lit warm, It is comfortable as a quilt. We look at the photos, Inside of our wallets. The parents, the wife and kids, Probably for the last time we kiss. Tomorrow is the final battle, We make a treatise with death. Either she takes the novice boys, Or let us send them to her.
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May 12, 2021
May 12, 2021 at 7:18 AM UTC
Soldiers In The Pass
A mere three years Have passed since I Joined this community And I have found My worst critic Is always future me
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Jul 23, 2020
Jul 23, 2020 at 6:56 PM UTC
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l'uomo non può salvarsi the Italian monk said -man cannot save himself- we were in the monastery garden digging potatoes for midday lunch, seul Dieu peut nous sauver Dom Blaise uttered -only God can save us- and I listened to him taking in his greying tonsure and beard, I opened the book heavy and aged smelling of time and Christ on His cross -Christi in crucem eius- fingered and page worn worn by fingers and eyes, absque omni condicione electionis Calvin said -unconditional election- He does not elect us because of our merits but by His sovereign choice, but Dom Joseph said that is not Church teaching we are saved by our freedom to choose and accept God's grace and we sat by the monastery beach face to face.
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Oct 20, 2019
Oct 20, 2019 at 9:05 AM UTC
Words to the Unwise 1969.
novice learn learning learn teaching teach learning teach teaching master
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Aug 12, 2019
Aug 12, 2019 at 8:14 AM UTC
development (10w)
The French peasant monk shows me how to cut the tall grass; he holds a scythe like a warrior his broad sword; and I watch, uncertain. Spit on your palms, he says in French, gazing at me with his deep set eyes. I spit on my palms, and taking my scythe, I follow him to one side, avoiding his blade as he scythes down the tall grass. Unable to match his swift movement, his casual attention, as if it was all part of his prayer, and I, scything, sweating, giving him, a wondering stare.
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Jun 17, 2019
Jun 17, 2019 at 7:40 AM UTC
The Tall Grass 1971.
Feathers stream down my cheek Coming forth like red rover I feel the cessation, when sadness takes over I mourn the end of each day Patiently waiting for my last And suddenly life seems pointless now, looking at the past The end I don’t think you understand It feels too natural, me and death go hand in hand Ask me something please Your tongue has been bitten off by my hearty smile It’s hard to talk about, acting angst is not my style I love you, help me I’ll be here until you leave It was our future I planned, and now my death I will conceive.
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Nov 7, 2018
Nov 7, 2018 at 11:37 PM UTC
Thoughts
Be careful, on the ground; there is a little hole. That's where I'll cause you a flesh wound; I am going to cook you and eat you with the mole, For all behold the lower bound. For all seek the pain, For all seek the gain, A scythe of blood, A pile of food. It is your choice, Either be brave or greedy, In a world of voice, In the world of needy; Ready you must be. For the battle that approaches, Mount on the bee, Call the cockroaches. The clash is almost at the end, For shall we win, In a world of fiend, A hero's legend shall begin. We won, you say. The world is now in peace, As the world pays, Everyone wants a piece. In the discord of the world, In the hell of the oceans, There is a Netherworld. As order approaches; arises the emotions, The men become weaker, The fields dry; As the man eats his ******* Everyone becomes shy. At the horizon, a ship comes; Marked on it is a cross, As it comes, hit the drums, In a sea of disorder, full of moss. The men leave their boat, And greet us with great hope. As the hope arises, there is a bloat. It is a frog; with little less rope. We have finished, the mayor said. A republic is set, our home, our land. He called his maid; We were all wrong, we were misled. As the republic falls, the men watch. On their eagle eyes, The city is on the notch, As the revolution approaches, they said yes. After plenty of years, a decision came. As we left the island; They said: Let's make it the same. Everyone came back, except for the land. The land was no longer ours, It was a memory of who we were. As the juice pours, Something did occur.
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Sep 18, 2017
Sep 18, 2017 at 12:16 AM UTC
A story of a land
Be careful, on the ground; there is a little hole. That's where I'll cause you a flesh wound; I am going to cook you and eat you with the mole, For all behold the lower bound. For all seek the pain, For all seek the gain, A scythe of blood, A pile of food. It is your choice, Either be brave or greedy, In a world of voice, In the world of needy; Ready you must be. For the battle that approaches, Mount on the bee, Call the cockroaches. The clash is almost at the end, For shall we win, In a world of fiend, A hero's legend shall begin. We won, you say. The world is now in peace, As the world pays, Everyone wants a piece. In the discord of the world, In the hell of the oceans, There is a Netherworld. As order approaches; arises the emotions, The men become weaker, The fields dry; As the man eats his ******* Everyone becomes shy. At the horizon, a ship comes; Marked on it is a cross, As it comes, hit the drums, In a sea of disorder, full of moss. The men leave their boat, And greet us with great hope. As the hope arises, there is a bloat. It is a frog; with little less rope. We have finished, the mayor said. A republic is set, our home, our land. He called his maid; We were all wrong, we were misled. As the republic falls, the men watch. On their eagle eyes, The city is on the notch, As the revolution approaches, they said yes. After plenty of years, a decision came. As we left the island; They said: Let's make it the same. Everyone came back, except for the land. The land was no longer ours, It was a memory of who we were. As the juice pours, Something did occur.
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The Italian monk eyed me in the refectory. I watched him I had no choice he was opposite me. He ate slow his jaw moving to a slow rhythm. God centered he said later in the scullery as we washed the dishes after lunch that is what we are God centered he said. Sunlight filtered through the coloured glass of the refectory on to the polished wooden floor I gazed at it while the monk read from some book on Oliver Cromwell in a mono-toned voice. We sat in her lounge she kissed me whispered suggestive things in my ear in her warm **** voice and we did. George tolled the bell for the office of Vespers I lined up behind the tall dark tonsured monk who smelt of baked bread. The afternoon light was bright and shone through the branches of the one tree in the cloister garth. Focus on God the French monk said to me in French Gareth translated for me I said I would or did or some such answer in my poor French. Whatever you do do with all your heart Dom Joseph said quoting St Paul as we sat on the private beach of the abbey the other novices tossed stones along the incoming tide. She shut her mutt in the kitchen where it whined we went to her bedroom and had *** She not thinking of her husband coming home from his job but I thinking of just that imagining him standing by the bedroom door with a displeased face. The bell for Compline rang the monks stood in the choir stalls in their black robes. I stood in the semi dark mouthing the Latin chant of the office the others were professional I was just a novice.
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Jun 2, 2017
Jun 2, 2017 at 3:30 PM UTC
THE NOVICE MCMLXXI.
The Italian monk eyed me in the refectory. I watched him I had no choice he was opposite me. He ate slow his jaw moving to a slow rhythm. God centered he said later in the scullery as we washed the dishes after lunch that is what we are God centered he said. Sunlight filtered through the coloured glass of the refectory on to the polished wooden floor I gazed at it while the monk read from some book on Oliver Cromwell in a mono-toned voice. We sat in her lounge she kissed me whispered suggestive things in my ear in her warm **** voice and we did. George tolled the bell for the office of Vespers I lined up behind the tall dark tonsured monk who smelt of baked bread. The afternoon light was bright and shone through the branches of the one tree in the cloister garth. Focus on God the French monk said to me in French Gareth translated for me I said I would or did or some such answer in my poor French. Whatever you do do with all your heart Dom Joseph said quoting St Paul as we sat on the private beach of the abbey the other novices tossed stones along the incoming tide. She shut her mutt in the kitchen where it whined we went to her bedroom and had *** She not thinking of her husband coming home from his job but I thinking of just that imagining him standing by the bedroom door with a displeased face. The bell for Compline rang the monks stood in the choir stalls in their black robes. I stood in the semi dark mouthing the Latin chant of the office the others were professional I was just a novice.
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This is for you lame poets for those who think they can write but aren't trying and they know it Maybe if they used a pen right The ink, would, in turn, show it Scribble lines were written for pure hype The Opposite of blurred is focused The passion unveiled by this action is real Massive of accents appeal, drastic yet passively chill Why is your wackness alive and steadily actively well? Are your points derived from a skill? You're as dull as the night without lights or some thrill Pick up a quill then ignite likes its hell Shuffle your words, in return make a deal Lies from the truth, I can easily tell I sit in a booth, then I write what I feel That feeling of feeling that moment of falling, emotions are heavy and heavy is frolicking That was a lie....I hope you are following There's a doubt in my mind, you aren't reading this properly Do not get board...then just GO like monopoly Maybe if I put a few words down, you will rate it There are poets who show it...yet are still underrated A sea full of story's that have been negated I write what I feel and I will not be waiting These words of chemistry clutch captivation Winds of auroras spark smart illustrations Verbal wasteland I recycle the sanitation My heart pumps to fuel the blood of imagination Devour all who find word-puzzles an aggravation I take inspiration from various locations,then stitch words to combine these places Now look what has happened An arsenal of words to engage in action Here's a hint of wordplay with a dash of passion lyrical disaster for the eyes of the masses Simply dedicated to the three-lined poet has bins
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Nov 22, 2016
Nov 22, 2016 at 12:55 AM UTC
Lame Poets
This is for you lame poets for those who think they can write but aren't trying and they know it Maybe if they used a pen right The ink, would, in turn, show it Scribble lines were written for pure hype The Opposite of blurred is focused The passion unveiled by this action is real Massive of accents appeal, drastic yet passively chill Why is your wackness alive and steadily actively well? Are your points derived from a skill? You're as dull as the night without lights or some thrill Pick up a quill then ignite likes its hell Shuffle your words, in return make a deal Lies from the truth, I can easily tell I sit in a booth, then I write what I feel That feeling of feeling that moment of falling, emotions are heavy and heavy is frolicking That was a lie....I hope you are following There's a doubt in my mind, you aren't reading this properly Do not get board...then just GO like monopoly Maybe if I put a few words down, you will rate it There are poets who show it...yet are still underrated A sea full of story's that have been negated I write what I feel and I will not be waiting These words of chemistry clutch captivation Winds of auroras spark smart illustrations Verbal wasteland I recycle the sanitation My heart pumps to fuel the blood of imagination Devour all who find word-puzzles an aggravation I take inspiration from various locations,then stitch words to combine these places Now look what has happened An arsenal of words to engage in action Here's a hint of wordplay with a dash of passion lyrical disaster for the eyes of the masses Simply dedicated to the three-lined poet has bins
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the cauldron's strong potion was manifest in a dire toxin simmering to the pot's rim this was a stupid portent doom would be destine to prevail the elements mixed in error which ensured a disaster's outcome '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''' bad omens were foretold by the recipe the black sorcerer no smart blender to late to change the concoction it boiled over then blew he'd not been very careful in how magic works such a novice with dark spells oh so silly
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Aug 28, 2016
Aug 28, 2016 at 8:10 PM UTC
The Silly Sorcerer (Double Etheree Poem)
I pick up a pen. ...or is it a gun? and write about zen. The world is all but one. I pick up my pen. ...or is it my gun? I will find it soon then, the war is all but won. I pick up a pen. ...or is it a gun? I write about Jen and, how war may lack fun. Jen pick up her gun. ... it is surely not a pen. my pen loses rhythm and so has the war and the people who still fight all lose. In the end we will all lose...
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Nov 18, 2015
Nov 18, 2015 at 10:16 PM UTC
Pens or Guns
I am holding a million and one words each tightly packed into my mouth yet many small words are escaping, pouring from the sides of my lips, drenching the lower half of my face entirely. I will wipe away the slipping residue and begin with calm, only opening the entrance of description as to unclench my lips. Jared, male, twenty-two. These minimal words of black and white reach the ear plainly, without impact. Residue slips further, more words of lesser color, lesser impact, yet the slightly slightly slightly more more more more invigorating colors release themselves in these bright forms of words, descriptions, explanations, emotions. He has ambition. Ambition that can only be compared to the greats of history, the psychotic, the brave, the colorful. A juicy pink now fills my lips. Jared has a heart that beats with caution, yet when held close, fits into your hands like a newborn animal, precious. I tear up at every encounter with this one this one psychotic, brave, colorful boy. This one careful, darling individual who yet could, without flinching could extract apart every ****** limb of any breathing thing. He stands, a military posture, gazing. He does not look away. With shuffling your feet and nerves jumping because you have only experienced this once by your least favored teacher, the opposing end of a power dynamic too intimating to overcome, who was evaluating the proper level of punishment. Punishment? He already knows who you are yet you batter and batter and batter into your head what this boy is. Some seconds pass by and yet the same three words; Jared, male, twenty-two, patter like a ****** advertisement through your mind until he is telling you a story; his venture on the mountain of Mount Fuji and amid a monsoon in which he would have, should have, died. And you listen, attentively. And he does not stop talking and you do not stop listening and you have hiked nine miles and you realize the sun has set and you are not where you started and those three words have been forgotten and you are walking in 11pm darkness. Attentitive, at his side.
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Sep 22, 2015
Sep 22, 2015 at 5:26 PM UTC
Jared, male, twenty-two.
I am holding a million and one words each tightly packed into my mouth yet many small words are escaping, pouring from the sides of my lips, drenching the lower half of my face entirely. I will wipe away the slipping residue and begin with calm, only opening the entrance of description as to unclench my lips. Jared, male, twenty-two. These minimal words of black and white reach the ear plainly, without impact. Residue slips further, more words of lesser color, lesser impact, yet the slightly slightly slightly more more more more invigorating colors release themselves in these bright forms of words, descriptions, explanations, emotions. He has ambition. Ambition that can only be compared to the greats of history, the psychotic, the brave, the colorful. A juicy pink now fills my lips. Jared has a heart that beats with caution, yet when held close, fits into your hands like a newborn animal, precious. I tear up at every encounter with this one this one psychotic, brave, colorful boy. This one careful, darling individual who yet could, without flinching could extract apart every ****** limb of any breathing thing. He stands, a military posture, gazing. He does not look away. With shuffling your feet and nerves jumping because you have only experienced this once by your least favored teacher, the opposing end of a power dynamic too intimating to overcome, who was evaluating the proper level of punishment. Punishment? He already knows who you are yet you batter and batter and batter into your head what this boy is. Some seconds pass by and yet the same three words; Jared, male, twenty-two, patter like a ****** advertisement through your mind until he is telling you a story; his venture on the mountain of Mount Fuji and amid a monsoon in which he would have, should have, died. And you listen, attentively. And he does not stop talking and you do not stop listening and you have hiked nine miles and you realize the sun has set and you are not where you started and those three words have been forgotten and you are walking in 11pm darkness. Attentitive, at his side.
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I've never quite known how to describe love. Somewhere between an unsettling ease crashing against a deep sense of belonging. The constant beating of the waves making me unsteady. I don't quite know how to navigate these seas. A masterful captain at everything else. I find myself unable to instruct my own footsteps. It's a feeling of suffocation mixed with rising excitement. The thought of you sends my mind into overdrive. I'm not safe to do nothing else, but meditate on you. In that moment when your name crosses my mind or comes into earshot, I am ruined for any task I have busied myself with. And when we finally meet, your face shines more radiant than anything else, throwing me completely of balance only to be caught by the nets of your touch. I suppose the only thing I know is that I'm falling in love with you...
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Aug 1, 2015
Aug 1, 2015 at 3:28 AM UTC
A novice's take at love
When I see you, My heart breaks apart Not because of your looks but because of your dark heart Distancing yourself, As I approach Those little actions to evade me Shunning my views And talking over me Going the extra mile To help others succeed But not me Leaving me behind As if mocking me Playing down my successes Inflating others' victory Leaving me in the dark while you stand in publicity
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Apr 23, 2015
Apr 23, 2015 at 5:01 AM UTC
Her reaction to me
I am 24 years old, Call myself experienced, Oh, But so novice at loving. And now I hold no wish at loving.
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Jan 18, 2015
Jan 18, 2015 at 9:28 AM UTC
Novice
The skin renews every 28 days. It’s been 16 since you last touched mine. I don’t know if I can go 12 more watching your finger prints fade.
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Nov 15, 2014
Nov 15, 2014 at 2:43 PM UTC
skin
Like a moth blinded by such froth wished to touch the flame. Wrapped with swath Burnt wings dropped the cloth Time to take the blame...
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May 23, 2014
May 23, 2014 at 6:24 PM UTC
LIKE A MOTH
That monk in the refectory sitting there reminded me of old Jack: same look, same eyes, that quiet presence. The French peasant monk, cutting back the hedgerow with a scythe, black robed, tonsured, humble as cheese, nods and bows. I picked apples wrong in the orchard, the monk said, he showed how, his fine fingers twisted just so, feminine, pinkish nails, his dark tight curls untonsured. For whom the bells toll down to the sea and beach? I tossed stones across the incoming tide, further than Brother Hugh (moaning Myrtle) could reach.
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May 23, 2014
May 23, 2014 at 6:22 AM UTC
COULD NOT REACH.