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#motel
i have traveled a long way to be waiting in a cheap motel passing time reading the words of dead russian poets waiting for you to arrive. four am is especially bleak, and no restless sleep is as purely restless, no sound more angry forlorn and temporary than cars on the highway besides. i would never know by your voice filtered by space and electronics what is moving through you. i must look in to you. so i wait now for you to knock, alone in the company of pasternak's tears until i see you and understand you are well.
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Sep 23, 2025
Sep 23, 2025 at 2:37 AM UTC
pasternak's tears
I had been sober for awhile and was getting that itch to drink. I couldn't recall the degradation and misery of the last drunk a few months earlier. It was spring, and I was standing outside of the flophouse, I was staying at. Just then, a big sunflower of a woman walked by. "Hi Jenny," I said. We had a past. Not much of one though. It resembled a Dali painting that had been soaking in the rain. We ended up in a motel with a bottle of Absinthe. Jenny wasn't much of a drinker, No problem, more for me. Jenny wasn't much of a conversationalist, and half-lit on robust ***** neither was I. I walked around the room talking about Hemingway and Van Gogh, Fitzgerald and Picasso. Jenny wasn't interested in them. She wanted me to score her some dope. She said, "If you want this ***** you will buy me an eight ball." I didn't. I wanted to write, but I was too drunk. We wanted different things and neither of us found them that night. And later at about 3 am when I got up to **** I could have sworn I saw the picture of Van Gogh on the box of Absinthe laughing.
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Mar 23, 2025
Mar 23, 2025 at 6:45 PM UTC
Absinthe and Jenny
~ She draws water from the well, an old drink for new clientele. She "loves" living next to airports, big shiny airports, named after gruesome visionaries and drunk, womanizing actor sorts. She "loves" wearing a Chinese dress and sitting in a Chinese chair, posing for pictures she can never share. ~
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Dec 14, 2023
Dec 14, 2023 at 2:51 PM UTC
Samaritan Woman
Riding the bus at night is one of my few comforts in life. Reminds me of happy days, returning home from the park. I remember a tall white building standing, reaching for the dark sky with red neon lights spelling "MOTEL" I felt compelled to come inside.
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Sep 26, 2021
Sep 26, 2021 at 10:12 PM UTC
Busride
Razor tucked in the fixture base That and the dull-fluorescent-light stare me Dead in the face Was it put there just in case? How did they know to find me here in this place? I guess it's just another convenience in another mini-life-space Little shampoo for your hair Little soap for your hands Little lotion for your skin Little blade for your sins and a sink in which to Erase All just such a convenient little Waste
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Nov 1, 2020
Nov 1, 2020 at 12:14 PM UTC
Just Conveniences
but no darling, motels get me down and i don't want to shed tears behind the walls on clean sheets slept on by many, you don't want to hear my heart creaking, and you certainly don't want to understand it
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Aug 16, 2020
Aug 16, 2020 at 7:14 AM UTC
motel blues
the osprey flys overhead, but the baby rabbit trembles not ~for any grandparent-poet lurking about~ the osprey overflies, a regularity scheduled patrol over our backyard emporium and all its hors d’oeuvre creatures, ***** has parental responsibilities, beaks to feed, PTA conferences, the pilot, a wary watchful animal-his-rights guy, catalogues their still living  existentialism, for though they are not fish, his diet of preference, but in a pinch a rodent  or rabbit stew will do, if the fish are running too deep for no warming sun beckoning them to the surface. Motel^ the baby rabbit, who lives with his parents, (who doesn’t these days?) beneath the deck, chews the clover overnight sprung, blissfully i g n o r a n t, unawares or ignoring the poet be-laureating (him-her) but a mere few feet above and away, pays no attention to the Poppy’s (grandfather) lecture about the rules of the animal kingdom, who, eats whom, and to be more attentive to flying raptors. thunderstorms forecast for the afternoon, severe say the textured textual phone-netical all green messages, which of course is a signal signal to the sun his job is done and can leave the untanned poet in his state of original sin, soooo deliciously white that he earns an appraising glance from eyes of the osprey, a privilege he would happily tan away to promote equality ‘n stuff like peace on earth. Motel, with his thermometer-humidity nasal instrumentation twitcher, decides, after chewing it over most carefully, time to go underneath where the white half naked people domicile, in order to avoid bathing, not his fav pastime, but making the osprey quitter le ciel, which is French for get out of Dodge, they got babies of their own to shelter and protect, even feed. The Poppy, contented, thinks to himself, god couldn’t be everywhere, so he invented grandpas to be “En Loco Parentis”  which Does Not Mean Instead of Crazy Parents, but easily could, for who else writes poems like this?
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Jul 5, 2020
Jul 5, 2020 at 1:08 PM UTC
the osprey flys overhead, but the baby rabbit trembles not (for any grandparent-poet lurking about)
the osprey flys overhead, but the baby rabbit trembles not ~for any grandparent-poet lurking about~ the osprey overflies, a regularity scheduled patrol over our backyard emporium and all its hors d’oeuvre creatures, ***** has parental responsibilities, beaks to feed, PTA conferences, the pilot, a wary watchful animal-his-rights guy, catalogues their still living  existentialism, for though they are not fish, his diet of preference, but in a pinch a rodent  or rabbit stew will do, if the fish are running too deep for no warming sun beckoning them to the surface. Motel^ the baby rabbit, who lives with his parents, (who doesn’t these days?) beneath the deck, chews the clover overnight sprung, blissfully i g n o r a n t, unawares or ignoring the poet be-laureating (him-her) but a mere few feet above and away, pays no attention to the Poppy’s (grandfather) lecture about the rules of the animal kingdom, who, eats whom, and to be more attentive to flying raptors. thunderstorms forecast for the afternoon, severe say the textured textual phone-netical all green messages, which of course is a signal signal to the sun his job is done and can leave the untanned poet in his state of original sin, soooo deliciously white that he earns an appraising glance from eyes of the osprey, a privilege he would happily tan away to promote equality ‘n stuff like peace on earth. Motel, with his thermometer-humidity nasal instrumentation twitcher, decides, after chewing it over most carefully, time to go underneath where the white half naked people domicile, in order to avoid bathing, not his fav pastime, but making the osprey quitter le ciel, which is French for get out of Dodge, they got babies of their own to shelter and protect, even feed. The Poppy, contented, thinks to himself, god couldn’t be everywhere, so he invented grandpas to be “En Loco Parentis”  which Does Not Mean Instead of Crazy Parents, but easily could, for who else writes poems like this?
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meet me by the motel by the Nobel boulevard we don’t have to tell no more being apart meet me by the motel by the Nobel boulevard with the casted spell we don’t got no regards so tell everybody we hit  the reject we ain’t sorry they gotta respect
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Apr 13, 2020
Apr 13, 2020 at 11:05 PM UTC
Meet Me Halfway
somewhere in hollywood along route 66 stood a cheap motel— an asylum for rockstars and their groupies, artists and and poets and strangelings alike. the morning only saw its residents, drunken and drowsy, and its black-tiled pools as dark as the night; yet the nights were its prime when the artists would gather in the name of music, dance, recklessness. the syringes would pierce their skin and the alcohol like ocean waves washed out the most of them, and events too unspeakable were the norm. the motel never attained 5-star ratings, but it become the playground for fleeting moments, wild nights, brewing grounds for creation. these nights were so loud and colorful, but only remembered in hazy visions and muffled sounds. and so all those nights end here, today: at the south of The Strip where some modern, ordinary hotel now stands once used to be the mess that the likes of Jim Morrison and Tom Waits called home. its guests would have burnt it down, but they would've wasted their money, and who has the time anyway? ladies and gentlemen, the tropicana motel— a stop over where wild minds and wild hearts would meet and eventually go their way, the place where these legends of music and madness came to play.
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Nov 3, 2016
Nov 3, 2016 at 12:59 PM UTC
the tropicana motel
Oxblood lips. A slit in the center. A distraught film. Shattered pieces that mimic her wounds. She cries for sorrow and weeps in the name of agony. Flashback. High voltage. Dawn's dew left a Seoul night in the hands of mischief. He watched her golden legs in his dingy shirt. She danced in a tunnel of head lights. His eyes. Oh, God, his realm of roses. A spectrum so broad- no force could obtain. 70s misfit. Shaggy rugs. A cheap bottle of Merlot. Kaleidoscope kisses. Craved like a hieroglyphic. He was her warrior. Plummeting grains of virtue into a dust oriented cushion...seven dollars and thirty one cents. I saw the light bulb touch the birch-wood floral. I could feel a thick metallic wind roar. Breaking the depths. A rugged man with a festive beard. His cheeks of stained silicone lipstick. He had shipped off his soul. He was a white man with a grip of steel. "Who put cookies in the watering bucket?" A naive response. "A wicked man with a lustful cavity." Erosion.Despair.Angst. Thin braids housed a blooming mind. Paint chips splattered the table top, plastering it. Morning.Good morning to luxury. What a splendid contrast. A lantern lit van took the highway by 65 miles. And all the while he never looked back.
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Feb 17, 2016
Feb 17, 2016 at 9:13 AM UTC
Dutch Motel
Bird Motel never to settle only a stop on a journey I hope you enjoy your stay
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May 8, 2015
May 8, 2015 at 10:51 AM UTC
╝untitled
that night, I saw bodies in the motel bathtub beckoning like a 50's Cadillac back seat beats and Father's bottle of snatched brandy up to bring back our youth and stay for one last whisper in a last-innocent ear the diner lights buzzing like a lifetime of loss to mistakes that can be little more or less than broken glass lies
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Apr 23, 2015
Apr 23, 2015 at 9:28 PM UTC
epoch
Huddled in a cocoon of my own grime Forlorn and wasted from my own trick “She's hot,” she says from across the Room filled with helium and gauze You don't need words to make a statement It's very difficult to be that ***** I suffer from delusions of Illusions of grandeur Pomp and circumstance My theme song I've graduated to this degree of decadence Or is it dereliction? I always get those two confused Which is the one where Ripple wine and crack ******* Are preferable to Caviar and pink champagne? No matter I am equally distant from both “Who does that,” she mutters As she watches a Woman in stilettos Being urinated on by a Hairy man on the *** channel I sit with my ink pen and Draw black eyes on the Models in women's magazines She turns to me “Are you even listening?” This pale, shelled out Husk of a former woman asks I'm listening I retort within my own shackled mind But if I pay attention I just may **** us both
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Mar 8, 2015
Mar 8, 2015 at 9:06 PM UTC
MOTEL
I didn't know anything about a ****** I was called from sleep to be told your love had died The lanes and lights passing you by But your path never strayed Your mind became lost Because the enduring sounds of the waves Kept you up at night I'm still here And now, a knock resonates at my motel door
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Jan 13, 2015
Jan 13, 2015 at 6:59 PM UTC
Daytona Beach Pier
I hate Dallas But the hotels nice Well, at least the view is See it? Beautiful isn’t it. That was earlier today. Now I’m here Just standing here **** In front of this window I’m wishing someone to see me For a good laugh Or Maybe they will muster up the courage to come knock on my door Even with the Do Not Disturb Sign hanging from the **** It’s something about hotels that gets me thinking this way Out of sorts and more so in the gutter To think of all the love made between these walls Passionate - married, unmarried, one night stands, flings… the good, the bad, and the really REALLY bad I imagine more of the third I’m not this way at home I lay content in my cotton sheets with the occasional hum of a car passing But here, in this hotel looking out 26 stories above the city All I want is you…against me Until the sun rises Where we will carry on Go back to our lives In silence
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May 5, 2014
May 5, 2014 at 12:03 AM UTC
His View
it's four am, and i am lying in the bed that cracks every time somebody touches it, just like i me. and i stare at the ceiling, thinking about my ****** up life and how i will run away even further. i m just hoping that nobody will be looking for me and nobody will find me, because i do not want to be found.
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Apr 25, 2014
Apr 25, 2014 at 7:29 AM UTC
****** motel