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They call my name and suddenly everything goes quiet. Not the crowd, not the clapping just the noise inside my head that used to feel so loud. I take a step, then another, my heart somewhere between pride and panic. This is it. The moment they told me to wait for. The finish line that somehow feels like a beginning I’m not ready for. I think of late nights, of silent struggles, of days I almost gave up but didn’t. I think of who I was when this all started smaller, softer, not knowing how much I’d have to grow. And now I’m here, walking forward while a part of me is still looking back. At the hallways, the laughter, the version of me I’ll never be again. My hand shakes slightly as I reach for the diploma, like I’m holding proof that time didn’t stop just because I wanted it to. I smile but there’s something behind it. A quiet ache, a soft goodbye no one else can hear. Because this walk isn’t just a step forward it’s letting go of a life I didn’t realize I’d miss this much. 🎓🖤
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Mar 24
Mar 24, 2026 at 6:11 PM UTC
The Walk
It’s a city in the mountain view **** I’ve never seen something quite like you So fun and free, yet peaceful- A constant reminder of nature’s beauty. For some the growing happens after high school For others, the change happens in graduate school I was nervous to make the transition alone However, him leaving turned out to be the best **** thing since edible cookie dough
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Sep 1, 2021
Sep 1, 2021 at 12:10 AM UTC
It’s a Beautiful Place, I Know
Life’s Next Chapter Sometimes life pulls us away From the ones who help us get through the tough days The thought of being without them pains me to say A part of me wants to give up my dreams to go away to school to stay. I am worried that I won’t make friends I’ll be lonely in this new place, On my own and not knowing my way The thought of leaving behind my loved ones Terrifies me more than I’d like to say A part of me wants to give up my dreams to go away to school to stay. I am worried that making the move Might end up being a horrible mistake I’m not sure if I’m mentally ready For what life may throw my way The wonders of the unknown concerns me I want my life to be on track without delays. A part of me wants to give up my dreams to go away to school to stay.
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May 1, 2021
May 1, 2021 at 10:19 PM UTC
Life’s Next Chapter
I find myself paddling against the current. Those ahead ask why I am falling behind. Those behind don’t see how every stroke wears me down. It takes everything I have just to stay afloat. "We began this race after you and have already overtaken you, how pathetic." I want to give up. "You have to keep going, you’ve already made it so much farther than us!" I want to be better. "Then BE better." I don’t have the strength. "You wouldn’t have made it this far if you weren’t strong!" I worry the current is stronger than I am. "It is no stronger than ours surely." My canoe strains against the pressure. "Your canoe is a GIFT, you mustn't waste it!" I close my eyes for the briefest of spells, try to steal just a moment of rest. As I reopen them… I realise that it’s gone. My goal. What was my goal again? I have been paddling in this current so long... Where was I going again? All I remember is the agony of each stroke, The words of condemnation for my failures The presupposition of my achievements. "You’re a disappointment, you should give up." "If you give up, you will be a disappointment." "You’re not good enough to be here." "You’re too good not to be there." "Look at your failures!" "Focus on your accomplishments!" My canoe breaks, and I am plunged into the icy waters of uncertainty. I have forgotten what my own voice sounds like. I need to hear it. I open my mouth to remind myself, but nothing comes out. Instead, the current consumes me; inside and out. What could have been and what could never be are gone. I am gone.
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Jul 22, 2019
Jul 22, 2019 at 12:26 PM UTC
Grad School Angst
I find myself paddling against the current. Those ahead ask why I am falling behind. Those behind don’t see how every stroke wears me down. It takes everything I have just to stay afloat. "We began this race after you and have already overtaken you, how pathetic." I want to give up. "You have to keep going, you’ve already made it so much farther than us!" I want to be better. "Then BE better." I don’t have the strength. "You wouldn’t have made it this far if you weren’t strong!" I worry the current is stronger than I am. "It is no stronger than ours surely." My canoe strains against the pressure. "Your canoe is a GIFT, you mustn't waste it!" I close my eyes for the briefest of spells, try to steal just a moment of rest. As I reopen them… I realise that it’s gone. My goal. What was my goal again? I have been paddling in this current so long... Where was I going again? All I remember is the agony of each stroke, The words of condemnation for my failures The presupposition of my achievements. "You’re a disappointment, you should give up." "If you give up, you will be a disappointment." "You’re not good enough to be here." "You’re too good not to be there." "Look at your failures!" "Focus on your accomplishments!" My canoe breaks, and I am plunged into the icy waters of uncertainty. I have forgotten what my own voice sounds like. I need to hear it. I open my mouth to remind myself, but nothing comes out. Instead, the current consumes me; inside and out. What could have been and what could never be are gone. I am gone.
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five years old. a wobbling mass of uncertainty perched haphazardly on a bike. daddy holds me upright, his strong hands refuse to let me fall. pedalling, pedalling, faster and faster a weight releases at last, I'm flying. six years old. first day of first grade I clutch onto my mom's hand so many children, both familiar and stranger letters, numbers, a line on the wall a smiling teacher. I let go of her hand sit in a green desk, grab a crayon one last glance out the door but she is gone. ten years old. suspended in the cool water skis strapped awkwardly on my numb feet a lifejacket rises tight around my neck my mom behind me, holds me right side up in a firm embrace suddenly, a massive force pulls me up out of her comfortable arms through the deafening spray of the water my mother cheers. I'm gliding, and I've never felt so free. sixteen years old. my hands caress the steering wheel dad's in the passenger seat cautious, careful, I proceed the open road ahead of us we pick up speed, but then a deer. his hand grabs my shoulder my foot slams on the brakes. I'll pay more attention when I'm driving alone. we take a breath. we're safe. eighteen years old. I scan the crowd as I sit in my crisp blue robe. my strange square hat. no more unfamiliar faces. just layers and layers of memories blended on top of each other. my name is announced I stand up, cross the stage, again, a mass of uncertainty. again, awkward in my high heeled shoes my dad holds my mom's shoulder my mom clutches his hand. once more, I'm forced to let go in order to move forward. a diploma replaces my mother's hand crushing realization replaces my father's security again, I'm flying but things will never be the same. c.l.c
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Jun 16, 2016
Jun 16, 2016 at 2:24 PM UTC
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five years old. a wobbling mass of uncertainty perched haphazardly on a bike. daddy holds me upright, his strong hands refuse to let me fall. pedalling, pedalling, faster and faster a weight releases at last, I'm flying. six years old. first day of first grade I clutch onto my mom's hand so many children, both familiar and stranger letters, numbers, a line on the wall a smiling teacher. I let go of her hand sit in a green desk, grab a crayon one last glance out the door but she is gone. ten years old. suspended in the cool water skis strapped awkwardly on my numb feet a lifejacket rises tight around my neck my mom behind me, holds me right side up in a firm embrace suddenly, a massive force pulls me up out of her comfortable arms through the deafening spray of the water my mother cheers. I'm gliding, and I've never felt so free. sixteen years old. my hands caress the steering wheel dad's in the passenger seat cautious, careful, I proceed the open road ahead of us we pick up speed, but then a deer. his hand grabs my shoulder my foot slams on the brakes. I'll pay more attention when I'm driving alone. we take a breath. we're safe. eighteen years old. I scan the crowd as I sit in my crisp blue robe. my strange square hat. no more unfamiliar faces. just layers and layers of memories blended on top of each other. my name is announced I stand up, cross the stage, again, a mass of uncertainty. again, awkward in my high heeled shoes my dad holds my mom's shoulder my mom clutches his hand. once more, I'm forced to let go in order to move forward. a diploma replaces my mother's hand crushing realization replaces my father's security again, I'm flying but things will never be the same. c.l.c
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She said “Describe yourself in a sentence, We want to see what you do with constraints.” So I thought to be clever and said “My sentence will extend eternally, bound by infinite commas, and perhaps, if I’ve very lucky; a semicomma or two; you see the shackles that you’ve tried to impose are only a barrier if you let them be; but me, I see opportunities where none should exist, excuse me ma’am this may be and admittance interview but I see it as an investment opportunity, my future, your gain… oh and period.” She looked at her collegues, not betraying any amusements, annoyance, entertainment, nothing. As if I had given the same answer as the last four people who sat where I do. She rephrases, “How about a sentence with less than 10 words.” I smile “I am worth more than a ten-word statement of intent.” Eleven words. She noticed. Twenty minutes later I am released, apparently I’m not the right fit for their program.
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Dec 14, 2015
Dec 14, 2015 at 10:26 PM UTC
MFA Interview