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#disappoint
Some days it feels like no matter what I choose, it’s the wrong answer circled in permanent ink. I try to be better, quieter, nicer, more focused, more enough— and still something slips, something breaks, something disappoints someone. It’s like I’m walking through a test no one gave me the notes for, graded on things I didn’t know counted. When I mess up, it echoes. When I do okay, it disappears. Good never seems loud enough to stay. People say, “Just try your best,” like my best isn’t already tired of being measured and coming up short. I keep showing up, keep trying, keep adjusting the way I stand, speak, act— and wonder if any of it actually matters or if I’m just rearranging mistakes into different shapes. But I’m still here. Still breathing. Still attempting the next right step, even when the last one felt wrong. Maybe that counts for something— even if today it doesn’t feel like it does.
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Jan 29
Jan 29, 2026 at 2:19 PM UTC
I'm Trying Though...
my dad taught me English just one time I was at the age of nine or maybe six three or two I have no clue it’s his first language or something close to it from Cuba, China, Canada, to college in the Netherlands and meeting Belgium for the first not only for thirst but because it’s a place called home for my grandparents cause at the end you always come back to what you’ve had I guess that doesn't rhyme but It's fine when I was twelve I had to go to language camp trying to learn the language that has burned on the soul of my dad don't get mad I came crying home practice was needed one week not enough so after summer turned school returned English I learned while I sat on that chair in the seat over there pen and book it was terrible too but after three years I could finally say "How are you today?” not special for sure just studying this everyone can do it but I hope someday I can make him proud when he won't shout when I make… a misssteaaacke I'm sorry
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Jul 27, 2025
Jul 27, 2025 at 10:00 AM UTC
Just tell me (a story of a language)
mother gave her life to me gave me her hugs, so i could feel her heartbeat she held me close, and whispered my name, like a promise. all this went away with a few words … blank, my face. i never would have thought i never would have thought.
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Feb 3, 2025
Feb 3, 2025 at 7:44 PM UTC
mother
I’ve seen it myself sometimes. Shooting pool with a Marine I liked, a buddy. He’s drunk. Always had a ***** problem and women had disappointed him, no more than any other man. Anyway, the only gal in the unit, honest, hard working, blonde comes into the room. We all wanted her I’d shown her my poems, which she’d taken a pass on. Joe starts teasing her about her tiny **** touching them with his cue. She’s scared. So am I. Joe’s stronger, faster than me, by a lot, and when he’s drunk he knows no friend. How long can I stay silent, I calculate. What does he have to do before I speak. Speech, none. If I don’t put him down with the first crack of my cue, I’m done. Lucky for me she gets away unharmed, goes back to her room. I think Joe assumed me and the other guys, by our nervous smiles, would enjoy a **** tonight. Men are such chickens, I can’t speak for women. You basically hold your breath your whole life. Live in a zoo **** and ***** And if it comes to that, you’ll **** on orders, from who? Another swinging **** who fears his death. You’ve got to make every day a good day to die.
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Nov 15, 2022
Nov 15, 2022 at 6:27 AM UTC
A Good Day to Die
I think about calling you But I know it would only disappoint “Hey, what’s up—your friends not home? Why are you calling me on the phone?” I’d lie and say I just had time to waste Went from my safest place to saving face And it’s sad Sad I no longer know you like that
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Aug 2, 2020
Aug 2, 2020 at 10:29 AM UTC
Disappoint
Sitting in my silence of solitude, I won't spark a conversation. Won't fight if I'm the exclude, I'll be fine with this isolation. I know I won't become that focal point, For I'm much too afraid I'll disappoint.
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May 24, 2020
May 24, 2020 at 2:42 PM UTC
Disappoint
I'm learning a lot Finding out what it means to be loved I'm confused because it's not by the person I thought But I'm trusting that even when I'm surprised, You're not It was exhausting praying for someone who wasn't there Made more difficult by the fact that he didn't care Paid attention just too days too late After I waited two years for that date Nothing you do is pointless But honestly I'm still figuring out what the point was Pushing me to step out in faith Not for an outcome or for the hell of the chase But to realize giving you my heart is never a waste Because what I actually wanted hadn't yet entered the page And the man for me to love was really two years away I'm thankful I didn't give anyone else that part to play I'm thankful that you helped me to wait I think you were teaching me to trust my doubt But to never let it outweigh my faith You gave me a discerning mind as a tool not a weight And a hear that can dream and doesn't like to play it safe So once again, I surrender my heart Putting it in your hands to love you'll have me love Because I've learned that though it can me painful at times You never disappoint
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Jan 6, 2020
Jan 6, 2020 at 1:18 AM UTC
Hey God
If you place me on a pedestal, I can’t help but disappoint you; For no one is infallible, No one survives unbroken, No one remains unchanged. When it all turns to custard, Who do you blame? Me for letting you down, Or yourself for doing the same, By expecting too much of me.
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May 4, 2020
May 4, 2020 at 5:07 PM UTC
Pedestal
We deserve better He doesn't see it now How he let us down She will find out That I was there too Taking space in his mind Popping up on his screen Not trying to be mean But sis He was cheating
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Dec 17, 2019
Dec 17, 2019 at 1:20 AM UTC
Cheating
The guilt in my chest. But I can't go back. I know. The future is unhealthy and unstable But the guilt of disappointing everyone that liked us. Do I go back? Fake it all Act like everything is alright to make everyone happy. What do I do....
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Sep 17, 2019
Sep 17, 2019 at 6:02 PM UTC
Guilt
"Just let me die. I'm so tired of this. These tears won't stop. Why the pain still lives in my heart? I'm so ******* tired..." I understand... - Ana
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Jul 30, 2019
Jul 30, 2019 at 9:23 AM UTC
Oh! Pain Still Lives..
Life is tough, that’s what they say But they don’t know what it’s like everyday To wake up in the morning and go to school Just so people can test you and prove you’re a fool The teacher says you obviously didn’t try But they don’t know you go to your room and you cry You did put in the effort, you did your part They just don’t understand that you’re not that smart Then comes the pressure from mum and dad Who are so clearly disappointed that your grades are bad You are punished and picked on for the rest of the year Because you finally gave up on your future career That was once so close, but is now so distant However, your parents and teachers are still so insistent It’s hard enough getting up and going to class Without the pressure and expectation that you have to pass The worst part, however, is not that you’re a disappointment It’s the permanent, never ending embarrassment Of always failing and coming last Of never being good enough, your confidence is dropping fast Everyone else seems to be doing just fine Their parents are all proud, unlike mine Honestly, I can’t think if a worse place than this When in reality it’s made out as someplace that we should miss I won’t miss it, I’ll be glad to leave Four years wasted because failure is all I ever received I know it’s my fault and I’m the one to blame I gave up so early because I was ashamed To my family, I’m a failure, and I’m a failure to myself Everyone’s expectations only damaged my mental health If I ever have kids, I will always try To make sure the fear of failure of never the reason they cry People need to realize that school’s no longer fun or good Because some of us don’t fit in, although we wish we could
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Jun 17, 2019
Jun 17, 2019 at 3:13 AM UTC
Failure
Life is tough, that’s what they say But they don’t know what it’s like everyday To wake up in the morning and go to school Just so people can test you and prove you’re a fool The teacher says you obviously didn’t try But they don’t know you go to your room and you cry You did put in the effort, you did your part They just don’t understand that you’re not that smart Then comes the pressure from mum and dad Who are so clearly disappointed that your grades are bad You are punished and picked on for the rest of the year Because you finally gave up on your future career That was once so close, but is now so distant However, your parents and teachers are still so insistent It’s hard enough getting up and going to class Without the pressure and expectation that you have to pass The worst part, however, is not that you’re a disappointment It’s the permanent, never ending embarrassment Of always failing and coming last Of never being good enough, your confidence is dropping fast Everyone else seems to be doing just fine Their parents are all proud, unlike mine Honestly, I can’t think if a worse place than this When in reality it’s made out as someplace that we should miss I won’t miss it, I’ll be glad to leave Four years wasted because failure is all I ever received I know it’s my fault and I’m the one to blame I gave up so early because I was ashamed To my family, I’m a failure, and I’m a failure to myself Everyone’s expectations only damaged my mental health If I ever have kids, I will always try To make sure the fear of failure of never the reason they cry People need to realize that school’s no longer fun or good Because some of us don’t fit in, although we wish we could
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Look at the stars, they have a soul being right above each night,   Twinkling; forcing us to be lost into them they'll never disappoint you Look at the rain, it has soul too the drops fall from the heavens and the earth celebrates its arrival it'll never let you down You've been busy with the humans been busy getting disappointed My dear, most of them do not have a soul Look at the rainbow, the love of a mother, the morning dew and the light of a candle they all have a soul that won't disappoint you Be surrounded with them and the beings with soul will themselves be driven to you.
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Mar 31, 2019
Mar 31, 2019 at 7:11 PM UTC
SOUL
i like how space doesn't care about me at least it is impossible to disappoint the sun
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Jan 12, 2019
Jan 12, 2019 at 5:54 AM UTC
the indifferent universe
How do I control these thoughts I just want to end it I don't dare to tell you that a long time ago I gave up Because you believe in me and I don't want to disappoint you Because if you knew that there was no hope I would end up all alone again
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Jan 4, 2019
Jan 4, 2019 at 10:54 AM UTC
how
The leaves will fall You will gain memories scars and all The people will be sad Trying to make up for the friend ship you never had You will not cry These people will only try Disappointment runs through your veins Your love leaves only stains Why would you wait for the leaves to fall Because all you want is to feel loved that’s all Green to orange like hate to love They act as if you are a pure white dove With hate you die For love you lie with no one you choose to walk That’s when you find your heart drawn around in chalk
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Dec 23, 2018
Dec 23, 2018 at 9:59 AM UTC
The leaves will fall
I'm learning as I get older Everyone will bring you sorrow Whether it's sixty years down the road Six months, sixteen days, or tomorrow Eventually those you care for most Who claim they feel the same in return Will hurt you with words, actions, and decisions It's human nature as I have learned Our selfishness makes us monsters We all take a turn before we die Playing the villain in anothers story Regardless of the ways we try It's always the ones that love you the most That leave the deepest, worst, ugliest scars Then to pacify the pain we pass it along to the next We are imperfect; it's just how we are Yes everyone you know will cause damage They'll become reasons you put up high walls And are too afraid to let the outside world in Why you gradually stop answering calls   We all make mistakes, we all carry secrets We all find different ways to deal It is not the wound you inflict that matters But if you choose to run or stay to help it heal
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Dec 20, 2018
Dec 20, 2018 at 12:48 PM UTC
We Are Only Human
He only goes with "skinny ******* or so his friends say But it's alright, I don't go with guys who call girls ******* anyway
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Oct 15, 2018
Oct 15, 2018 at 1:07 AM UTC
Anyway
I know you're disappointed that early fall sunrise not happening on beach or shore sadness, no disguise Just think of me and smile a touch mild and brown the eyes gazing at and going back to the very first surprise A vacation in the mind in memory resolved never tainted but fresh and whole the moans the laughs the sighs
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Oct 11, 2018
Oct 11, 2018 at 9:52 AM UTC
Mentally vacationing
A young girl plants a garden, Teaching herself through books. She’s pulling out **** by **** Passing by the games and brooks. She yawns as she rises each morn To tend her plants so dear. Pansies, daisies, daffodils, Her love for them is clear. She picks a bunch this morning, A sweet-smelling bouquet, And enters naught but joy into The Fair’s gardening display. The girl is young and inexperienced, She knows this but she smiles. For even if she doesn’t win, Her flowers are seen for miles. The day does end, as all days must, The girl waits with giddy thoughts. Surprisingly she’s awarded A ribbon of forget-me-nots. In a completely awed excitement, The girl rushes down the way. In fact she’s so exuberant She near forgets her own bouquet! She runs down her street into her home, Pride gleaming in her eyes. “Ma, Pa, I’ve worked so hard, Guess what! I’ve earned first prize! “All those early mornings and work Helped me win my ribbon of blue. I came home as quick as I could, I just had to tell you!” Her mother puts down her magazine, Her father looks up from the news. They stand up, looking at the flowers, And, with a few words, extinguish her fuse. “You silly girl, you should know better.” “Oh honey, what did you do?” “We raised you smarter than this, my dear, You can’t put flowers in stew.”
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Jul 19, 2018
Jul 19, 2018 at 2:23 AM UTC
Flowers
I am always going to disappoint someone But from now on it won’t be me
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Jun 7, 2018
Jun 7, 2018 at 3:02 AM UTC
Disappoint
When she spoke I watched her eyes Her lips expounded love But her eyes revealed disappointment I resented her more With every kind remark Softly spoken Behind a deceiving smile
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Jun 7, 2018
Jun 7, 2018 at 2:07 AM UTC
Deceiving Smile
you smell like clean soap. cold, soft hands and skin that is wrinkled with worry. your eyes shadow your cheeks. i made you worry, i'm so sorry did i disappoint you today? if you knew what i know would you care less? i don't need a cup of water no- i don't deserve one. because my tiredness is made up of lies, and my productivity is an endless maze of recycled warmth. i am selfish. i push myself underwater because i like the feeling of oxygen leaving my lungs. GO AWAY and LEAVE ME ALONE because I HATE YOU hello your eyes seem to shadow your cheeks. i made you worry, but you smell like clean soap. i'm so sorry. did i disappoint you today?
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Apr 5, 2018
Apr 5, 2018 at 7:58 AM UTC
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