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what would you say, if on your very last day   they got your order wrong, at McDonald’s   and when you told the pimpled faced nihilist you asked for no pickles on your Big Mac (!)   he stared at you through two gray sockets   that floated on his face, like the eyes of time     what would you think, if on your very last day         conjoined twins were born in Siberia   and one would be deaf , the other left   to listen for both for eternity, and feel the black swell of loneliness, even with blood of a brother coursing through his veins   what   would you do, if   on your very last day   you could buy more time   to create useless rhyme and it would only cost… ten cents     what would you know, if during the veil of night, your heart skipped a few beats, then thumped a final time, while you were still dreaming of a dance, under a gleaming sun, and cherished daylight   never to come
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Dec 16, 2014
Dec 16, 2014 at 10:01 PM UTC
the very last day--unwanted pickles
what would you say, if on your very last day   they got your order wrong, at McDonald’s   and when you told the pimpled faced nihilist you asked for no pickles on your Big Mac (!)   he stared at you through two gray sockets   that floated on his face, like the eyes of time     what would you think, if on your very last day         conjoined twins were born in Siberia   and one would be deaf , the other left   to listen for both for eternity, and feel the black swell of loneliness, even with blood of a brother coursing through his veins   what   would you do, if   on your very last day   you could buy more time   to create useless rhyme and it would only cost… ten cents     what would you know, if during the veil of night, your heart skipped a few beats, then thumped a final time, while you were still dreaming of a dance, under a gleaming sun, and cherished daylight   never to come
Still plagued by writers block--thought of this in the shower this morning. It never did get where I wanted it to go.
spysgrandson
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Dec 16, 2014
Dec 16, 2014 at 10:01 PM UTC
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