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And in my heart, it stung like thirty thousand whips when you left me without a note of goodbye. And in my mind, it burnt like thirty thousand torches when I remember your promise. "I will never leave you." And like the leaves of Fall, you did. - PMT
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Dec 9, 2014
Dec 9, 2014 at 8:41 PM UTC
The Promise
And in my heart, it stung like thirty thousand whips when you left me without a note of goodbye. And in my mind, it burnt like thirty thousand torches when I remember your promise. "I will never leave you." And like the leaves of Fall, you did. - PMT
Entry no. 3: The Promise. For all the one who left and got left behind.
merrymademoiselle
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Dec 9, 2014
Dec 9, 2014 at 8:41 PM UTC
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