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Green is the eye of Venus, though now tightly shut. Ancient music drums, Trees viridian-hued. The night has settled, dark as fear. I rode a stallion- Jet-black he was, Against an array of foliage, Emerald green, Into the dead of night, He rode. Sleeping, I am? Or am I living within some land of the surreal? Lost within a valley, I lie amongst tall reeds. Water showers down upon me. Skies turn mauve, purplish- No calm before this storm. Struck by lightening, Branches are fallen by the wind. Upon awakening, As day breaks, The ancient music’s melody is arrested. A sibilant voice whispers to me: “Sleep amongst the dead, And depart from the living.” As I nonchalantly gaze at the rising sun, I wave “goodbye” to Venus, And as she falls behind the horizon, She waves back at me, and winks at me, While ancient music begins drumming again… Claudia Krizay
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Nov 30, 2014
Nov 30, 2014 at 5:59 PM UTC
Venus
Green is the eye of Venus, though now tightly shut. Ancient music drums, Trees viridian-hued. The night has settled, dark as fear. I rode a stallion- Jet-black he was, Against an array of foliage, Emerald green, Into the dead of night, He rode. Sleeping, I am? Or am I living within some land of the surreal? Lost within a valley, I lie amongst tall reeds. Water showers down upon me. Skies turn mauve, purplish- No calm before this storm. Struck by lightening, Branches are fallen by the wind. Upon awakening, As day breaks, The ancient music’s melody is arrested. A sibilant voice whispers to me: “Sleep amongst the dead, And depart from the living.” As I nonchalantly gaze at the rising sun, I wave “goodbye” to Venus, And as she falls behind the horizon, She waves back at me, and winks at me, While ancient music begins drumming again… Claudia Krizay
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Nov 30, 2014
Nov 30, 2014 at 5:59 PM UTC
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