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Sometimes I wonder If we could've been If your squinty smile and long black hair Could've shunned the demons that always held me back Maybe if your quirkiness could've made me less of a hack I don't know I think to myself You and Me, could've never been Your perfection was on every level From your inner To your outer From level 1-1 to level 8-4 it seemed like my thoughts were just a locked door Preventing myself to take the first step into your world
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Nov 26, 2014
Nov 26, 2014 at 1:49 AM UTC
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Sometimes I wonder If we could've been If your squinty smile and long black hair Could've shunned the demons that always held me back Maybe if your quirkiness could've made me less of a hack I don't know I think to myself You and Me, could've never been Your perfection was on every level From your inner To your outer From level 1-1 to level 8-4 it seemed like my thoughts were just a locked door Preventing myself to take the first step into your world
Something I came up with right off the bat, I feel that the more I practice the better i'll get. So hey If you see this leave some constructive criticism please it would much appreciated.
AnthonyCaceres
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Nov 26, 2014
Nov 26, 2014 at 1:49 AM UTC
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