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Let not my eyes close for truly resting; I shall not sleep until I return home. Until I am aware of your presence Before me, then I shall cease to exist. In future, come clarity upon me, That it may give me the strength to go on With life and hope, as I wander, endless, Until the day I shall return to love. Though my insides quake with fearful hoping, I shall not falter, for you lie waiting. True to my word I’ll remain undying And honest, until the day our eyes meet. A lips’ sweetest kiss doth long awaits me, A promise to never part as we have.
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Feb 9, 2011
Feb 9, 2011 at 11:03 AM UTC
Homesick, Heartsick
Let not my eyes close for truly resting; I shall not sleep until I return home. Until I am aware of your presence Before me, then I shall cease to exist. In future, come clarity upon me, That it may give me the strength to go on With life and hope, as I wander, endless, Until the day I shall return to love. Though my insides quake with fearful hoping, I shall not falter, for you lie waiting. True to my word I’ll remain undying And honest, until the day our eyes meet. A lips’ sweetest kiss doth long awaits me, A promise to never part as we have.
February 7, 2011 [my first attempt at iambic pentameter]
sleep-in-the-sky-5d
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Feb 9, 2011
Feb 9, 2011 at 11:03 AM UTC
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