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Whose gun is at your head? Tomorrow I graduate, And feast on my heart; they're giving it back. Only small parts though... Freedom is not exactly free. As I tick through a day that doesn't feel      R. E. A. L. I'll remember a time when eating clocks Was a delight And night never came Because time never sung. But what will tomorrow bring? The final burst of detrimental metaphors and acidic teachers egos, Who depend on a pay package "Not enough" for their knowledge. They should've stayed human. I wince as the cogs twist And an ever continuing robotic system Chomps down on thousands of more souls. And I beg for new a freedom.
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Nov 10, 2014
Nov 10, 2014 at 6:44 AM UTC
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Whose gun is at your head? Tomorrow I graduate, And feast on my heart; they're giving it back. Only small parts though... Freedom is not exactly free. As I tick through a day that doesn't feel      R. E. A. L. I'll remember a time when eating clocks Was a delight And night never came Because time never sung. But what will tomorrow bring? The final burst of detrimental metaphors and acidic teachers egos, Who depend on a pay package "Not enough" for their knowledge. They should've stayed human. I wince as the cogs twist And an ever continuing robotic system Chomps down on thousands of more souls. And I beg for new a freedom.
A revamped version of one sentence  and a whole lot of mind ***** I'm scared for tomorrow.
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Nov 10, 2014
Nov 10, 2014 at 6:44 AM UTC
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