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Crushing disappointment A dark shadow Smothering my world Clouding my mind Why ? Why ? There are no roses Only thorns No fire, only the smoke I'm blind to your kind comfort Why ? I cry hiding behind a smile. But you are wrong! There is a fire Behind the smoke. It's in my heart! The thorns come with roses A beautiful sight. The tears of my disappointment Just made up my mind I will try harder again and again ! I CAN !
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Oct 11, 2014
Oct 11, 2014 at 4:30 AM UTC
Disappointment
Crushing disappointment A dark shadow Smothering my world Clouding my mind Why ? Why ? There are no roses Only thorns No fire, only the smoke I'm blind to your kind comfort Why ? I cry hiding behind a smile. But you are wrong! There is a fire Behind the smoke. It's in my heart! The thorns come with roses A beautiful sight. The tears of my disappointment Just made up my mind I will try harder again and again ! I CAN !
Bad luck in a competition. 22.11.14 ...I did it ! I won !!
#fire#tears#try#again#disapointment
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Oct 11, 2014
Oct 11, 2014 at 4:30 AM UTC
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