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I took her breath away not anticipating the consequences, now she's grasping for air and we're both helpless. Love is senseless. We share the same breathlessness. What a lovely sentiment. But too much of a good thing anywhere can be suffocating, and your lungs are failing. So don't fall for me darling, I'll only let you drown. [ARH]
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Sep 21, 2014
Sep 21, 2014 at 11:52 PM UTC
Drown
I took her breath away not anticipating the consequences, now she's grasping for air and we're both helpless. Love is senseless. We share the same breathlessness. What a lovely sentiment. But too much of a good thing anywhere can be suffocating, and your lungs are failing. So don't fall for me darling, I'll only let you drown. [ARH]
alberto-ruiz
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Sep 21, 2014
Sep 21, 2014 at 11:52 PM UTC
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