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Like the skins of an onion, You peel at my layers, Hoping we two become one, Please answer my prayers. Laid bare so exposed to you, All consuming ***** love, You whisper what you want me to do, Our parts together fit, like a glove. Is this a dream, or are you really devouring me?, Can i open my eyes to see,us sharing my cake?, Like warm,wet honey, you are pouring me, I reach that place and begin to shake. This meal tastes so good to us, We eat it , but we take our time, Your custard filling makes me hiss, Isn't our layercake so sublime? (c) eileen mcgreevy 18/12/09
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Dec 18, 2009
Dec 18, 2009 at 3:56 AM UTC
Layercake
Like the skins of an onion, You peel at my layers, Hoping we two become one, Please answer my prayers. Laid bare so exposed to you, All consuming ***** love, You whisper what you want me to do, Our parts together fit, like a glove. Is this a dream, or are you really devouring me?, Can i open my eyes to see,us sharing my cake?, Like warm,wet honey, you are pouring me, I reach that place and begin to shake. This meal tastes so good to us, We eat it , but we take our time, Your custard filling makes me hiss, Isn't our layercake so sublime? (c) eileen mcgreevy 18/12/09
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Dec 18, 2009
Dec 18, 2009 at 3:56 AM UTC
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