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what happened to you that burned a fire in your gut, you look like you breathed in a forest fire overnight an forgot how to exhale anything but ash and dust. you look to be in pain, like your lungs are rubbing together like two pieces of sandpaper. I can see you need help to put yourself out, but I can't get too close without burning myself.
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Sep 11, 2014
Sep 11, 2014 at 12:43 PM UTC
forest fire
what happened to you that burned a fire in your gut, you look like you breathed in a forest fire overnight an forgot how to exhale anything but ash and dust. you look to be in pain, like your lungs are rubbing together like two pieces of sandpaper. I can see you need help to put yourself out, but I can't get too close without burning myself.
andrea-hundt
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Sep 11, 2014
Sep 11, 2014 at 12:43 PM UTC
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