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lately i've been day dreaming at night and every time you're grasping at the smoke in my lungs trying to make sense of the poetry that you think is about yourself the steam was coming off  of the asphalt  and i thought about  how i was so breathless when you told me i float just out of your grasp but at least you can see me i've been blind since the day we met and as it turns out that was more curse than blessing i could see nothing except for the words you used to keep me focused on you you were always the selfish one but what I gave you couldn't take it's not enough to just look away because now I don't see anything but that's better than seeing you  you in all your  underwhelming  overbearing need to be seen by everyone i wonder do you think fire is scared  of fizzling out and dying  or does it just take pride  in giving warmth  and roaring while it can [holyoak]
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Aug 24, 2014
Aug 24, 2014 at 5:49 PM UTC
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lately i've been day dreaming at night and every time you're grasping at the smoke in my lungs trying to make sense of the poetry that you think is about yourself the steam was coming off  of the asphalt  and i thought about  how i was so breathless when you told me i float just out of your grasp but at least you can see me i've been blind since the day we met and as it turns out that was more curse than blessing i could see nothing except for the words you used to keep me focused on you you were always the selfish one but what I gave you couldn't take it's not enough to just look away because now I don't see anything but that's better than seeing you  you in all your  underwhelming  overbearing need to be seen by everyone i wonder do you think fire is scared  of fizzling out and dying  or does it just take pride  in giving warmth  and roaring while it can [holyoak]
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Aug 24, 2014
Aug 24, 2014 at 5:49 PM UTC
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