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thoughts, they are         smoke escaping from chimneys and clouding darkened skies, skies home to birds flapping their wings trying to fly, thoughts are flying bricks falling all at once on shoulders already holding weights, weighing the night's silence on open palms and fingers blackened with soot hold feathers plucked from tree branches, seeking to clean bloodied slates in gardens where dreams flow down the river into caves -caves with lights at the end of tunnels, and lamps which flicker during storms and lightning which penetrates even closed eyes.                        thoughts, they are companions with opens arms which sometimes have knives hidden up their sleeves, and they are wells which hold coins- silver, gold, bronze and brass. dreams and wishes fondled by the gentle, sometimes      corrosive current of waves and shadows which carry the tube light just so they stay alive.      but these thoughts, they are also my reason for you, chains and leaves hanging with ease around a neck and rings which sing like canaries on insomniac fingers    and crimson letters carrying pictures, so with that is my justice, because with your name they give me solace, and with your image they give me peace and with the sound of your voice in the meadows of my mind, i find tranquility. and with the shadows that follow on my heels, i laugh and i smile,     because with these thoughts i am with you and you,           you are with me ---------
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Aug 19, 2014
Aug 19, 2014 at 11:36 AM UTC
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thoughts, they are         smoke escaping from chimneys and clouding darkened skies, skies home to birds flapping their wings trying to fly, thoughts are flying bricks falling all at once on shoulders already holding weights, weighing the night's silence on open palms and fingers blackened with soot hold feathers plucked from tree branches, seeking to clean bloodied slates in gardens where dreams flow down the river into caves -caves with lights at the end of tunnels, and lamps which flicker during storms and lightning which penetrates even closed eyes.                        thoughts, they are companions with opens arms which sometimes have knives hidden up their sleeves, and they are wells which hold coins- silver, gold, bronze and brass. dreams and wishes fondled by the gentle, sometimes      corrosive current of waves and shadows which carry the tube light just so they stay alive.      but these thoughts, they are also my reason for you, chains and leaves hanging with ease around a neck and rings which sing like canaries on insomniac fingers    and crimson letters carrying pictures, so with that is my justice, because with your name they give me solace, and with your image they give me peace and with the sound of your voice in the meadows of my mind, i find tranquility. and with the shadows that follow on my heels, i laugh and i smile,     because with these thoughts i am with you and you,           you are with me ---------
Inspired by poet E. E. Cummings, though the official name for the writing style in question is still debatable (supposedly).
ramsha-ahmed
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Aug 19, 2014
Aug 19, 2014 at 11:36 AM UTC
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