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*When I look around my life I feel I'm only scratching the surface I often throw out the question of 'why' and wonder if it's really worth it Aren't we here with a job to do or maybe that's just what they say A more positive outlook I'd choose and find a better purpose to my day I could climb the highest of mountains which would mean taking to the streets helping out those who have lost all hope giving of myself in their need I just want to give a part of me that I have not always been shown offer all I have within my heart the best feeling we could ever know Because life's not all about what you take but what you have to give not giving all you have would be a mistake and really is no way to live*
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Aug 14, 2014
Aug 14, 2014 at 1:14 PM UTC
Life, under the surface! (Collab with Mike Hauser :))
*When I look around my life I feel I'm only scratching the surface I often throw out the question of 'why' and wonder if it's really worth it Aren't we here with a job to do or maybe that's just what they say A more positive outlook I'd choose and find a better purpose to my day I could climb the highest of mountains which would mean taking to the streets helping out those who have lost all hope giving of myself in their need I just want to give a part of me that I have not always been shown offer all I have within my heart the best feeling we could ever know Because life's not all about what you take but what you have to give not giving all you have would be a mistake and really is no way to live*
this is Mike's fabulous idea and he always comes up with something amazing!
LouiseMcKay
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Aug 14, 2014
Aug 14, 2014 at 1:14 PM UTC
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