When you read someone's story,
And you find there's space for improvement,
how 'bout filling the gaps yourself;
Rereading it the way you think it should be,
adding in the extra words you'd like to see.
With what is there and you already like,
Be kind enough to say.
Compliment the good in their work:
redemption's on it's way.
If you seek the light, and ignore the dark,
good will seem to overrule,
will be the righteous spark.
© J-d S. J
Aug 11, 2014
Aug 11, 2014 at 4:06 PM UTC
When you read someone's story,
And you find there's space for improvement,
how 'bout filling the gaps yourself;
Rereading it the way you think it should be,
adding in the extra words you'd like to see.
With what is there and you already like,
Be kind enough to say.
Compliment the good in their work:
redemption's on it's way.
If you seek the light, and ignore the dark,
good will seem to overrule,
will be the righteous spark.
© J-d S. J
I dont' really feel accustomed writting these sorts of ''angel''-better. poems, but i hope it's a 'great write' one.
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