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You wrote a poem that made me want to cry, a blue moon occasion of risk and shown feelings. A love poem in response would be too overdone for me and perhaps it'd seem an obligatory exchange. You know I love you but only so many lines can be written and I've run out of new words to excite you. If I could I'd just hold you to show how I feel, but I'll go slightly against my decision and write you a poem to thank you or at least acknowledge these feelings and then for once, I'll end up the awkward one.
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Aug 2, 2014
Aug 2, 2014 at 12:16 AM UTC
response to a love poem
You wrote a poem that made me want to cry, a blue moon occasion of risk and shown feelings. A love poem in response would be too overdone for me and perhaps it'd seem an obligatory exchange. You know I love you but only so many lines can be written and I've run out of new words to excite you. If I could I'd just hold you to show how I feel, but I'll go slightly against my decision and write you a poem to thank you or at least acknowledge these feelings and then for once, I'll end up the awkward one.
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Aug 2, 2014
Aug 2, 2014 at 12:16 AM UTC
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