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I speak to you now, former wife, another time, another place I don’t know where you are, where you’ve been these forty years But in that year, that sultry, passioned summer in Japan twelve months past exchanging wedding bands, we rode the train in to Tokyo every day from Nerimaku at the city’s edge, apartment on that narrow street, floor two, and no A.C. only a floor fan to blow the steamy air, but the *** was great, the sleeping not so much and you in your green forties style patterned dress, mid-length would often melt my heart, Remember, if you hear me, that as time to come home neared we were favored by an Imperial Palace gardens private tour from a friendly diplomat, how we made the connection I forget unless you, my dark-eyed twenty four, might remember I’m not likely to find out, and does it matter? He proudly showed us small silver waterfalls catch light over well- placed rocks, the full ferns lush, and roses and lavender the best of what was left of manicured flowers, I held your hand, in this seeming almost the perfect ending To six weeks of endless interviewing, I was so glad to have you there, law and grad student couple walking with our grey haired friend, an austral early evening breeze brought kind relief, the blessing that can come with late August’s setting sun, our host pointed to tiny flecks of red and yellow almost imperceptible on the vast sweet-gums we passed observing that the Japanese revered the sight-- this time of year as if anticipation of the coming season were sweeter than the fall itself, And I have never forgotten that revelation And I have never forgotten the fleeting smile in your brown eyes in that long green moment of the western sky.
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Jul 29, 2014
Jul 29, 2014 at 4:10 AM UTC
1975: Japanese Imperial Gardens in Late August
I speak to you now, former wife, another time, another place I don’t know where you are, where you’ve been these forty years But in that year, that sultry, passioned summer in Japan twelve months past exchanging wedding bands, we rode the train in to Tokyo every day from Nerimaku at the city’s edge, apartment on that narrow street, floor two, and no A.C. only a floor fan to blow the steamy air, but the *** was great, the sleeping not so much and you in your green forties style patterned dress, mid-length would often melt my heart, Remember, if you hear me, that as time to come home neared we were favored by an Imperial Palace gardens private tour from a friendly diplomat, how we made the connection I forget unless you, my dark-eyed twenty four, might remember I’m not likely to find out, and does it matter? He proudly showed us small silver waterfalls catch light over well- placed rocks, the full ferns lush, and roses and lavender the best of what was left of manicured flowers, I held your hand, in this seeming almost the perfect ending To six weeks of endless interviewing, I was so glad to have you there, law and grad student couple walking with our grey haired friend, an austral early evening breeze brought kind relief, the blessing that can come with late August’s setting sun, our host pointed to tiny flecks of red and yellow almost imperceptible on the vast sweet-gums we passed observing that the Japanese revered the sight-- this time of year as if anticipation of the coming season were sweeter than the fall itself, And I have never forgotten that revelation And I have never forgotten the fleeting smile in your brown eyes in that long green moment of the western sky.
I like to go back to specific years of my life and zero in on an event that has lodged in my brain, allow it "out", see if it breathes, see if it touches Another.
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Jul 29, 2014
Jul 29, 2014 at 4:10 AM UTC
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