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the back of your truck was painted a brick red, with the previous blue showing through the cracked paint. I remember the drive up to the top of the hill with you Bon Iver playing softly on the radio as you grabbed my hand singing me the words to Skinny Love and even though the parts of me weren’t skinny you loved me anyway. We reached the top of the hill, and everything around us was dark the moon was new, the sky blackened like a bruise the car lights shut off and I jump out of the cab "too short for trucks" I murmur I rub my eyes to look up at the sky and gasp stars freckle the once black sky, casting a luminescent glow over the hills and on your face twinkling in your eyes and I remember thinking how beautiful you were that night. You pull all of the blankets you brought out of the back seat and begin forming a makeshift mattress in the bed of your truck I watch you in awe watch the muscles in your arm contract as you work hard to make this night perfect for me. "I love you, you know that, right?" I whisper to you you lean over the edge and kiss my lips and say "I know". Helping me into the truck I find my favorite blanket the plaid one with the wine stain from late night endeavors with you and wrap myself tight you wriggle your way in with me, throwing another over us and I look up amazement finds my eyes and my mouth is agape but you don’t see it I look over to you and see you gawking at me I whisper what, and shuffle your hair and you smile coyly "The stars pale in comparison to the beauty that lies next to me" I grab his face and find his lips kissing him over and over somewhere in between kisses and stargazing we find each other half naked in the back of your truck and I’ve never felt so alive.
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Jul 28, 2014
Jul 28, 2014 at 12:53 AM UTC
Nostalgia Trip
the back of your truck was painted a brick red, with the previous blue showing through the cracked paint. I remember the drive up to the top of the hill with you Bon Iver playing softly on the radio as you grabbed my hand singing me the words to Skinny Love and even though the parts of me weren’t skinny you loved me anyway. We reached the top of the hill, and everything around us was dark the moon was new, the sky blackened like a bruise the car lights shut off and I jump out of the cab "too short for trucks" I murmur I rub my eyes to look up at the sky and gasp stars freckle the once black sky, casting a luminescent glow over the hills and on your face twinkling in your eyes and I remember thinking how beautiful you were that night. You pull all of the blankets you brought out of the back seat and begin forming a makeshift mattress in the bed of your truck I watch you in awe watch the muscles in your arm contract as you work hard to make this night perfect for me. "I love you, you know that, right?" I whisper to you you lean over the edge and kiss my lips and say "I know". Helping me into the truck I find my favorite blanket the plaid one with the wine stain from late night endeavors with you and wrap myself tight you wriggle your way in with me, throwing another over us and I look up amazement finds my eyes and my mouth is agape but you don’t see it I look over to you and see you gawking at me I whisper what, and shuffle your hair and you smile coyly "The stars pale in comparison to the beauty that lies next to me" I grab his face and find his lips kissing him over and over somewhere in between kisses and stargazing we find each other half naked in the back of your truck and I’ve never felt so alive.
More like a short story kinda thing... but still. enjoy.
emily-clairmont
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Jul 28, 2014
Jul 28, 2014 at 12:53 AM UTC
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