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ships roll in the night pass each other like strangers on the street, we wave last night felt like all the times I had forgotten or fallen short were released into the starry night sky or maybe into the waves like wavering wishes, we laughed is it trite to say we did it because we were young? the night was alive with the rest of our lives and I know that this morning you are all in cars, old homes, and listening to your parents tell you they can't trust you anymore- but I hope you don't forget the friendships forged over moving bodies and songs we sung along to loudly and I hope you remember what it feels like to be young and capable of big mistakes and mysteries I hope you remember the stars, we looked I promise to not forget, these moments are fleeting and happen so sporadically that I must ingrain the way his eyes shone into my memory; I'll keep the laughter like a memory box in my heart, we loved real, young love that tastes like melted ice cream and a salty ocean kiss on old freshmen scars, it was a love that held each other's hands and giggled in harmony, we sailed into the horizon with freedom on the tip of our tongues and our back to the towns we came from, the boys, the girls that broke our hearts, the time that we thought about dying- no we were flying in the breeze, I promise you, we danced.
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Jul 27, 2014
Jul 27, 2014 at 4:25 PM UTC
we danced.
ships roll in the night pass each other like strangers on the street, we wave last night felt like all the times I had forgotten or fallen short were released into the starry night sky or maybe into the waves like wavering wishes, we laughed is it trite to say we did it because we were young? the night was alive with the rest of our lives and I know that this morning you are all in cars, old homes, and listening to your parents tell you they can't trust you anymore- but I hope you don't forget the friendships forged over moving bodies and songs we sung along to loudly and I hope you remember what it feels like to be young and capable of big mistakes and mysteries I hope you remember the stars, we looked I promise to not forget, these moments are fleeting and happen so sporadically that I must ingrain the way his eyes shone into my memory; I'll keep the laughter like a memory box in my heart, we loved real, young love that tastes like melted ice cream and a salty ocean kiss on old freshmen scars, it was a love that held each other's hands and giggled in harmony, we sailed into the horizon with freedom on the tip of our tongues and our back to the towns we came from, the boys, the girls that broke our hearts, the time that we thought about dying- no we were flying in the breeze, I promise you, we danced.
is this what closure feels like
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Jul 27, 2014
Jul 27, 2014 at 4:25 PM UTC
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