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I'm drowning in an ocean, One that use to be blue and smooth, It's now getting dark and choppy, And I have everything to lose. The ocean is consuming me, Leaving scars on my heart, I'm being pulled deeper every minuet, I'd get out now if I were smart. If I swim I can make it back, I can still see the light, But this ocean feels like home, Everything still feels right. There's a chance this storm will pass, And everything will be fine, But if it doesn't pass soon, I'll be swept up on the shore line. Do I stay where I feel at home, Take a risk and stay in case there's something I can find, Or heed the warning, And leave this ocean behind?
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Jul 25, 2014
Jul 25, 2014 at 8:20 PM UTC
The Ocean
I'm drowning in an ocean, One that use to be blue and smooth, It's now getting dark and choppy, And I have everything to lose. The ocean is consuming me, Leaving scars on my heart, I'm being pulled deeper every minuet, I'd get out now if I were smart. If I swim I can make it back, I can still see the light, But this ocean feels like home, Everything still feels right. There's a chance this storm will pass, And everything will be fine, But if it doesn't pass soon, I'll be swept up on the shore line. Do I stay where I feel at home, Take a risk and stay in case there's something I can find, Or heed the warning, And leave this ocean behind?
A metaphor for my love.
savannah-bean
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Jul 25, 2014
Jul 25, 2014 at 8:20 PM UTC
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