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ashes fell like snow drifting down aimlessly silently one landed in her hair but her eyes were fixed on the fire a great rushing crackling tortured sound as the building burned we could only stand and watch can still feel its heat on my face years pass with the seasons laying a great drift of leaves and tangle of vines on the ruins sticking up out of the rough sea of dead debris the twisted remains of a child's school desk the frame of it jutting out of the snow melting in the spring breeze a muted shout of metal the jungle gym overtaken by weeds and the swings just a rusted frame i clamber up the top to see the vista but only gain another perplexing view of ashen earth we walk down the broken path to the small house its broken window a haven for a thrush and nestled in its brick doorway a rusty clowns head battered and leaning over the grin lost in reddish decay we sit in the room we love in the small broken house really no more than a child's playhouse while the summer air gathers in close to us thick and filled with heavy summer scents the sun piercing the room like a hot razorblade she wont look at me only sits mumbling a song unrecognized till the words slip clear of old nursery rhyme i fear for her fragile sanity's she unbuttons her shirt sweat pours from her like spring rain she finally looks at me and with a vacant diabolical tone tells me she wants to hurt me in ways no-one else can unhinged as dusk litters the field we come to stand where we stood that night come to relive once more our thoughts and words as we watched it burn symbolically i place a small grey paper in her hair for the ashes that fell like tears symbolically she raises a single forlorn cry asking that i save someone but there is no one to be saved we are a lifetime too late symbolically we weep the twisted iron in the rubble rebuffs our desire for comfort the leaden sky denies our desire to close this terrible thing leave it behind as nights restless hand pushes us back to the small house she takes my hand silently forgiving us both for having only been children when our world burned to the ground
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Jul 19, 2014
Jul 19, 2014 at 1:09 PM UTC
quaker ridge road
ashes fell like snow drifting down aimlessly silently one landed in her hair but her eyes were fixed on the fire a great rushing crackling tortured sound as the building burned we could only stand and watch can still feel its heat on my face years pass with the seasons laying a great drift of leaves and tangle of vines on the ruins sticking up out of the rough sea of dead debris the twisted remains of a child's school desk the frame of it jutting out of the snow melting in the spring breeze a muted shout of metal the jungle gym overtaken by weeds and the swings just a rusted frame i clamber up the top to see the vista but only gain another perplexing view of ashen earth we walk down the broken path to the small house its broken window a haven for a thrush and nestled in its brick doorway a rusty clowns head battered and leaning over the grin lost in reddish decay we sit in the room we love in the small broken house really no more than a child's playhouse while the summer air gathers in close to us thick and filled with heavy summer scents the sun piercing the room like a hot razorblade she wont look at me only sits mumbling a song unrecognized till the words slip clear of old nursery rhyme i fear for her fragile sanity's she unbuttons her shirt sweat pours from her like spring rain she finally looks at me and with a vacant diabolical tone tells me she wants to hurt me in ways no-one else can unhinged as dusk litters the field we come to stand where we stood that night come to relive once more our thoughts and words as we watched it burn symbolically i place a small grey paper in her hair for the ashes that fell like tears symbolically she raises a single forlorn cry asking that i save someone but there is no one to be saved we are a lifetime too late symbolically we weep the twisted iron in the rubble rebuffs our desire for comfort the leaden sky denies our desire to close this terrible thing leave it behind as nights restless hand pushes us back to the small house she takes my hand silently forgiving us both for having only been children when our world burned to the ground
mark-john-junor-1
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Jul 19, 2014
Jul 19, 2014 at 1:09 PM UTC
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