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Gather around and hear me preach. Open your eyes and see me teach 'bout a guy and girl about fifty each who to each other the life they leech Of so called love they built a life two chidlren a home barely a strife. But a silent intruder an unseen knife would come in between this man and wife The love they shared was nowhere to see when distractions ran out and pride ran free, not even their child's heartbroken plea could melt the ice between he and she Some years passed of this icecold fight they started to move avoiding their sight no talking or sharing less turn on their spite their children ignoring it all out of fright But they stayed together in good times and bad even though in most of them someone got mad their children learned how to be  good lads but also found out that love's really sad The message here is that where love starts it wont grow and continue without work from its parts Learn form this couple and their hatred darts In the end they left four broken  hearts In the end they left four broken hearts.
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Jul 6, 2014
Jul 6, 2014 at 11:59 AM UTC
Four Broken Hearts
Gather around and hear me preach. Open your eyes and see me teach 'bout a guy and girl about fifty each who to each other the life they leech Of so called love they built a life two chidlren a home barely a strife. But a silent intruder an unseen knife would come in between this man and wife The love they shared was nowhere to see when distractions ran out and pride ran free, not even their child's heartbroken plea could melt the ice between he and she Some years passed of this icecold fight they started to move avoiding their sight no talking or sharing less turn on their spite their children ignoring it all out of fright But they stayed together in good times and bad even though in most of them someone got mad their children learned how to be  good lads but also found out that love's really sad The message here is that where love starts it wont grow and continue without work from its parts Learn form this couple and their hatred darts In the end they left four broken  hearts In the end they left four broken hearts.
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26/Costa Rican
Jul 6, 2014
Jul 6, 2014 at 11:59 AM UTC
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