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What frail creatures we men are made from sinew, muscle and pride Thinking we can conquer the world for the woman who sits by our side All is brash, gall and bravado with such a carefree debonair Taunting those who test our mettle intimidating all who dare A young man thinks himself gifted to hold sway and folly so near Injure his pride and you will find that he becomes someone to fear A man is nothing without pride it is the food that feeds his soul Desired respect of fellows becomes his sole life’s aim and goal The handsome woman of his dreams is she that realizes this flaw Playing to his strength and weakness by pretending she never saw To that woman he grants comfort strong arms forever hold her tight Their truth of heart is not broken whenever she is out of sight The reason men are unfaithful they behave only by your side Has little to do with temper and everything to do with pride If you wish for a happy home a man who's strait forward and true Just play host to his foolish pride and he will be loyal to you Tate Original with pictures and music is here http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/aristate/482949/
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Jun 5, 2014
Jun 5, 2014 at 11:51 PM UTC
Foolish Pride
What frail creatures we men are made from sinew, muscle and pride Thinking we can conquer the world for the woman who sits by our side All is brash, gall and bravado with such a carefree debonair Taunting those who test our mettle intimidating all who dare A young man thinks himself gifted to hold sway and folly so near Injure his pride and you will find that he becomes someone to fear A man is nothing without pride it is the food that feeds his soul Desired respect of fellows becomes his sole life’s aim and goal The handsome woman of his dreams is she that realizes this flaw Playing to his strength and weakness by pretending she never saw To that woman he grants comfort strong arms forever hold her tight Their truth of heart is not broken whenever she is out of sight The reason men are unfaithful they behave only by your side Has little to do with temper and everything to do with pride If you wish for a happy home a man who's strait forward and true Just play host to his foolish pride and he will be loyal to you Tate Original with pictures and music is here http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/aristate/482949/
It is almost comical to me just how naive we men are about our own weakness. So I wrote this for the women to understand what it is that drives men. For the men this is no surprise it is what men are taught from cradle to the grave.
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Jun 5, 2014
Jun 5, 2014 at 11:51 PM UTC
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