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I feel her grip fading, slowly is she leaving, hopping off the ice. She says it didn't go very well, but I couldn't say. Speechless, because she was so pretty, impressed, because she was so talented, touched, because she looked divine. It hurts to think about it, to accept she'll never be mine. Time will pass and she'll forget, we'll drift apart like we never met, to me it's more than sight, I have dared to love her with all my might and cried because it didn't work. I don't know what to change this time, choice, my appearance, my act, my voice, my talks, my jokes or walks. What did I do wrong, this time.
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May 30, 2014
May 30, 2014 at 2:35 PM UTC
She skates
I feel her grip fading, slowly is she leaving, hopping off the ice. She says it didn't go very well, but I couldn't say. Speechless, because she was so pretty, impressed, because she was so talented, touched, because she looked divine. It hurts to think about it, to accept she'll never be mine. Time will pass and she'll forget, we'll drift apart like we never met, to me it's more than sight, I have dared to love her with all my might and cried because it didn't work. I don't know what to change this time, choice, my appearance, my act, my voice, my talks, my jokes or walks. What did I do wrong, this time.
She's gone
Daan
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Belgian
May 30, 2014
May 30, 2014 at 2:35 PM UTC
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