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i think you're perfect but i don't think we would be your personality is softer but your feelings and actions are much harsher if i were raised a little less like my mother wanted me to be showing me what not to do as she placed the cigarette between her lips maybe we would have been more alike i know your internal struggles and feelings all too well as they are ones i've experienced before and experience now although your friends problems seem all too real as compared to mine which are all in my head
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Apr 29, 2014
Apr 29, 2014 at 1:32 AM UTC
nervous feelings and the smell of cigarettes
i think you're perfect but i don't think we would be your personality is softer but your feelings and actions are much harsher if i were raised a little less like my mother wanted me to be showing me what not to do as she placed the cigarette between her lips maybe we would have been more alike i know your internal struggles and feelings all too well as they are ones i've experienced before and experience now although your friends problems seem all too real as compared to mine which are all in my head
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Apr 29, 2014
Apr 29, 2014 at 1:32 AM UTC
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