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If I were to elicit success's embodiment And to feel it's enrapture, like sin It's touch, coarse as salt to the fingertips? Would it smell like a rose on the wind? To risk, for a shared surreptitiousness That very boldness independence empowers, to instead announce allegiance to the flock of the age When drinking after hours Should it matter on the stage... As a coy rebuttal to loneliness In prioritizing what you need, by finding "circuitous" after a dip in the thesaurus for describing a sentence about trees ("When, obviously, it's actually describing something...far more potent...than any mere tree.") ...what fails to show up on the page? Such is the world that Art wanders into All big gestures 'round a clattering din ....but instead, "Success" has meant to me A home in my arms And she feels like a world resting beneath my chin A thought that cancels out Art's disappointments ...And her breath is a rose on the wind.
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Apr 22, 2014
Apr 22, 2014 at 5:58 AM UTC
Success
If I were to elicit success's embodiment And to feel it's enrapture, like sin It's touch, coarse as salt to the fingertips? Would it smell like a rose on the wind? To risk, for a shared surreptitiousness That very boldness independence empowers, to instead announce allegiance to the flock of the age When drinking after hours Should it matter on the stage... As a coy rebuttal to loneliness In prioritizing what you need, by finding "circuitous" after a dip in the thesaurus for describing a sentence about trees ("When, obviously, it's actually describing something...far more potent...than any mere tree.") ...what fails to show up on the page? Such is the world that Art wanders into All big gestures 'round a clattering din ....but instead, "Success" has meant to me A home in my arms And she feels like a world resting beneath my chin A thought that cancels out Art's disappointments ...And her breath is a rose on the wind.
"Circuitous" is a synonym for "Complex" -which I found in a thesaurus. In case you were wondering.
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Apr 22, 2014
Apr 22, 2014 at 5:58 AM UTC
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